Griffonstone is finally getting a much-needed makeover. Some of the buildings have collapsed, they need to have a stable way of getting food aside from Gilda's bakery, the whole place is just a mess. There are some ponies that have planned on helping, but still, some of the students have volunteered to restore the fallen kingdom.
Things aren't looking very good though. A gang of griffons has kidnapped some of the creatures that were planning on restoring the kingdom and the map has called the Young Six to rescue them. Gilda also decides to tag along, partly because she's worried about what will happen to the students and also because she doesn't want her home's reputation to be any worse.
Chapters (8)
Ooh! Great start! Can't wait for more!
awesome chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter
Awww I still so much aww when they are together like that 😍😍
Oh geez you have to say that
I've always would love to see my oc pony turn into other creatures
Whoa the tree of Harmony really upgrade nice
Oh my God those kobold really killed a dragon 😰
Ok wow this is a good start the story so it looks like they made announcements they are fixing up griffonstone but unfortunately gallus and the rest of the griffon are not to thrill about it but somehow they get a couple griffon and the creatures to help out and Applejack and her students are on there way there meanwhile the young six are enjoying the day but the tree of Harmony summoned them but not in the castle but the treehouse and surprising they got there own map which that's pretty cool so there location is griffonstone once they made it there it was more disaster then ever and they found Applejack glida and grandpa Gruff and told them they where attack by a gang called gold gang and they kidnap Gabby and some of the griffon and hippogriff students and it looks like they have another creature a kobold and it looks like the one who got away and even hearing about a force training and even killing which the young six have to save them so they went back to Ponyville prepare for the journey and save there friends oh boy I wonder what's going to happen next guess we'll find out next time
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You are allowed to use more than one sentence, you know?
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Why is there a limit here all of sudden?
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? what? I literally said the exact opposite. There is no limit. You ARE ALLOWED to use more than one sentence. What are you talking about?
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I don't know your the one who said it I'm just makes comments that's all so I don't understand what your talking about
Ooh! So pressure points don't work on changelings...must be the shapeshifting ability or something. It was pretty funny to hear Pharynx respond with "that tickles!" to it, anyway. Though I wonder who'll find the students first, Gilda or the other scouts...
Either way, great chapter!
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Hello, PonyPixel’s editor here, I’m glad you’re enjoying it ^^
So far, it was going well. Stay tuned for more ^^
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I will! You're doing a great job by the way, both of you are
Ohhh he mention about the alternate universe I'm sure he has a lot of PTSD from that experience
Griffonstone
sorry when I saw that sentence I have to 😅
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Oh, sorry. I forgot to check it.
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That's OK man
Ok so it looks like the young six journey is be go to rescue their friends from the gold gang but it looks like they stopped for a while and gallus is worried about the others after that experience of that alternate universe I wouldn't blame him to be worried but it looks like they spotted a creature a camel name Jerick he was a little suspicious of the creature has mostly the Griffin and the hippogriff but they mean no harm so he offered them to stay for a while but until the Airship came around and it's the Gold gang and it turns out to be there spot and worried they will get caught the kids fought off the Griffins and it looks like they say one Griffin name Gale so they're using the Airship since Ocellus can transform until one of the Griffins they can use the airship meanwhile the other leaders a worrying about the missing children so they spread out to the desert but they got ambushed by ninja kolba and it looks like Gilda went ahead which that was a bad idea because she has no idea where she's going I just hope she can survive the desert this is pretty exciting I wonder what's going to happen next guess we'll find out next time
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If anything, it just confirms he’s ticklish.
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Yes!
I hope it's a good one glida because you'll need it
Oh boy this is not good so it looks like the young six got them self caught by the gold gang now they are inside the base and found the missing kids but now how they going to escape and stop the gold gang but it looks like some of the creatures feels guilty about this maybe some can help the young six and it looks like glida finally made it to the Village where Jerick lives now I wonder how they can do this I guess we'll find out next time
Oh boy, what are you planning, Gilda?
Editor here.
Forgive me for adding vulgarity here. I needed Gilda to show her anger.
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I can't blame her when it comes to the safety of her griffon kids I would be very angry as well
Ooh! This is getting good! Great job!
Ohhhh why do I have a feeling something is Big going to happen here and what kind of news is he talking about
So apparently Gallus and the other is from up in the cage except for smolder are going to trained for fighting and of course Gideon is not lighting them up while sandbar and yona still trying to figure out how to get them self out of there they had to work countless hours to get about crystals and everything and it looks like glida finally made it but in Disguise as well but it looks like Glynn was asking Gallas for blood sample and right now I wonder what the heck is he saying to gadget about this news well I guess we'll find out next time
Before I read this, I must know: Why would they do that?
Seriously what did he see in the paper that he doesn't what Gadget to find out
“…Who’s your son?” Gilda asked.
“Gwen, I can explain. One of the griffons that we brought the past few days… Well… the ones that Guy had brought back… He’s… Gideon cannot know about it.”
“You mean about Gallus?”
Wow oh my goodness I didn't see that coming
Ok wow things are really getting intense now so it looks like gallus and silverstream they got some stuff out of that situation but there's still in training and Gilda and Ocellus I still trying to figure out to get everybody out of this place but it looks like Ocellus knows a certain creature she can actually trust a kobold name Quartz doesn't want to be here anymore and it looks like he knows to Griffin's who doesn't want to be here as well speaking of them glida want to check with Glynn that she's okay but when she saw the result notes and that blew my freaking mind apparently Gallus parents are Glynn and Gadget oh my gosh that's what happened to his parents but anyway glida ask them to escape with them as well meanwhile down in the mine shaft it looks like a pony named sky wants to get out as well but Bill the Minotaur doesn't want to get in trouble but he just witnessed that sandbar took the blame maybe he can still help us hopefully so now Ocellus and the others coming up with a plan to escape and rescue the other prisoners and the students and it looks like the escape plan is on the go I wonder if they can get some self out of the situation I guess we'll find out next time
Ooh! I can't wait to see more, great chapter!
Oh man I feel like they're just killing smolder slowly and painful way just hang in there smolder don't give up
On the way back to base, he met up with one of the crewmates about it. “How much are we getting paid?” she questioned. “You’ve been a part of this team longer than I have! You should be swimming in bits!”
“Then how come I’ve barely been given a single coin from Gideon?” The two griffons were starting to feel like they had been tricked for a long time.
It looks like things are setting in motion here
Uh oh it looks like somebody is trying to figure her out this is not good
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Do you mean like physical
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I can fix it.
Oh shoot!!!!!!! 😱
Oh boy this is really getting intense right now so it looks like Gilda Ocellus and the other Rebellion two Griffons and a kobold plans are on the go and Ocellus gave sandbar and yona the plan what they're going to do so why now everybody has to figure out how they're going to get them self out of here but it looks like the Crystal Gems that almost exploded might come in handy so that's another points but it looks like they're getting a little suspicious with "Gwen" and it looks like one of the Ninjas gave the information to Gideon now he got glida and everything just fell apart Ocellus needs to warn them about it this is really not good at all what are they going to do I guess we'll find out next time
Oh no, Gilda!
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That Griffin is so stupid how in the world did he fell for it I mean I get it money is money but he should have see it's a trap but probably it's a good thing at this point
Ah dang it we forgot about the ninjas spying on them
[quote]Gallus still didn’t understand until Gideon spelled it out. "Think about it, Gallus. You’ve made a bad decision, and Glynn has made a bad decision too. Like father, like son.” Gallus then connected the dots, so did Gadet. Once they figured it out, Gallus was in full shock, especially Gadget.
You forgot the G in her name
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Sorry. I keep forgetting.