This was good shit. Well done.

Ah, a lovely end for the lovely couple, glad it worked out for them. Honestly I don't particularly care for hypnosis in media (and I hate it in real life) but to me this was more of a story than a hyno-clop as you called it, and I enjoyed this story very much. + Luna emote

A really beautiful bit of work, very enjoyable. Excellent job, especially if this is your first venture into this subgenre.

This was really excellent! As for the author note at the end, I'd believe that the deepest part of Celestia'sind really needed a vacation and this was the only way to make it happen.

I like that Luna wasn't just trying to ruin Celestia as revenge or something. Most stories in this genre are all about ripping away someone's free will permanently and I hate it. I'm glad you took the route you did. Well done.

This was great, hope we get to see the wedding in the future sequel but if not then this was still great.

So glad I waited for this to wrap up before getting stuck in. Fantastic story, hottest thing I've read in a long while.

I'd love to see more mind control stories like this if you ever fancy writing another. Celestia is super fun to wear down and bring to heel, but why stop at just her :p

It'd be interesting if this were to get a sequel where Luna got controlled

This is pretty good but a bit more naughty detail and it could even better. If you ever want to try again I find the more naughty details the better personally.

As hypno-smut this is already excellent, but the actual writing is a step above. You've really got your prose and turns of phrase down pat!

This feels like a commissioned story.

As a gigantic hypno-fetishist (to the point where I was absentmindedly repeating my own mantras along with Celestia at one point), you did a fantastic job with this. The hypnosis is sexy without being too unrealistic, the magic is incorporated well, Celestia is adorable, and Luna’s thought processes are just deliciously relatable. I barely ever go for smut fics, but this one is more than worthy <3

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Thank you, I'm glad it turned out well.

What a great story. So sensual, intoxicating and erotic. It was a pleasure to read it, especially the third chapter, where Celestia finally allowed her secret instincts to come out and give herself to her sister, not even realizing that it was Luna who compelled her to do so. Thank you for a great fanfic, author.

Excellent story! Love the pacing and the style!