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nice work
I'd like him to see him be honest with her at some point other then that keep up the good work
As for that Lullaby, it is supposed to follow the music from a song in The Witcher called Lullaby of Woe. Just replace the original lyrics with the ones in the story and it will sound better.
Noice 👌 can't wait to see another chapter
Nice, this is really good. Hope Jack and Celestia remain friends, maybe even more than friends.
Nice, but entire encounter with Celly feels forced. A lot. She's 800 years old ruler of a nation and then suddenly breaks down into tears in front of a complete stranger. And not just that, but asks him to help her rescue her sister and apparently have an idea where to begin. If she already knew then what kept her from doing so for 600 years and why ask a complete stranger for help? And she even agreed to pay for all his expenses without having any idea how he could be even remotely useful.
Bloody hell... Jack negativ Karma is a currency here it seems... Damn... He must be bloody rich... Fate liked to cash out!