now lets see if all things fall into place.

This is fun.

Ooohhhh boy. Things are getting good, can’t wait for what comes next

I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

I am so stoked for the continuation of this :y

Can't wait for the next part!

I was worried their would be too little emphasis on the mind control or that it would rush to sex scenes, but so far I'm impressed. I wish there was more details on the dream brainwashing but this is covering months, to be fair.

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I was worried their would be too little emphasis on the mind control or that it would rush to sex scenes, but so far I'm impressed.

Part of my motive for writing this is my sadness that so many hypno stories go "Zap! You're hypnotized, let's have sex!" with me being much more a fan of the 'slow working down' stage of things. I'm happy I impressed.

The methodical approach is definitely a delight to read, more so by your solid grasp of pacing. The combination of narrative and sexy bits is perfect. I'm hoping you'll indulge some tests/training before going full on 'yes mistress'. Maybe a little risque fun/embarrassment in public, just to show how much Celestia trusts her.

Definitely enjoying this exploration of a more involved hypnotism process.

More, please.

Fantastic story and chapter. The dream scenes are really hot.

Love the slow burn!

Wow Luna you must've played Bioshock to know this and the phrase you use is "Dear Sister" reminds me of "Would you kindly" my my Luna you must be desperate to bed your sister that you had to copy a video game. And here i thought you would think of something original you're a thousand+ years old Princess surely you had time to think and plan things better than copying a video game you played Princess.

As to the author of this story great build up i look forward to the eventual payoff. Also to be clear i'm teasing the Princess Luna of your story not criticising you the author

How would this Luna react if celly was crushing on some pony.

Or some human