The Zebra Empire once stood at the pinnacle of the world, but a Vengeful Sun burned the once great empire to the ground and all of it's allies. For several thousand years, the remnants of this tragedy crawled their way back.
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Is this, like, the third time this story has been written?
10751013
Revisions can do that, but yes it is. This is the final version and I don't plan on rewriting it again.
10751013
This is the first rewrite/remake
10751019
Then the typo in that summary is here to stay?
Should be "... all except a few.", got the "c" and the "p" all twisted around.
10751055
Thanks, some always slip through the cracks.
What happened to the last one?
10751107
Due to reasons, I decided the story needed to be improved upon. But rather than un-publish and re-publish chapters, it was easier to do it like this. Start off fresh as it were.
Am extremely excited~
Yes! I remember reading a couple chapters of the old version of this story before it was deleted! I'm so glad it's back!
10751019
Can't wait to read this but I am a little bit sad but you never know I could love this even more
I was looking for this story, I even tried looking for it in fimtech, I thought I was lost forever, this is good news.
What is this, Fall of Equestria only with zebras?
10753031
Kinda yes, Kinda no. I dont really follow FoE to much. So I can't properly answer this compared to someone who knows FoE better.
FoE from my understanding is just insta fall from grace into domination. Kwa Rushwa is having more build up, while Zebra's are the main force shown. They have other allies that will appear over time.
10753031
Kinda, but not as physically damaging. Unlike Fall of Equestria, there will be no dismembering, cutting off horns, or anything of that nature.
I really like this story but really hope that author gonna change spme things. Like I hope to see that Zakia gonna impregnate and make his harem with all mane 6 and princess, Because in previous version he use different pony in another ways. So its seems better if he corrupt and make his broodmares with mane 6 and princesses
The only reason I can be disappointed is that the original was left at a cliffhanger and I now have to wait even longer. Unless this a 100% complete rewrite.
With that said, I hope you show how Sweetie and Scoots become corrupted this time instead of introducing them into the story after the fact.
10753706
Yeah I can understand that disappointment and its totally within reason. Me and Holocron both are sure that this version of Kwa with all the additional work thats been done will improve on not only the story but Zakia's character growth as a whole.
10753895
I'm ultimately glad this is happening. I usually attributed it to the long periods between updates, but while each individual chapter was strong I also felt a lack of cohesion when it came to the overarching narrative.
10754768
Yeah that's one of the things me and Holorcron worked on for this remake of the story.
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WUZ
Nice. Quick question, will we be seeing any willing pony collaborators in this version of the story. I'm pretty sure there are some who are disatisfied with Celestia's rule or sleazy enough to sell out there own country to save their own skin. I'd reward the former and punish the latter.
10762419
Sorry, but I cannot tell as of yet.
Love that this story is back. Already it feels a little more polished and focused than the last iteration.
Don't get me wrong, I loved the previous edition, but this version feels like there are more set goals in mind.
Noticed in the notes that you're hoping for a more regular schedule, how often do you think you'll be releasing new chapters?
Moar plz
10796844
Man did I came hard to this 🤤🤤🤤