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Hello there. So uh, you lookin' at ma' stories or something?

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Doing good, so far.

In your next chapter, try to get the MC’s to meet each other in the way that you want it to be read. But, try to make it understandable for everypony. It’s a big flaw of mine; overexposition. Other than that, keep it up.

Thanks for the advice!
Fun fact: I actually plan to have that happen, and it be very understandable as to a few...problems that I forgot to foreshadow :facehoof:

I am highly intrigu d to see how this will go. I look forward to following where you take this story

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