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A bit rushed, but I love it all the same.
Is it okay if I request a couple of sequels?
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Absolutely-this sort of thing is ripe for more chapters or even one offs.
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Cool :)
Like superfun said it's definitely a bit rushed but the speed at which it's going has a nice charm to it. Maybe try to expand on some of the descriptions?
Anyway, lovely read. There aren't nearly enough good short clopfics, especially ones focusing on this.
Wow … this fic really moves at warp speed, doesn’t it?
But it does get right down to business and delivers some nice raunchy futa pony rutting … and very little else.
While I’d normally say it needs a lot more buildup, detail, and emotion … after being left hanging by another fic that had too much plot and not enough rutting, this was just what the doctor ordered!
Kind of weird that Rarity was the only one to take it up the ass, though. Gonna be awkward when she’s the only one not pregnant.
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it was pretty much just an excuse to slap a penis on Dash and set her loose, but I'll keep your comments in mind for the next sequel