While providing support for the Elements of Harmony as they go up against a magical anomaly, Midnight Blossom and her team of thestrals find a strange stallion in the forest. His loud and proud ways are antithetical to their stealth mission, no matter how insistent he is that he knows the world-ending, all-powerful wizard they're hunting on a personal level.
This story takes place in the RGRE (Reversed Gender Roles Equestria) universe. I originally wrote it in greentext, but altered it to prose for FIMfiction. This version will be updated alongside its greentext counterpart.
Chapters (7)
Ahh i was wondering when this was gonna be added into here. I have read most of it from ponepaste and hoped it would be added. Now it is and i can read it almost at every update it gets.
Im curious and am always on the look out for different ways of writing...Do you find writing in greentext easier then typical prose? For that matter...is it rather different?
Thank You for your time.
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It's pretty much the same difficulty-wise. What matters is actually writing, regardless of style
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I DONT EVEN KNKW WHATS GOING ON BUT I LOVE IT! I wanna see the mane six burn in hell tho.
This is my new favorite thing on this site lmao
pics?
I need more. I need you to stimulate my eyeballs with your screen words right the fridge now.
This is getting interesting.
A bit of clarification: this story isn't canceled. I'm just focusing on my other stuff at the moment. It will be continued soon, probably in a few months
Perfect like real soldier
Hehheh the scout parts really funny
I like this story already
That's one hell of a first chapter though, soldier messing with the locals is gonna be a riot
*increasingly insane cackling*
French bashing ? C'mon it 2021 already...
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ikr, I'm surprised it took this long to get back into style!
Shit, as soon as it got to the cardboard cutout I was pretty sure it was Jane. Good to know that even after years since my last OVERTIME I still remember the characters
kinda sweet he made that picture the source of his power
I literally almost lost my sh*t holding in my laughter so I don't wake everyone in the house.
You sir\ ma'am have made my day
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“A few months” huh.
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I was wrong
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Don’t worry, the last chapter was as good an ending as any.
...I need more. I NEED more. I NEED MORE! I NEED MORE! I NEED ALLLLL OF IT! IM ADDICTED, AND THE HIGH IS CRASHING AND I NEEED MOARRRR! *Curls up in the corner shaking*
Plz continue!
This is a rampaging carousel of tonal whiplash. Somehow it works.
One moment you have team fortress 2 meme-ery and fourth-wall-breaking second-person narrative, the next moment you have a serious-as-cancer widower confronting psychologically crippling gender norms and going through a mental health crisis.
These two ingredients from opposite ends of a spectrum make the sort of forbidden pie you could only get away with in fanfiction. An editor from the professional writing world would slap you upside the head and tell you to pick one or the other, but not both. You somehow pull them both off well and I look forward to the next chapter!
i remember laughing my ass off to gmod tf2 animations on youtube more than 10 years ago.
now i'm reading pony fiction and i've noticed that almost every fic that soldier is in manages to make me laugh my ass off.
some things just never change, huh?
This has been a goofy ass story so far, and yet several times you've played it entirely seriously even with soldier running the damn show. Good on you.
Is this going to update, it looks interesting!
Update When?
Man, found this story after rekindling my love for TF2 stuff, and I really do hope you come back to the story.
Really wanna see how you'll handle not only the Court Scene, Trial, Verdict, but also how the Ponyville arrangement would be, and if Spy's words and Soldier's new connections will leave him when presented with the chance of returning to the TF Universe.
I think pinkie's doing fine