I read the first chapter. And the only criticism I have, is to have our OP Kitsune Character being a frickin Misanthrope.
Seriously? He does realize that NOT every Species in the Universe is "perfect". Heck, some are WAY Worse than Humanity ever could. Just ask the Villainous or Invading Genocidal Alien Fractions in Media.
Even Ponykind is not perfect either.
Just wait until you have to meet the Pony Noble A-Holes. And maybe Rainbow Dash or the other OOC Mane Five for being Xenophobic/Racist Bitch to you. 🙄
Plus, "Hairless Apes"? Really?! You might get Karma by having some Pony Jerks INSULT your Kitsune Form. And you can see how I feel, insulting our own Race ( Humanity). 🤦
What was the point to get across? Does he even change his mindset a little when he sees that Pony kind or other Races is NO Better than Humanity? I mean, Every Race is Grey. Humanity is NOT 100% Evil. And Ponykind or other Furry Races is NOT 100% Good Guys either.
How exactly? I see that a lot of Crossovers in this Website are successful. Are you talking about having one Fic with MULTIPLE Crossovers? Is that the "Problem"?
10756172 Yep yep, multiple crossovers. People end up losing track of where the story is heading or to much time talking about their powers. Its just on my experience from displaces. Been reading alot and seen alot of hiatus a LONG time still to this day or cancel.
Don't worry the crossovers will only be for a few chapters due to how powerful the MC is but when the kitsune and the agent of chaos do some hoping after getting bored of a queen's B*tching about how the two just want to have a little fun (though I'll tell you now that the MC is WAY stronger than discord). The two will jump the gun and go thought the multiverse entering a certain youtube series before meeting a feel OP bald man before getting lost and trying to find there way back home by going through hell (can you guess which?), stealing a staff and lamp, and finally resting at a space bar where the MC will meet a new 'friend' to comfort and talk to.
Is that particular "Queen"? Twilight just being a OOC Bitch?!
And what is the YouTube Series? Hopes it's Madness Combat!!! Or you actually want Halo: Red V.S. Blue?
Then Saitama from One Punch Man. The Hell Part would be Helluva Boss/Hazbin Hotel. Although, I LOVE it to be the Doom's Hell or Darksiders?! Go to Aladdin and meet the Genie. And the Space Bar is possibly from Star Wars. And the Girl could be Krystal from Star Fox? Am I right?
You mean the Comics of "Season 10"? And please don't Nerf. I like OP Characters.
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yep season 10
Let me guess? DBZ/DB GT/DB Super ( God Of Destruction Beerus and Angel Whis), and Doctor Who ( Daleks)!
So why the human tag?
DING! more please
I read the first chapter. And the only criticism I have, is to have our OP Kitsune Character being a frickin Misanthrope.
Seriously? He does realize that NOT every Species in the Universe is "perfect". Heck, some are WAY Worse than Humanity ever could. Just ask the Villainous or Invading Genocidal Alien Fractions in Media.
Even Ponykind is not perfect either.
Just wait until you have to meet the Pony Noble A-Holes. And maybe Rainbow Dash or the other OOC Mane Five for being Xenophobic/Racist Bitch to you. 🙄
Plus, "Hairless Apes"? Really?! You might get Karma by having some Pony Jerks INSULT your Kitsune Form. And you can see how I feel, insulting our own Race ( Humanity). 🤦
No Offense, Connorcopper.
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None taken but that was kinda of the point
Justs a warning...having cross overs can be bad luck.
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What was the point to get across? Does he even change his mindset a little when he sees that Pony kind or other Races is NO Better than Humanity? I mean, Every Race is Grey. Humanity is NOT 100% Evil. And Ponykind or other Furry Races is NOT 100% Good Guys either.
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How exactly? I see that a lot of Crossovers in this Website are successful. Are you talking about having one Fic with MULTIPLE Crossovers? Is that the "Problem"?
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Yep yep, multiple crossovers. People end up losing track of where the story is heading or to much time talking about their powers. Its just on my experience from displaces. Been reading alot and seen alot of hiatus a LONG time still to this day or cancel.
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Cross-overs can be good or bad depending on how it is approached. It can make or break a story if it isn't handled correctly.
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Don't worry the crossovers will only be for a few chapters due to how powerful the MC is but when the kitsune and the agent of chaos do some hoping after getting bored of a queen's B*tching about how the two just want to have a little fun (though I'll tell you now that the MC is WAY stronger than discord). The two will jump the gun and go thought the multiverse entering a certain youtube series before meeting a feel OP bald man before getting lost and trying to find there way back home by going through hell (can you guess which?), stealing a staff and lamp, and finally resting at a space bar where the MC will meet a new 'friend' to comfort and talk to.
Look ms good so far keep it up
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Here's to you and your story mate. Hope you have fun writing it, thats all that matters
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Is that particular "Queen"? Twilight just being a OOC Bitch?!
And what is the YouTube Series? Hopes it's Madness Combat!!! Or you actually want Halo: Red V.S. Blue?
Then Saitama from One Punch Man. The Hell Part would be Helluva Boss/Hazbin Hotel. Although, I LOVE it to be the Doom's Hell or Darksiders?! Go to Aladdin and meet the Genie. And the Space Bar is possibly from Star Wars. And the Girl could be Krystal from Star Fox? Am I right?
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Loki would you do the honors?
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I bet 10 bits that space bar is Sunset's Isekai
Sunset's Isekai - Fimfiction
Edit: now that I think about that is unlikely, is it to late for me retract my bet?
OH HELL YA
love that series
oh wait
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Hey I think I know what youtube show you are talking about
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=NTTLpUiT35U
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mhhhh Blue the color of VICTORY