nice work

Celestia sits up in bed after hearing the story and pulls him into a close hug saying, "Don't even consider offering her your life, I would rather you repay the debt by conceiving a child with her instead. With that matter settled, let us begin trying for a child of our own. After all, you have to the end of spring to make me with foal, and six years to try for our first."

Um, WTF Celestia???!!! What is with you and children??!!

Plus, why do you think this Griffon even want her father's murderer's child????!!! Just why??!!

Speaking about that? Why doesn't Celestia take care of this stupid Griffon bitch herself?! I mean, she SHOULDN'T let anybody or everyone try to hurt or kill her Jack! Not on her watch!!!!

She gets a little closer to him and raises her voice saying, "Do you remember the female griffon that you gave a family portrait to that was in a silver frame, that was my mother. I was there when you sank my father's ship, I was hovering in the sky watching over my mother when she went to go claim it from you. I hold you responsible for my family because when you attacked Griffonstone, my mother and my uncle lost their lives and left me as the one responsible to provide for the twins that survived your attack. You are also responsible for the princess's newfound freedom when you beheaded her father before her, you ruined her life and drove her to come here to work in a brothel, hoping to forget seeing her father's head stop before her paws. So Captain Jack Sparrow, Lord of the Celestial Sea, you have a debt of blood to settle with me. I shall give you time to reach a decision, return here when you have found a way to satisfy the debt."

Are you f******* serious?! This again?! Why do you make Jack's life a bit harder?!

Besides, they are in a WAR!!! And if I remember, the Griffons are the enemy, and Jack only just stop and won the war by Celestia's request.

Jack sighs and looks away briefly and gazes into her pain-filled eyes saying, "A blood debt means that no amount of coin or treasure will appease it, the only way to satisfy it is by paying the price with my blood. I shall honor this and return when I have reached a solution to the blood debt, might six years be too long to decide such payment?"

If it were up to me. I just shoot her, and be done with it.

Galanda nods her head at what he asks, saying, "Do not forget about the deadline or I shall hunt you down and take your life as payment." She removes one of her feathers and makes a small cut on her hand. She places the tip of the feather against it to stain it red, then hands it over to him saying, "You have six years from today to make a decision, Lord of the Celestial Sea."

BITCH!!!!! You have to go though Celestia herself to mess with her pirate!!!!

Wait a second? If Jack and his crew will eventually get a longer life span or even have "immortality"? Enough to be in the present day of the MLP series. Then doesn't this "blood deal" be a bit pointless anyway in the end? If Jack all has to do is outlive her, and her bloodline or something like that??!!

Magnificent chapter and beautyful worldbuilding. Love you'r story ♡