I awoke to the sun shining in my face, I covered my eyes as I sat up. But found that my sitting up was hindered by a sleeping Bon Bon huging my chest and lightly breathing. I looked down at her sleeping form, admiring how beautiful she looked sleeping. I carefully unwrapped her hooves, making sure not to wake her, and laid her head down onto the pillow. I let my legs swing of the bed and sat on the edge, trying to fully wake up. I rubbed my eyes for a minute and when I was done with that I noticed a note on the dresser. I picked up the note and read it in my head.
Dear Alex, I know we were suppose to have some 'intimate time' together, but I guess you were to more tired from the party then I thought. Because when you came into the room and got onto the bed with me, you just fell right to sleep. But don't be worried, I kinda figured that would happen. So please don't worry about it, we have plenty of time for that. I also want to thank you for chosing me as a special somepony, It makes me feel special to have someone actually want me for me.
P.S. if you wake up before me, can you check on Lyra and see if she's still breathing. Thank you.
Kisses, Bon Bon.
I smiled at her words, especially how she feels special for having me. I looked back at Bon Bon and placed my hand onto her head, she moved her head abit and smiled at my touch. I left my hand there for a moment before retracting in and standing up. I turned to her, leaned down and softly kissed her cheek.
"I'm glad I have you too." I whispered before walking out of the room.
I enterde the hallway, letting the silence fill my ears. I walked down the hall and headed to Lyra's room. I liked how the carpet felt cold against my feet, I stoped and looked down at said feet. I don't remember taking of my shoes. Hmm strange.. I would have thought it through more deeply, but I had to check on Lyra. So I stoped looking at my feet and continued the short walk to her room. I reached her door and opened it, I peered inside to see Lyra sprawled out on her bed. Her front hooves wrapped around one of her pillows and her other hooves ontop of her other pillow. I walked over to her bed and examined the sleeping pony: saliva had pooled onto her covers where she drooled in her sleep, her covers were messed up and nearly falling off her bed. I was surprised to not smell and find vomit anywhere in her room. I guess she woke up and went to the bathrom to puke. Hope she got all of the alcohol out of her system. I thought before placing my hand on her head and brushing back her messed up hair. She tossed alittle, but not much. She returned to her previouse state and opened her mouth to say something, but all that came out was a yawn that turned into a small smile. Aww so cute.. I thought as removed my hand from her head. I tip toed out of her room and closed the door behind me.
I entered the hallway again and went to the stairs, I descended the stairs and entered the hall leading to the livingroom and kitchen. I entered the kitchen and went to see what they had for the making of breakfast. I opened the fridge: two containers of milk, a few apples and oranges and a big ol-watermellon. Odd...very odd. I thought as I closed the fridge and checked the cabnits. The first two cabnits held a box of instant pancake mix and a box of cereal. I graded the box of mix and examined the box.
The boxes instructions were simple and easy to make. Odviously it easy to make, its instant mix. How hard could this be.. I proceeded to grab a mixing bowl and a few of the ingredients to start making pancakes.
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30 minutes later
A stack of perfectly made chocolate pancakes sat upon the plate, all in all a stack of 15. The rest of the pancakes sat at the bottom of the garbage can, burned and inedible. I stood there admiring the few pancakes I was able to save, I would have hired a painter to capture this moment forever but I heard the sound of hooves coming down the stairs. I looked to the doorway and saw Bon Bon yawning and rubbing her right eye.
"Morning Bon Bon." I said as I placed a plate on the table. Bon Bon stoped rubbing her eye and looked at me and smiled. She entered the kitchen, walked to me and wrapped her hooves around me. I hugged her back, after a moment of hugging she let me go and I gestured for her to have a seat. She hoped up onto the chair and i place two pancakes onto her plate.
"Why thank you, such a gentlecolt." She said.
"Well your wish is my command." I sadid as I kissed her forhead. She blushed and waved a hoove at me.
"Such flattery, so how was Lyra?"
"I'm good thanks." We turned to see Lyra walking into the kitchen, with a bad case of bed-head. She took a seat and I placed a plate in front of her.
"Well goodmorning Lyra, how you feeling?" I asked.
"Tired and hungery..'sniff' those smell REALLY good." I stated as I placed a few pancakes on her plate.
"Well, this one asked me to make some breakfast. So I did." I stated as I sat down and got me some pancakes.
"You asked hime to make breakfast? When did you do that?" Lyra asked as the levitated a fork and sunk it into her pancakes. Bon Bon looked at me worriedly before letting out a nervouse sigh.
"L-last nigh..." She started.
"Like at the party?"
"Noo, when we got home....and before going to bed..."
"Oh that makes se....wait I didn't see your door open when I walked down here, you usually leave your door open in the morning. Did you sleep on the couch Alex?" I was now the nervouse one, I didnt know how to respond. My mind was at a lose for words, I opened my mouth to speak but Bon Bon spoke before I could.
