In a life full of choices, a reserved and distant Francis finds himself at a crossroads. Transfer to Equestria and live a life as a pony? Or stay on Earth and accept all that is uncertain? The decision will split his life in two and only through the flashing memories of the future can he ever be satisfied with what he is given.
But for now, all he can do is choose.
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First time ever writing a fanfic! Gotta say, it's been interesting taking an attempt, but I'm really glad I tried this out. Was a little stressful with the deadline and a school paper in the way, but I'm pretty satisfied. Perhaps I'd make some minor changes, but in the meantime, I'm happy it's here in the first place.
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This is a story style I haven't seen in this setting before. The what ifs. Well done and please keep it up. There can never be enough stories for FiO.
God-damn. Have you written for something else before? Fanfiction for a different series, original stories, anything? Because this is real good for a first time author.
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Oh my god, I really appreciate this! Glad you enjoyed it. I wrote Creepypasta in middle school and I have spent time over the years working on personal projects, but none of them have come to full fruition. I had never considered writing fanfiction before, so I think this is a testament to just how invested I've become in this fanbase again, and it was a nice break from what I'm currently working on, although I'm hoping to finish that at some point.
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Anticipate a full review of this story. :D
The yellow brick road meets the red brick road again. Neat.
FIRST TIME?!
I'm incredibly impressed at the caliber of your story. Your restraint in particular is inspired. Way to go!
Pretty good story, though I admit that I can’t follow the order of events or who’s perspective we’re following through it. I just read through the description again, so is this supposed to be the same character in both Equestria and on Earth, or are we following that first roommate throughout to the end?
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In scene #3, the story splits, the scenes alternating between whether Francis (the first roommate) decided to go into the game or not. So the first scene #4 follows one path, then the second #4 follows another, and so on. It can definitely be a bit confusing but I hope this cleared it up a little?