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TheCrimsonDM


Big fan of fantasy and lesbians. If you want magic, lesbians, or ponies, you've come to the right place. Follow me itch.io if you want to see my visual novels. https://thecrimsondm-vanillia.itch.io/

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After losing the stallion of her dreams Cheerilee had to wonder if there was ever a chance for happiness again? Little did she know another mare felt just like her.

This is a request for a friend. Had a lot of fun with the idea.

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Comments ( 15 )

So here's the major plothole in every one of these. Cheerilee was never once to be shown interested in Big Mac past that one episode (and even then, 99.999% of that mess was the CMC's fault.)

Marble is just sad and pitiful all around. If she ever was into Mac, she was always too much of a coward and a wimp to do anything about it. So she deserves to be forever single.

Yes, I read the story. No, I'm not sorry at all.

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There were a few background references, as well as Cheerilee outright swooning for him in Filli Vanilli

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who shoved the stick up your ass, pal?

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Who thinks I care if people don't like my opinion? It's not my problem if people don't. And maybe I do have one. But that's your opinion.

This was definitely cute

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Glad you liked it. Not something I'd normally do myself but it was a load of fun to make.

I had not thought of this pairing before today. Now that I see it, I wish there were more of it.

And Marble is a shy little sweetheart who deserves all the happiness she can get.

Until next time...
Anon e Mouse Jr.

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agreed, even ponies with 'absolutely terrified of the entire world because they were likely very sheltered' disorder should be loved.

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Marble has been one of my favorite ponies since I saw her in "Hearthbreakers". :twilightsmile:

Until next time...
Anon e Mouse Jr.

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your opinion is just factually wrong man. i offer free ass-stick removal surgery if you'd like to book in

What does the rest of the Pie Sisters thinks of this?

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Lets all be honest here, Pinkie's just going to be excited :pinkiehappy:. Not sure about the others but if I ever write a sequel, could be fun. XD

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Ah yes, gatekeeping. My favorite.

Comments aside, this story is short, simple, and cute. Never imagined Cheerilee and Marble Pie interacting, but you make a good case for it. I bet Pinkie would be happy and surprised to see her sister making friends for once. :pinkiegasp:

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I'll be honest, I never thought of it either. Once it was suggested as a story request though, it made so much sense. These two are actually almost perfect in a strange sort of way. Thanks for the kind comments as well. XD

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