This isn’t how I wanted things to go. I never wanted to hurt anyone. Unfortunately for me, I have four villains in my head. And they say I am going to be the next one.
Well this seems to have something pretty deep and dark happened to this guy in his past. Keep going I’m looking forward to seeing more and where things go from here
The plot thickens! I was expecting shenanigans from Discord but it turns out Sombra and Chrysalis are also quite the jokers. Nightmare Moon seems to be the only one at this point who somewhat cares about our human.
10734988 well the villens are either going to eventualy get along or tear eachother apart. im hopeing for getting along as that would allow our human mc to be the most powerfull he could be as with not only their powers but their experince and opinions it would allow him to possibly be the most powerfull being in that world. but that all depends on how this goes.
10763534 Yeah I look forward to reading more about their interactions with each other because right now they seem ready to tear each other apart but maybe the need to survive will force them to work together and set their differences aside.
Having just the power of Discord would already make him the most powerful being in Equestria, just try to imagine what he could do with the power of all major villains combined
10763919 the only villen who might survive the MC death could be chrisalis as its implyed that she might have her body elsewhere or somthing (or maby i imagined that). the powers he has acess to with the villens in his head are a given but think about what weaknesses are filled now aswell as the information each of them can provide. a weakness of discord is that if he gets to orderly then he will being to fade and that wouldnt apply to the mc as discord is chaos fully while the mc is only a container. if the mc can use discords magic around the throne chrisalis has the that could be a good trump card. There is the question of if the elements will work on the mc or not. i dont think they will but then again i consider the effect of the elements to depend on the mentality and power of the bearers but either way it might not effect him as if he is blasted for being evil he isnt and if he is blasted and it tryes to mind control him then it might fail with the combind resistences of villens whos powers include mind control.
10763967 yes Chrysalis is the only one that can survive and Discord is unsure since his body didn’t survive. Other than that they would all still be dead. But does beg the question of how chrysalis would survive but I’ll get into that later. And good on you for figuring out one of the benefits of combining together with Discord. While a lot of weaknesses will be notified. Our protagonist still has a lot to learn and still has a lot of weaknesses himself. And I will say that there’s going to be a lot more training than just getting power. Chrysalis has a shattered army and race. Nightmare moon has devote followers. And Sombra has extreme loyalists. If they’re going to train a villain they’re going to ‘try’ to train a villain the right way. Then there are the elements... “Who knows what will happen!”
10763919 Thank you both for commenting On I am not a villain. My favourite thing on this website is getting comments on my stories. It allows me to have a conversation with someone so please continue to discuss what you think of my stories I’ll try to send my own comment as well.
10765231 you could possibly have the mc lie (or get permission from discord for it to be the truth) and claim to be the next lord of chaos and that being imprisoned in stone slowly killed discord due to him running on chaos. with that you could make a good way for the ponys to get mislead as to his intentions and powers as well as possibly making twilight think that he only had to be as chaotic as he was after escaping as he was dying. could also traumatise fluttershy and the others slightly as i dont think any of them would be comfortable killing (sombra was tecnicly killed by cadence and the heart). i like thinking about things like this so i hope it helps
10765270 It did help. I hope you don’t mind but I take ideas break them down and fit them into my story. Also don’t forget that this world will take place in a your human and you world
10765346 i dont mind you have done well so far so im exited to see how you continue. i admit i havent read much your human and you storys but i think i rememebr the idea of it either way i will look at it again in a bit
10702611 by God, give it a break will you, just because you don't like the images doesn't mean that the story is bad you don't need 1000 words just to describe armor. Just let it flow
I felt my heart sink a bit, fearing I had maybe angered the voice in my head. I decided to say something quick. “You know… you sound kind of terrifying like a Nightmare… but there is a hint of beauty in your voice like the Moon.”
10902138 It’s not that it’s cancelled. It’s mostly because I lack the motivation. I’m trying to find my rhythm but I just feel exhausted a lot of the time. It takes me a good hour to get 1000 words on a page and recently I’ve been wanting to make 4000 to 10,000 words a chapter. (Depending on which story I’m writing). Compared to my 2000. 3000 if I was feeling “dangerous”. I just didn’t take the size of the chapters well I guess.
However just for you, and because I need the motivation, I’ll work on a few thousand words now. Who knows maybe you’ll see the next chapter soon
yay more!
