ExplicitEscritoire
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Not being a n00b but wut does marehood mean?
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Marehood is the ponified version of "womanhood", which basically refers to the vagina. So basically, the marehood is where the penis goes.
A couple fixes I noticed (because I'm a grammar nazi
):
- I couldn't rush forward
- and I was pushed into a corner
^ Two spaces here, need one deleted
Enjoyed the story, was pretty well written, and had very few errors
1239289
You should have seen it before my proofreader got his hooves on it <3 I don't make a lot of mistakes, but he catches pretty much all of them.
1245115 Personally, I obsess over my story being perfect
. I spend hours making sure it's just right, and torture myself until there's nothing I can see that's wrong with the story 
. It's probably why I take so long with my story updates, even when they're just over 1k words 
. 
. Two OC's is definitely 20% cooler than anything most clopfics have as a base 
But again, pretty good story; at least it wasn't the typical "OC goes and screws a member of the Mane 6, or one of the princesses"
liked..... that is all