Her telekinesis which once she’s fully grown will be as powerful as her mother, who is able to move stars and planets.

Shouldn't we feel concerned about that part? Just saying.

1 - You really don’t see this happening to fighters in fiction. Cutting off the limbs of someone who because of how their world works. Is able to beat entire armies just because they can punch good. Will make them unable to fight as there is no fighting style for the limbless.

Not to mention fighting someone who doesn’t mess around and just cripple their opponents before they can even fight back. People with telekinesis who can lift vast and heavy objects. Never really use their powers as they should. If they can lift a rock weighing hundreds of tons. They should have no trouble at all twisting the limbs of someone they’re fighting.

Superhero worlds don’t count as some of the heroes and villains. Are just that strong or have powers that allows them to fight back against that. And those who have telekinesis who usually have to focus their minds to lift object and moving ones are very hard to grab or their telekinesis isn’t that strong to begin with.

But for the ones like Celestia who can move stars and planets. Their telekinesis would be all but unstoppable.

2 - The whole school where people come to fight each other can't work unless it's in fiction and in Japan or someplace else with strong gun control laws. As if any fighting school were to take place in the USA. The one who got beaten can always just grab a gun and shoot the fighter in the back.

3 - If someone can open portals to just about anywhere. I don't get why they don't just portal whoever they're fighting into space. Or if there is a range limit. As high as they can before letting them drop back down to the ground. And even if they don't need to breath, in space they still have to deal with being frozen in seconds, with ice crystals bursting out of their bodies and drifting helplessly in space.

Also this fic will only contain real life anime and manga settings. So no magical girls or other races or other stuff like that. It be mostly fighting series that will be appearing. The only magic will be from Equestria and nothing else.

Again, you made Very Good Points against Normal Fighting Animes. ( Except DBZ/DB GT/DB Super, or Naruto because their OP.).

Anyway, by just having OP Telekinesis, and other Mental Powers. Fighting Serious at the start and target the weak points ( Cutting the Limbs, Eyes, Neck, Pressure Points, even the Kick in the Ball Sack, or Women Area!!!! )

Or use Hack Powers or take the Easy, More Logical, and maybe "Cheating" Way out, like Teleporting them to Space, the Sun or a Frickin Blackhole for example!!!! 😈 👍

Also, so Equestria/Equis are Highly Technological Advanced??!! Along with still having Magic!!!

Having Magic and Technology like Guns/Ships, at the highest levels is Damn Overpowered!!! Like the Imperium Of Man from WH40K. But without the Grimdark Setting Luckily.

And I like it!!! Too bad Humanity didn't have that yet! 😓

Kinda like Wakanda from Marvel. WAKANDA FOREVER!!!!!!

And is it a 'Good' Idea for Sunset to go to Japan of all places?? Why not the U.S. or Europe??
I don't hate Japan. The reason is because, it is the MAIN Fictional Setting from both the Anime/Movies, and it has some Wacky stuff in some of them.

One more thing:

Why make another Story? When you still have many stories that aren't finished yet?! No offense. I just like 'some' of them to be Updated that's all.

Not bad but....eh I donno I both like and dislike this story for various reasons but I will keep an eye on this story.

XD Here's me hoping she winds up in Hachimitsu Academy from Prison School

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Oh Boy!

I really Hate the Masochistic Boys!

Total embarrassment to Real Men everywhere. 😤 👎

I like this idea! Will it just be japan schools? Or will you do other countries as well?

I decided to read this chapter again and man that was over kill with Sunset. She could have just broke Mitsuomi's back like Bane did with BatMan but it's your story so your call.

I honestly forgot who Mitsuomi Takayanagi was until I looked up his name on Google and learned he was from the series Tenjou Tenge. I never finished reading the series but I heard about the ending to it and I hated it. Plus I didn't like Aya Natsume as I thought she was just a shallow stupid bitch fawning over someone who didn't like her. Maybe I'm wrong though as I never finished the series so I might give it another try or I might forget about it.

Anyway before I forget there was one more series I wanted to suggest and it was I My Me Strawberry Eggs as I heard about it and I figure Sunset can teach the idiots at Seito Sannomiya Private School a lesson for the bitches they are, especially the princible. I'm looking forward to more.

Good Luck Madhat886.

Why Japan out of all places?