Hi, I'm GRYFFINDOR123456 and I'm legally an adult. I love my little pony, Equestria Girls and G5 and I also love Harry Potter, Wednesday and Barbie!
anon-a-miss. Everyone has left Sunset and she is all alone. But when a mockingjay sings a song, the song from the hunger games(the valley song), Sunset realises she is not alone. There is someone else out there, by the name of maleficent mal bertha.
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Seem like this could be great just need fleshing out abit. Though I have the same problem tbh
This was stupid. I'm sorry I read this and it dumb, it makes no sense and the way it ends....
No, just no, it's too short overall, none of the ideas introduced get to their conclusions, and the ending comes out of absolutely nowhere.
Edit: nevermind the fact the first two chapters just get copied into the third, making the story 664 words longer than it actually is.
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I guess this makes at least as much sense as the canon music video.
So my planned sarcastic "I didn't even know a mockingjay was a real bird. What does it look like?" comment is now pointless.
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It was more for the Hunger Games. It is a real bird, though!
The hanging tree or the valley song
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I was thinking chapters two through three. Which use a song that has a canon EG music video.
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according to the rules... you are allowed canon songs from mlp and eg.
And as for that, My past is not today is a song i know from memory- it was a song i listened to a lot when i was younger
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Oh, I didn't mean to criticize you. Quite the contrary. I just thought that you had helped to provide a context for a canon music video where the original canon video didn't seem to make all that much sense.