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PegPony


I like writing stories but I'm also a kinky fetishistic loser, that's all you need to know really.

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What's the the FGTBFG series?

This was great

Why do you make such short chapters? You might as well just combine everything into a single chapter with how short they are.

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Thanks! I'm glad you like it :)

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I understand where you are coming from, the chapters are quite short but I do have my reasons. While I can't say that I will be combining every single chapter into one big chapter, I will see if I can make chapters in my future stories longer without having it be unnecessary padding for the sake of length.

Starlight groaned "Yes Twilight! I know what I'm doing! Besides, I've worked out all the kinks in this spell and even if it doesn't work properly, she's a villain, why do you care?"

Twilight: "You're right. I should do whatever i want to a villain; especially one that doesn't learn." *zap*

Starlight: "What is your command mistress?"

Twilight: "Suck my futa dick"

Twilight was in full cringe mode, Chrysalis as a villain was bad, but Chrysalis as Chryssie was... gag inducing!

I am with you 110% of the way.

Twilight grinned and said "Well, she's all yours!" Twilight teleported away, leaving Starlight alone with Chryssie.

go on without me; I'll see this to the end.

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Yeah, Chryssie was meant to come across as being a bit sickly sweet compared to her former self. As for what you said above, are you suggesting an alternate storyline?

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Just a bit of snark if i was Twilight... :scootangel:

When Glimmy gets bored with Chryssie, she can always load her up into Trixie's wagon and the two of them can hit the road, pimping her out to every mare, stallion, jake, jenny and whatever male and female griffons and hippogriffs call themselves. Of course them Glimmy will have to endure Trixie calling herself "the Grrrrrreat and Powerful Mistress."

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That's hilarious! The way I've written Chryssie, she would love to be whored out to all manner of creature, sentient or otherwise.

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Of course she could just tie her up to a post outside the castle and anyone can come up and have fun. Could even have one of those signs next to her.
:trollestia:
Bj-5 bits
Anal-10 bits
Vaginal-15 bits
Creampie-25 bits.

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Am I gonna have to end up writing an epilogue here? :P

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Probably...... though you might wind up writing two or three because of all the ideas people will keep coming up with. :rainbowlaugh:

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Well if people really want an epilogue, I'll be sure to see if I can include both yours and Sykko's scenarios :P

That's right! Put that bitch on the corner! Make her earn that money! Any time her earnings feel a bit light, Trrrrrrixie is gonna have to smack a bug.

Twilight said "Well, it looks like you've just gained a new best friend and discovered the perfect combination of spells to turn someone into a mindless bimbo, congratulations, big win right there". Twilight could be a sarcastic bitch sometimes.

God damn it starlight you turned chrysalis into a bimbo using a freaking spell!:rainbowlaugh:

Oh starlight you never fail to amuse me and to the author of this fanfic. I don’t hate it I find it funny for some reason though. So don’t take this comment seriously.:twilightblush:

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No worries! That line in particular is meant to be funny and to a certain extent, the whole story is meant to be kind of funny! I take your comment as a compliment :)

"Please Glimmy! You don't have to like, call me by my full name! We're gal pals! Call me Chryssie you big ol' silly!"

Twilight was in full cringe mode, Chrysalis as a villain was bad, but Chrysalis as Chryssie was... gag inducing!

For this scene alone. You get a thumbs up.

A well done story. The epilogue was fun and I can see a Slice of Life fic spawning from this.

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