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Alyssum Cherubwings


I need to learn how to write fimfics that don’t involve Fluttercord lol

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Inside the walls of Tambelon Castle, Emperor Grogar, the Father of Monsters, makes his best attempt to raise his new creations...three young ones known as Discord, Cosmos, and Eris. Some distance away, at Midnight Castle, are the young princes Tirek and Scorpan. When the kids of Tambelon and Midnight meet, it marks the start of a new friendship. Trouble eventually comes, and the group finds themselves influenced by evil. When they discover ponies for the first time in the form of two young alicorn sisters, a more power-hungry side to Grogar becomes unraveled. Discord must fight to keep his friends from getting wrapped up in the resulting chaos...or else he risks losing them, and himself.



This story will elaborate upon these characters’ backstories that have been somewhat seen in various official works of FIM and will be kept as canon - or at least something that seems like it could work canonically - as possible.

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0_0 this looks alright so far.

Actually Princess Eris by Tony Fleec's (the artist of Nightmare Knights) words, is a draconequus meanwhile Cosmos by Andy Price's word isn't a draconequus but everbody ignores that because well... Cosmos follows all the rules about what is a draconequus meanwhile there is a debate with Princess Eris because her design lacks of the chimerism of Discord and Cosmos.

@Jacalope Yeah, her birdlike design just doesn’t scream “draconequus” to me. Cosmos is wayyy more similar in design to Discord than Eris is. They and every draconequus OC I’ve seen are what I think of when I hear that word, not an anthro peacock-like thing. That’s why I decided to give Eris’s species name that of what her design was inspired by.

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I can understand you, despiste Discord and Eris shares bloodline like cousins, Eris is just a bird with goat horns and bat wings unlike Cosmos who looks like a symmetrical draconequus despiste her creators said she is not a draconequus.

>According to Cosmos’s explanation, Grogar had created multiple different species of monsters, from bugbears to manticores to sea serpents. However, no monster he created specifically with his spells - as opposed to monsters making families of their own - bore any relation to another. Creating creatures from random ingredients and magic just worked like that.

That works very well for the future. That's how Discord and Cosmos can have a relationship without seeing it so strange meanwhile Eris have a love / hate relationship with to such an extent that she considers him her cousin even when she comes to hate him.

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Ah, yes, that’s exactly what I was going for! I had tried to figure out an explanation as to how they could grow up together while working around how Cosmos’s and Discord’s future relationship wouldn’t be weird. :)

Scorpan’s birthday is 10/20 and Tirek’s birthday is 5/10... try to guess the significance of these dates!

5/10 is the day that Twilight´s Kingdom was released and 10/20 is the day Return of Tambelon was released. Clever :ajsmug:.

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Nice story, by the way. Keep going :raritywink:

Still working on this for anyone wondering! Finishing up every chapter before I start posting them again!

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