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Movingtarget Productions


Northwest Ohio brony with a passion for cars and tech. Very rusty with me writing.

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CANCELED DUE TO WAY TOO MUCH CRITICISM

The typical HiE but a bit different, lets see how Thomas Matthew, a retired CEO for a major shipping company, can take Equestria (DO NOT POST IN RANDOM GROUPS PLEASE)

Special Thanks to Geo Breaker for letting me use his OC's
Click/tap here for Ebony and Lucky Spark's backstory

UPDATE: due to a new character, im putting in the 'sex' tag for light sex related talk/stuff

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 6 )

I'm gonna apologize right now for terrible paceing and length. Alot on my mind and school doesn't help.

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Get yourself an editor or use.... grammarly.

Oh, and make sure you can write the chapter longer than this. 1k words is fine but I remind you to write in 2k words in each chapter.

Protip: please don't do this thing. Click/tap here for Ebony and Lucky Spark's backstory

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yea yea. I use Grammarly but I don't shoot for 2k words, I end up pushing myself too hard to the point where I shut down.

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I hope you press the reset button :pinkiesad2:. But anway, if you deny to write 2k word, that ok but.....
This thing should in your fic not your blog.Click/tap here for Ebony and Lucky Spark's backstory

Are Geo Breaker's OCs the only OCs that don't belong to you that are going to appear in this story, or do you take offers from other writers?

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the OC's except Vic and Thomas are Geo's (Silver Sight on Discord) and I do have his permission to use them.

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