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Cyron757


I'm your average guy who likes FiM. I love the show for its humor and clever writing.

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Twilight is the newest student to be welcomed to Equestrian High, and to say that she is excited to begin would be an understatement. The private school certainly has an amazing reputation: revered teachers, superb facilities, and excellent recommendations for future careers. In short, being admitted into the school is nothing less than a dream come true!

The same cannot be said of the student body that composes the school, however, with those trying to befriend her responsible for her constant headaches and neverending embarassment. With both friendly and antagonistic schoolmates breathing down her neck, will Twilight manage to endure the constant clash of insanity that seems to surround her, or will her prolonged stay in the school only cause her to become a part of it?

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 19 )

Very interesting... and your writing is good... I'll be tracking this... :trixieshiftright:

Not sure what those downvotes were for, you've done well so far. I like it. :) Thought when the blonde girl was Derpy and not AJ, I was surprised. But glad. Because meeting three of the other five on the first day of school before the bell even rings? Unlikely.

This is really good! Can't wait for what's coming up next.

People saw the "Human" tag and instantly disliked.
That's not very brony like people...

Yeah, those people are pretty douchebaggish, I mean if his writing is good, he can pull it off.

Honestly, writer, I want to punch your computer. You took my cover image I was going to use as a basis for my upcoming Twilight x "You" Romance! But this is still good, so I'll look for a new one.

This looks very promising so far, definitely gonna keep my eye on it :pinkiehappy:

1202290 and 1202382 Thanks! I'll try not to disappoint.

1202563 To be honest, I expected that to happen. A lot of people seem to hate this type of fanfic. Not much I can do about it, but it makes me appreciate every single fave that this story gets all the more.

1202788 Please don't smash my computer in. Tell you what, you can still use this image if you want to. It's not mine, so I have no right over it; all rights belongs to "Meroni", the artist who made the original image. I only did some minor editing to remove the text from the original image, so feel free to use it for your fanfic :pinkiehappy:

I smell enough potential to rule the world.
Its beautiful man, update soon if you can please!

That was well done, excellent work man. Well worth the wait.

Cool. Pretty good so far. I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this.

I just finished the first chapter and I really like it. I don't know why some people have given it a thumbs down, because this story certainly deserves a thumbs up.

It was as though she had lived this moment before, perhaps in another time, and had just been reintroduced to an important aspect of her life.

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That was the longest 0 word chapter I've ever read.

4171258 agreed and the lack of words had me worried until I got to the part that didn't have words. Then I knew something was up.

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