Ooh, Rainbow likes butt stuff but she doesn't want to admit it. She did say it sounded 'great' after all. That's not something you say about a lesser of two evils.
"Yeah, like, imagine if you got magic, and you had this fake horn to use it, and then later you become an ACTUAL Alicorn somehow! How crazy would that be?" Dash said before taking a swig of her own.
"That sounds like a story worthy of......7 years of development I'd say!" Fleetfoot chuckled before turning back to Soarin. "Go on, read the next one!" She cheered. Soarin took a black card and began to read.
(... Is this a reference? It feels like a reference.
In any case, Cards Against Humanity stories are something of a guilty pleasure of mine, so I'm quite glad to see another one. Looking forward to the next round!)
Quick writing tip, in dialogue, when characters are addressed, embed the name with a comma. Makes it much easier for the reader. Compare these two examples:
havent read yet but im a hoping it ends with Soarin impregnating all 3 of them! cuz hot dayum not only would that be hawt but think of the awesome adorable athletic wonderbolt bond foals theyd all have!
"Congrats, and it is also your turn, Princess Soarin." Fleetfoot said teasingly. Soarin rolled his eyes.
"I really hope we don't make that a thing." Soarin said. Spitfire chuckled.
"I can just imagine you becoming an Alicorn, that would be the craziest thing!" Spitfire said before taking swig of her barely touched cider. Dash laughed.
"Yeah, like, imagine if you got magic, and you had this fake horn to use it, and then later you become an ACTUAL Alicorn somehow! How crazy would that be?" Dash said before taking a swig of her own.
"That sounds like a story worthy of......7 years of development I'd say!" Fleetfoot chuckled before turning back to Soarin. "Go on, read the next one!" She cheered. Soarin took a black card and began to read.
"Remember kids, make sure you follow all of the instructions before chewing a random stick of gum." Fleetfoot said with a giggle. The others shared in the giggles before Spitfire made her decision.
Small note towards Charlie and the Chocolate Factory.
"Yeah, like, imagine if you got magic, and you had this fake horn to use it, and then later you become an ACTUAL Alicorn somehow! How crazy would that be?" Dash said before taking a swig of her own.
Hey it is just what happened in Piercing the Heavens by Calm Wind . It was a great story
Round 2 has been posted! Get it while it's warm!
Ooh, Rainbow likes butt stuff but she doesn't want to admit it. She did say it sounded 'great' after all. That's not something you say about a lesser of two evils.
Loved it. Tho didn't get the 7 year development reference.
Nice callout to a certain jacked blue pegasusususus' work. Wouldn't want to Ruin it. ;)
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This story and all the stories that lead up to it.
Damn some of these was bad and I’m laughing at how the racism card made them all confused
There should really be a 'Cards Against Humanity' tag at this point. There are what, 7-10 fics now?
(... Is this a reference? It feels like a reference.
In any case, Cards Against Humanity stories are something of a guilty pleasure of mine, so I'm quite glad to see another one. Looking forward to the next round!)
Quick writing tip, in dialogue, when characters are addressed, embed the name with a comma. Makes it much easier for the reader. Compare these two examples:
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As you can see, it's quite helpful!
Can't wait for more!
havent read yet but im a hoping it ends with Soarin impregnating all 3 of them! cuz hot dayum not only would that be hawt but think of the awesome adorable athletic wonderbolt bond foals theyd all have!
LOL just got around to reading and its good and funny so far! not quite what i was expecting so far XD but still really good and cant wait for more!
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Well, how does it feel to be referenced by other people now? Hmmm????
Gawd, 7 years.
Nice try again. Not quite mine taste of nice humor or bad humor that is nice...
hmm I think here you wanted "contain"
you're [And there is something off on the part just before]
Small note towards Charlie and the Chocolate Factory.
That's what's going on right now.
Hey it is just what happened in Piercing the Heavens by Calm Wind . It was a great story