"Alex, can you go and check the bathroom for monsters?"
"Wha..."
"Please, there might be demons in there." She said while winking at me. I took her hint and left the kitchen.
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After Alex left the room
Bon Bon turned to Lyra, who looked at Bon Bon with a confused look on her face. Bon Bon got up off the chair and walked to the sink, not looking at Lyra.
"Remember that little 'challange' you started with me?" Bon Bon said with a calm voice.
"Yeah I remeber the chal..." Lyra couldn't finish her statement as the realization hit her like a train made of bricks. She didn't....with my man....oh Celestia no... Lyra swallowed hard, nearly choking on her next words.
"D-did y-you to..."
"Do it? No, buut we did make out. I must agree with you on one fact: He is a good kisser." Bon Bon said as she walked over to the stuned Lyra, who's very soul was close to shattering like a mirror. Bon Bon put her hoove on Lyra's shoulder and patted it.
"I know this must seem devastating...." Bon Bon leaned into Lyra. "...But I have good news for you."
"....And what would that be: I'm the brides maid in your wedding?" Lyra choked out. Bon Bon giggled at pulled Lyra close to her.
"...I told him about herds and he's lettingme decide if we will start one." With that said Bon Bon left the kitchen, leaving Lyra in the kitchen. Lyra had so many thoughts going through her mind: Hatred for her best friend for taking her man, sadness for her loss and longing for a chance to do it over agian. But before she could start forming a perfect murder, Bon Bon's final words reached her. She told him about herds....and he's letting hr decide if they should start one....
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"BON BON!!!" Lyra yelled as she galloped into the living room and nearly pinned her down on the couch.
"DO IT, PLEASE SAY YOUR OK WITH A HERD. PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE!!!!" Lyra stated loudly to the pinned Bon Bon. Bon Bon looked away and appeared to be in deep thought, she stayed like this for a few moments before answering Lyra.
"Possibly.....I MIGHT consider it if you do something for me first..."
"YES ANYTHING...." Lyra said with a big smile.
"First: please get off me and stop yelling. Your hurting my ears." Bon Bon stated.
"Oh ok....sorry." Lyra said as she got of of Bon Bon, she got backed up and gave Bon Bon space. Bon Bon sat up and brushed the hair out of her face.
"Ok....now, before I say I will start a herd. I want you to say: 'Bon Bon, you are the bestest friend I have ever had and I will do whatever you say as long as Celestia's sun shines in the sky.' exactly like that." Bon Bon finished leaned in to Lyra. Lyra was taken aback by Bon Bon's request.
"There's no way I'm saying that..." Bon Bon did a fake sigh.
"Well...I guess I can tell Alex that I don't want a herd...We can alwas just spend every waking moment together....just.the.two.of.us." Bon Bon hoped of the couch and started walking to the stairs.
"Wait!" Lyra called out. Bon Bon turned around an looked at Lyra.
"Yes...Lyra?" She smugly said.
"Bon Bon, you are the bestest friend I ever had and I will do whatever you say as long as Celestia's sun shines in the sky."
"I'm sorry, I didn't catch that." Bon Bon teased.
" 'sigh' Bon Bon is the bestest friend I have ever had.." Lyra started as she got of the couch and bowed at Bon Bon. "...and I will do whatever you say as long as Celestia's sun shines in the sky." Lyra finished. Bon Bon smiled big and proud. She turned and yelled up the stairs.
"Alex!!"
"Yesss?" Alex responded.
"We have decided to go to the park, its a nice day and we can have a picnic." Bon Bon yelled back.
"Ok sounds fun, be down in a minute. I just realised that I need a shower."
"Ok take your time." Bon Bon turned to Lyra and smiled.
"I will tell him when we get to the park. In the meantime, not a word about to Alex about it my decision. Got it?" Bon Bon asked. Lyra sat up and did a moke salute.
"Got it Bon Bon, my lips are sealed."
"Good, now lets get somethings together for our picnic." Bon Bon said as she went into the kitchen with Lyra following right behind.
There's a spelling error in the description. I'm not even going to bother.
2021333 hmm fixed, didn't notice it at the time. Now I saw it and fixed it.
activate party derpy.
2021364 I'm just saying. You should really learn to capitalize. It's that think that you do after every period and to every single I.
2021374 I will be the first to say that this story isn't perfect. No where close infact, but I have improved since the first chapters. So the critisism that you have posted has made me look back at my mistakes and change them for the better. sounds sappy, but I was terrible at writing before this story.
