The griffon jock Lanzo has to work together on a project with Keith. He promptly finds out about his crossdressing and treats him like a slut, not caring wether Keith wants it or not.
The unicorn was made shamefully aware that this was actually his first kiss. And it went to the cock of his bully, right before his face was getting mercilessly raped.
For some reason this made me laugh.
I wonder will Keith get "adopted" like that other fic?
Good start!
I'll say. His parents named him Keith!
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Yeah, but Venus has even worse luck.
Rly like it, awaiting chapter 2
For some reason this made me laugh.
I wonder will Keith get "adopted" like that other fic?
the grammar and pacing is kinda terrible ngl
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I kinda agree. The flow was off many times. Felt a little rushed.
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I am open to hear your criticism. To be fair, if you think it was rushed, it is probably because I had only 5,000 words for the first chapter.
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Bet he has a friend named Ellis