Just a guy who loves cars, boats, planes, and basically anything with an engine. Oh, and I write stories about pastel-coloured horses and stuff.
This was written for AzureKeres as a part of Jinglemas 2020! For more information about Jinglemas, checkout our group!
Hearth's Warming Eve should be a time of excitment, of joy, of frantic last-minute shopping. But for Suri, it was business as usual. She planned on spending it by herself, like she does every year. That is, until she bumps into her ex-assistant on her travels and she gets some unusual feelings. Would things be different this year?
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This was a pretty nice story so Suri feel so empty during this holiday and feeling lonely but then she saw Coco she still feel guilty for what happened back in the Fashion Week and yes it was her fault does she pull that kind of stunt but Suri someone wants to talk to Coco when she saw her of course things got awkward between them because they don't have a really good relationship with each other but then coco I was about to leave but then Suri wants to give Coco a hand within few hours they made it 2 Coco's Apartments then Suri saying she was sorry for everything that she put her through and made her do but Coco forgave her and it was a sweet moment between them and a good Redemption story of Suri which I really wish that could have happened in the show but anyway this was a good story nice job on it merry Christmas and happy holidays
Aww! How sweet! I mean, it might be a little too sweet for some people, but for me, it's perfect, especially for the season. Looks like the start of a beautiful friendship.
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I had a worry it might come off as a little too sweet for some, but given the theme, it seemed appropriate. Plus we never really got a full flesh out of Suri's character since she only appeared in one episode of the show, so who knows how she would react in this situation?
I like the transitions you make across the city of Manehattan to the cafe. I hope you don't mind me take some notes off of this.
This story had a nonfictional feel to it going by how real this situation can feel. Someone you've wronged really bad that want to make up with because that person was really important to you. Had a bit of introspection of myself because I don't talk much with my own family.
Though now I am curious about Suri's own family from Ponyville. If the idea of a sequel ever interests you, I would kindly urge exploring her relationship with her family. That sounds like a topic I don't think anyone on Fimfiction has explored.
Thank you for the gift!
Nice story.