2021410 Don't worry. I was terrible at writing when I first started. Everyone gets better if they try.
2021430 I feel ya, the first story I wrote was a complete failure. so I scraped it and then this one came to my mind.
2022163 maybe
And with that, the real game start, oh man this is going to be interesting, good way for Bom Bom to make sure she will stay as the head mare. And 2 (or possible 3) others pretenders are around the corner, I can't wait to see the reaction of Alex when he discover the relationship he is now. And latter own, who will be the next aspiring into the herd.
Also, you explain that if a mare want to join she had to ask to the head mare, but the stallion can bring new mares into the herd if he wants. Those that mean that both the head mare as the stallion have to agree if a mare joins or not? Oh and something that is bother me. If the stallion don't approved the mare that the head mare bring did he have the power to kick the candidate out of the herd? And while we are in the subject, the stallion (lets said, have a argument with his head mare) can remove her position and put another mare as the head?
And sorry for insist but, did the zebras have the same rules relevant to herd, or did they have some rituals for initiation or when they want to join one?
2022357 I had to open up another tab to read and respond to your questions, but I dont mind
The mare and stallion can agree on a mare but the stallion is the one who initialy chooses who he wants in the herd. She is there for a mares perspective, like if he thinks she's hot but she knows that she is a total hoe: she can tell him and he can decide whether or not to want her in the herd.
The mare has the power of suggest a mare and bring her in, but if the stallion dosn't like the mare the head mare chooses, he can ask her to leave the herd. but if the head mare dosn't approve of his actions and thy have a fight: He can replace her with another mare.
Zebra's follow a slightly different set of herd rules: A female zedra has more strips then a male, but the males are bigger. So a female will look for a male with the biggedt strips. the bigger strips mean a stronger male and one that will make the best mate. The female will wear a assortment of flowers in her mane to get the males attention. Once the male accepts the female as a lover, other zebra's she allows can use the male for reproductive perpuses.
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Interesting, I though the stallion was who had the final word whatever a mare joins or not, but it's looks like the balance is there but in different ways.
This is more like a suggestion/asking, but: Since Alex is human and it's looks like the first human in a herd, why don't alter some rules as he see fit? You know, make, change or create rules for a HUMAN herd. For example, this that you did when is the first love interesting or head mare that decided whatever create or not a herd.
The human 3 dates rules in witch the human male, will bond with his special somepony before proceeding to the intimacy act.
And finally the equality rights in witch if new candidates appear, both him and the head mare must agree to the mare to join them, and before joining she have the 3 days of bonding with BOTH of them, before officially join.
And of course, if she join the first date as official herd mate can lead to the intimacy moment, but only if the stallion agree and suggest, (and the mare can also refuse the offer). Something like that. Tell me what you think
2022548 that is a very interesting thing to suggest, for the simple fact that I was thinking the same thing.
See I intentionaly left made the clop scene in chapter 15 invalid in 16 is because I felt the Bon Bon/Alex relationship would seem rushed and out of place. So im thinking: At the picnic, Bon Bon explains to Alex her interest in staring a herd. But Alex is a little confricted with the matter, He may have said he is open to it but he didn't expect to have it rushed in it conclusion. So he explains to the two mares the process of human relationships. Bon Bon and Lyra both agree to let a 3 day dating period for each of them. To get to know eachother deeper and allow for a more stable bond between the Lyra/alex/Bon Bon relationship. What do you think?
P.S. this comment section will be deticated to all story based ideas and comments. All are welcome and all will be discussed.
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I see, good thinking, must of the stories I have read, always en with the human accepting full the rules of the herd in pony society, so is a very nice change that now, this will have some change and they will let him impute some of his human culture into the mix, I think Lyra will be more than excited to implement this new experiment.
Ah and now that I think about it, did you have something plan for his future job?
2022760 possibly a marrage of some kind. why?
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Marrange? Don't you mean Manage? And the reason is that I was wondering if you were planning to do what everybody does, and give him a job as a massager in the spa.
2022786 I did mean 'marriage', but my brain died for a second.
But a job will come later in this story, for a bunch of dates need money to afford them, you see. but no, massager will not be his job, What job do you think he should have?
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I frankly don't know, I need to know more of his personality and his hobbies.
So far, is the classic work for the apples.
The massager is already out the question.
And we all know he is more than weak than a mare, and they are weaker than stallions, so royal guard sounds a little difficult.
I don't know how good he is dissolving problems, soooo…maybe peace maker, psychologist, or perhaps assisting the mayor, you know like her assistance or perhaps another person who witch she can divide the problems in town and work them all.
What you think?
2022882 I like the mayor assistant, I haven't read many stories that involve her and she Is one of the many ponies i personaly like. So maybe that could work.
2024379 yeah thats true, put I'll keep it teen until then.
attention readers I might not update this story for a few day since im going to the doctors on wednesday, so I'll try and finish the next chapter by tuesday so I can get ready to go. talk to you all soon and please be kind to....ah screw it do what you want