• Member Since 29th Mar, 2020
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Xafilah


I like ponies, among other things

Comments ( 3 )

How much time did you spend on this?

It doesn't take a grand narrative to have fun with enjoyable characters. The dialog is solid, and the prose isn't bad, but such a direct conversion from Greentext with little more than > removal does feel a bit lacking.

10641545
I suppose you would know exactly what converted green looks like. Thanks for the advice, I'll try to take it to heart.

10641504
Only about as much time as it took to write it down and clean it up, I'm afraid to admit.

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