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I like stories of this style. Hope to read more soon.
To be honest, I doubt folks will find the death of your OC THAT tragic. This just has way too many tags. You should take off Tragic and Slice of Life.
just wondering? where did the name alucard come from. i used to know someone online that used that name.
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Glad you like it, I'll try to get the next chapter out as soon as I can. Be prepared though, lots of pain, some gore, and a whole lot of flash backs in the next one. 
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However I thank you for the input and if you still feel that these should be removed after the chapter with the death I will remove those tags. 
Hmm, you may have a point but we haven't really gotten to the character's death just yet.
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Really? Hmm. Well to answer your question Konybronyftw, Alucard is the name of Dracula's heir in a good number of written stories , games such as Castlevania, and other sources revolving around the name and well for this series, you'll just have to keep reading to find out how she got this name yet I will give a small spoiler. 
-SPOILER ALERT-
Alucard's name can be spelled backwards for another name and the famed Van Hayseed WILL make his hated appearance along with a few others.
Hope this gets you three ready for the next chapter. I'll do my best to get it out as fast as I can.
Well it could be tragic, I guess. But definitely not slice of life. No story about Vamponies is slice of life, it just doesn't make sense.
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You might understand later on in the series yet again, just wait and see how the series goes till the death and we'll see how things go from there. Still thanks for the input. I've read a good number of Vampony stories and your right, I haven't seen a Slice of Life one yet but well who knows. This one could be a first.
Here it is everypony, chapter two.
I wanted to get it out sooner but sadly I had some issues with another fiction of mine I had to deal with first. 
Hope you all enjoy it!
Queen Faust returning! Sure something like this would make anypony pass out
Good chapter, nice way to describe how Alucard gained her name, powers and apperance.
Hope chapter 3 comes sooner! Just kidding, take your time and give us another great one!
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Why one chapter when you can have two? Hope you enjoy them!
Also thank you for the complement on the name powers and appearance.
I thought long and hard on how Alucard and Alicornian where to look and would so like someone to do a cover art and an image for the first chapter for this fiction. Hmm, hey if anyone is interested PM me. How the two look are in the stories but I would like to have the two back to back or side to side hold their weapons up with Alicornian smiling at the audience while Alucard is looking off to the distance as if looking at a memory and well the picture for chapter 1 would be Dracula's picture at the very end of the chapter. Interested PM me please! 
Hum... I think that we have a problem here with walls of text...
Try to give a paragraph at least after two different characters speaks. I not a pro, but with so many text together it's hard to read without becoming tired. The story is still good, but this chapter is bigger than the last two, and the walls of text here became a problem. Try to make it easier for us to read.
Alicornian, again I think that the walls of text are giving your readers a hard time. Try to correct them.
You have a nice story, but the bigger chapters are hard to read because everything looks so... I don't know, tiresome to read.
Continue with the great story, but try to work to improve around that.
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Wow your right, after I looked it over I mean.
Thank you for pointing this out. I'll try to edit this myself and try and spread out the text a bit better. For now my editor is on my other fiction called The Legacy Saga Part 1: Legacy's Survival and personally i rather not put to much on him at the moment so I'll do what I can to edit this myself for now. Thanks for letting me know.
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Okay I hope this did it. If not keep letting me know.
Now everything is ok
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You have a editor? I envy you. I am suffering to write in a language tha'ts not my first and I don't have one!
Anyway keep up with the great story, I will take a peek at your other work when I have time
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Thanks. Oh and I recommend the group Looking for Editors You can find an editor or proof-reader there.
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Please read this, I'm in some serious need of some help. Thee, Thy, and Thou: SOMEONE HELP ME WITH THIS OLD FASHIONED SPEECH! I'm very bad at Old English so please help.
1219027 Alucard is also Dracula spelled backwards