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Chrysalis, Tirek, and Cozy Glow were now statues but not every creature is happy. Refusing to join Equestria's Celebration, Thorax and the swarm heads home. However, the day holds one final surprise for Thorax.

Alternative end to the episode The Ending of The End.

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Comments ( 16 )

I'm interested I cant wait to see what happens

they had to imprison Chrysalis to do so

They didn't have too it was clearly spite and hypocrisy

You have my attention!

It feels like you're summarizing/narrating a lot of scenes and conversations that probably deserve to be more fleshed-out.

Other than that, I'm interested in seeing where you're going to take this.

I’m confused about a lot of things.

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What are you confused about, I'd be happy to explain.

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I honestly don’t know where to begin.

I’m confused about a lot of things.

Since love is their primary nourishment they didn't have a stomach, large, or small intestine. Instead, those areas housed a large sack containing eggs.

That contradicts what we’ve seen in the show. But I don’t wanna argue about it.

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While I don't recall the mention of changelings having stomachs and such. Your comment did remind me that I forgot the "Alternative Universe" tag. Which episode/mention are you referencing so I'll know the canonical anatomy of changelings?

10683944
To Change a Changeling showed them preparing a pot luck lunch and showed one of them eating soup. Thorax also mentioned a new diet and that he had indigestion in Triple Threat.

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Thanks for the information, I'll have to remember that the next time I write about changelings.

Chrysalis died somehow quickly, I did not have time to feel the drama of the moment.

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Bingo! My friend pure doctradiction.
Please continue the story I like it!

Didn’t expect this to update.

I suprise to be sure but a very welcoming one I'm glad to see your ok

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