That's a good one
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After I do a few other chapters in a few other stories it won’t take me long to come back to this story
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Thank you, it’s hard doing comedy in a book For me
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i will wait happily
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Yeah some can do it in there sleep which is crazy
Well this seems to have something pretty deep and dark happened to this guy in his past. Keep going I’m looking forward to seeing more and where things go from here
The plot thickens! I was expecting shenanigans from Discord but it turns out Sombra and Chrysalis are also quite the jokers. Nightmare Moon seems to be the only one at this point who somewhat cares about our human.
10734988
well the villens are either going to eventualy get along or tear eachother apart. im hopeing for getting along as that would allow our human mc to be the most powerfull he could be as with not only their powers but their experince and opinions it would allow him to possibly be the most powerfull being in that world. but that all depends on how this goes.
10763534
Yeah I look forward to reading more about their interactions with each other because right now they seem ready to tear each other apart but maybe the need to survive will force them to work together and set their differences aside.
Having just the power of Discord would already make him the most powerful being in Equestria, just try to imagine what he could do with the power of all major villains combined
10763919
the only villen who might survive the MC death could be chrisalis as its implyed that she might have her body elsewhere or somthing (or maby i imagined that).
the powers he has acess to with the villens in his head are a given but think about what weaknesses are filled now aswell as the information each of them can provide. a weakness of discord is that if he gets to orderly then he will being to fade and that wouldnt apply to the mc as discord is chaos fully while the mc is only a container. if the mc can use discords magic around the throne chrisalis has the that could be a good trump card.
There is the question of if the elements will work on the mc or not. i dont think they will but then again i consider the effect of the elements to depend on the mentality and power of the bearers but either way it might not effect him as if he is blasted for being evil he isnt and if he is blasted and it tryes to mind control him then it might fail with the combind resistences of villens whos powers include mind control.
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yes Chrysalis is the only one that can survive and Discord is unsure since his body didn’t survive. Other than that they would all still be dead. But does beg the question of how chrysalis would survive but I’ll get into that later. And good on you for figuring out one of the benefits of combining together with Discord. While a lot of weaknesses will be notified. Our protagonist still has a lot to learn and still has a lot of weaknesses himself. And I will say that there’s going to be a lot more training than just getting power. Chrysalis has a shattered army and race. Nightmare moon has devote followers. And Sombra has extreme loyalists. If they’re going to train a villain they’re going to ‘try’ to train a villain the right way. Then there are the elements... “Who knows what will happen!”
10763534
10763919
Thank you both for commenting On I am not a villain. My favourite thing on this website is getting comments on my stories. It allows me to have a conversation with someone so please continue to discuss what you think of my stories I’ll try to send my own comment as well.
10765231
you could possibly have the mc lie (or get permission from discord for it to be the truth) and claim to be the next lord of chaos and that being imprisoned in stone slowly killed discord due to him running on chaos. with that you could make a good way for the ponys to get mislead as to his intentions and powers as well as possibly making twilight think that he only had to be as chaotic as he was after escaping as he was dying. could also traumatise fluttershy and the others slightly as i dont think any of them would be comfortable killing (sombra was tecnicly killed by cadence and the heart).
i like thinking about things like this so i hope it helps
10765270
It did help. I hope you don’t mind but I take ideas break them down and fit them into my story. Also don’t forget that this world will take place in a your human and you world
10765346
i dont mind you have done well so far so im exited to see how you continue. i admit i havent read much your human and you storys but i think i rememebr the idea of it either way i will look at it again in a bit
can't wait for more ch love the story 😍😍
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by God, give it a break will you, just because you don't like the images doesn't mean that the story is bad
you don't need 1000 words just to describe armor. Just let it flow
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THANK YOU!!!
Continue com essa história por favor tá muito legal mesmo eu amei essa história por favor
Corny as fuck
Why was this cancelled?
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It’s not that it’s cancelled. It’s mostly because I lack the motivation. I’m trying to find my rhythm but I just feel exhausted a lot of the time. It takes me a good hour to get 1000 words on a page and recently I’ve been wanting to make 4000 to 10,000 words a chapter. (Depending on which story I’m writing). Compared to my 2000. 3000 if I was feeling “dangerous”. I just didn’t take the size of the chapters well I guess.
However just for you, and because I need the motivation, I’ll work on a few thousand words now. Who knows maybe you’ll see the next chapter soon
When the next chapter?
Alright. You need to make the pov changes far less frequent and you need to clearly identify from whom the pov is.