After working every day with the Weather Patrol for Ponyville and Cloudsdale, Rainbow Dash discovers the Wonderbolts are holding a contest to see who is worthy of becoming a new Wonderbolt.
With her strike of luck, she doesn't just win the competition, but Soarins heart, but their relationship is kept hidden from others until it becomes public at the Grand Galloping Gala. If they thought Spitfires jealousy was bad, wait until all of Equestria gets involved.
(And one more thing. I know there are typos and I'm trying to spot them so don't make a prissy ass comment about something I'm already trying to fix. if you do don't bother to read it)
Chapters (3)
Well, I thought this was pretty good, especially considering that this is your first fic. I do agree with Tamara Bloodhoof , tho, If I were you I would add more setting. You can still have a pretty short fic, if that's what you're looking for, but if you add more setting, then it will give the readers a better experience. ( And I know this from experience myself; I've written some stuff, gotten comments, and then I edited it.)
Overall, I like Rainbowsoar; Rainbow is ALWAYS being paired with the mane six, so it's nice to see her with Soarin. Good job, I hope to see more stuff from you! You're a good writer!
1194222 awe thanks ill edit it when i get time im working on part 3 i had to re start it because of the coments but thank you
Sure thing!
:mlp-tbob:
I can't tell if the "girlfriend" thing came on to quickly or just right. There are a few grammatical errors here and there but other than that I love it!!!!
I really like your story but I would like to know how it continues. How could you be finished already???
1194093
These ones
Rainbow Dash walked to the center of the floor, and began flapping her wings. With a split second she began using agility and doing 360s around the arena. She had mastered her routine in the short two hours and all that was left, the Sonic Rainboom. She flew to the sky and began bolting down as she picked up speed, her tears flew back her face and then it happened, the Rainboom. The sky filled with color and the rainbow wrapped around the arena and Cloudsdale. People from Ponyville and Canterlot watched in awe as Rainbow Dash finished her routine.
Way to fast, slow it down a bit. I'm guilty of it too, but we both just need to slow down.
1194419
Thanx! 
Ok, I was just mentioning it... I know what it's like to write out detail, and it can be REALLY tedious!
BAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWW
decent fix the grammar, and make the romance a little more out their. ... if thats okay with you.
Awwwwwwwwwwww
1194824 im still working on it dont worry im just really busy but ill have part 3 up by sunday!
1196888 yay
1196109 i edited it all tonight but only part one just before but thanks for your opinion !
It's to awesome! More Chapters!!!!!!!
1201046 awe thank you ill have chapter three up by tomorrow
Yay
I Love this so much! what a great start! :D
1204013 thank you if youre wondering im having part 3 up by tonight so stay close :3
fc05.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/218/b/e/epic_brohoof_by_mixermike622-d45m32o.gif
this is how i imagined scootaloo and rainbow dash brohoofing
So sorry I'm late, family emergancy today so i didnt get to work on it until late but it's here sorry for any typos or problems I'll edit it soon I'm sorry if i don't catch every typo or mistake i'm trying
Nice, but one question bacon?
wait a second make that two were did Pinkieeee... never mind.
1211130 i ment to add tat in ... thanks
oh i rly love this story
so cute
but there were a few spelling errors..may want to fix that, just saying
ME GUSTA MUCHO!!!!!
............
D'awwww
AMAZING!!!!
On one of the chapters You Should have Derpy In their :D P.S You deserve 3 Mustaches..
There are a few errors with grammar as you said but other than that you are doing a fine you just try to improve that grammar (it might be that damn auto correct but i dont know)
you may want to read all 3 chapters over again there are several mistakes in grammar and spelling...other than that interesting story
this story is
out of 
I think that you should continue it until Soarin and Rainbow get married and have children... Otherwise, lovin it!
Okay, a bit fast, out of character. You did get pinkie personality spot on though. Nice story.
Look I know that the story is....its not like me saying something like this but its awesome and love this chapters pic
Dawwwwwwwwwwwwww
love all three chapters. But i'm dieing to see what happens next!!!!
That was awesome I love this story can,t wait for the next chapter.
THE FEELS!!!! ^///v\\\^
Awesome story!
PLS UPDATE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE