Impressive and it's loved!!! Thanks for the nice pic!!! :D

Well that escalated quickly. Still, interested to see where you take this. And bloody frak, you got done with this fast! ~With regards, the Current Student of the Second True Magic.

Vinyl/Octy ship? Okay, that's an instant like! Lets have a look at the story ....

Awesome! Keep it up!

Its a great (if short) start to the story. There are a few grammatical and spelling errors that I spotted, but overall its written well. I think you did a pretty good job getting into Vinyl's mind and writing out her thoughts. I'm a bit fan of the Octy/Vinyl ship because of the depth and complexity of their relationship ... seemingly complete irreconcilable opposites that see beyond each other's outer appearances/masks and develop an intimate and strong companionship. I see elements of that coming across in how Vinyl describes Octavia. I look foward to seeing were this leads.

I like where this is going.

E'nope.

so thats what Equestrian-human is.
Have a fav and a like. I can't wait for more.

1220984>>1220991>>1221351>>1222362>>1223419 Thank you all for such great support. Hope you all loved it as much as I loved writing it.

1225003 Tis the least I could do. On another note, where do you get these amazing pictures?! Do you do them yoursel/Know someone epic at drawing? We so need one when the rest of the Round are introduced. . . And these pictures certainly don't disappoint.

1225657 They're done by Johnjoseco, I ask him/her for the use of his'her pictures. So, I don't know JJ for personal use sadly. But I could probably commission work from him/her.

1225716 Interesting! That could work, that could work very nicely.

this is more like second person
this seems great so far, it has nice wording and flow
definitely looking forward to more

I hate not being able to send PMs on my Ps3. The screen just seems to be to small for it.

1227356 No harm no foul.

I know, but its just plain annoying. Messes with my game play as well. I need a new television set. . . Ohh well, perhaps this Christmas.

1225716>>1227356 okay but before i knew this i think i have him as a friend i might of deleted him tho i dont remember but i do remember playing with him

1227661 ...What?

Is this clop? I'm afraid to look.

1227744 Don't worry, just some adult material. No clopping. It's classy... In my opinion.

1227672 He's refering to the artist you mentioned. . . I think.

Awesome story,definitely waiting for more.

well, that first picture in the story itself really did it. No doubt, like, favorite, whatever it is, hands down. You are a good writer and you should feel good

You sire just made my life 20% fucking cooler.

Octavia is my new humanized crush. Sorry, Daring Do, but Octy is hot!

I am not usually one for humanized ponies, but this has piqued my interest, I see massive potential in this.
Thumbs up & follow :)

1227672simple he migght of been my friend but i dont remember but thats on the ps3 (notsure if you were talking about real life he mentioned ps3) also 1227748 SERIOUSLY YOU THINK jesus man do i confuse everyone with a simple sentence?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!!? TELL ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

That humanized Octavia is....

HOT DAMN <333333333

I bet this will be featured.

1228072 Fingers crossed...

1228053 Well, to be fair, you did leave out all the peroids. . . and commas. . . lets say you left out all the marks in general. To anyone, it looks confusing at first glance.

*reads description*
*skeptic face on*
*reads 1st chapter*
you werent kidding about these pictures
worst part about it is i wasnt actually planning to follow this
cuz it contains clop(i dont really follow clop-stories, but if i read clop, then they are usually the one shots)
but i find myself hooked

I'm intrigued. Kinda wish this was a longer chapter though. Very impressed with the picture, the artist does good work. Looking forward to the next few chapters.
Not quite mustache level, so settle for a yay.

*sees story*hmmm this cant be SO bad
*doesnt even read and looks at pic*...
*runs screaming out of thread*

after 5 mins:alright thats a pretty good story even i dont like humanized pony's

Nice work so far. Gotta admit, the pic is well done and worth at least a couple moustaches.

Let's see how this goes.

interesting story... look forward to more chapters. However not fully liking the first POV but still will keep reading

1228831 It shifts.

Tavi/scratch ship with clop and a promising storyline? Fav'd

Humanized ponies? Meh...

A classic OctaScratch with comedy elements? Hmm... Maybe it's worth a shot...

Written by Overlord-Flinx? Insta-fave and thumbs up!

looks promising. faved.

Ahem... DAMN!
I look forward to whats next!
Keep at it!

"Baby, if I could rearrange the alphabet I would forget about you in a second. I just can't miss this opportunity to fix the disaster that is English linguistics."

(I mean we have THREE letters for 'c' sounds!)

1231795 ...I'm sorry, what?

1231816
...It's nothing. Just a joke about the title/that old pick up line.

Pictures with Octavia hotness?!

fc06.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2012/188/d/2/shut_up_and_take_my_money_by_mcsadat-d56cn0o.jpg

1220991
Sir or mam would you be looking for this meme
[img]anchorman-well-that-escalated-quickly[/img]

my story thoughts
Warning adult pictures
Pffff no pictures in literature
Reading
Reading
Read...... Saw Octavia half complete nude
Ohh so that's what it means well
(fave like) add one last meme
[img]dis-gun-be-gud[/img]

1245806 Twould be a sir.

1251291
Ok I didn't want to offend any pony
Damn spell check.

wierdly enough, i think the pic was overkill...
either way, very well written, can't wait to read more

i want more