Cancelled; leaving it up to remind me how terrible I was a year ago how much I've improved.
Yet another rejection letter from the Wonderbolts causes Rainbow to doubt her abilities, her usual confidence shaken more than she can admit.
When a pony offers to cast a spell on her that could make her better with no effort, Dash is skeptical. But her ineffective workouts, and numerous flashes of weakness cause her to reconsider the offer...oblivious to the poisonous plan behind it, and the consequences her decision might have.
Note: Contains PG mind rape, stalker undertones, stalker overtones, a trippy dream sequence, and invasion of personal space.
Chapters (5)
Looks like a good story, I'll add to read later. till theniambrony.jsmart.web.id/mlp/gif/48392__safe_fluttershy_animated_ponies-in-real-life_fan_artist-oppositebros_house.gif
Wow good story i really liked it
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I like this; definitely has major potential.
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Faved!
" It didn’t take an empathy to notice"
should be
" It didn’t take an empath to notice"
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Dumb spell check...
Thanks for the notice
Hehe, no comments; either I'm unpopular or this was as much of a mind screw as I hoped it would be
Curse you cliffhangers! I want more!
More!!!!!
Please continue, I like where this is going!
So, what're the reasons for this story's hiatus?
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It depressed me too much to continue. Partially from content, partially from themes, and partially from the severe lack of editors and abundance of typos.
I'll finish it one of these days--I've got about 1200 words written of chapter 4 but haven't touched it since October '12.
need a new emoticon?
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why not zoidberg?
AT LEAST get to the spell chapter!
aww, cancelled?
I was really looking forward to reading this...
3285645 It was too generic; a lot of my other stories cover the same themes, and are much better written. You could read those instead. You know, if you want
Awww...this was just getting good. I love Chrissy stories
6904115 I will have to politely disagree; this story is awful. I don't know what the author was thinking.
6904499 lol aren't you the author? So you should tell me. It's a little choppy but the premise is good, the queen is trying to exploit a character weakness in one of the main six to take over equestria and in rainbows case its over zealous pride. Like some of the other commenters this story has potential.