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TheCrimsonDM


Big fan of fantasy and lesbians. If you want magic, lesbians, or ponies, you've come to the right place. Follow me itch.io if you want to see my visual novels. https://thecrimsondm-vanillia.itch.io/

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Years ago Luna had found a handsome stallion who had treated her as an equal. A kind gentle pony from a carnival a long time ago. The kiss they shared still fresh on her mind, will she be lucky enough to encounter them a second time on this night?

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Cute, very cute. I've enjoyed it; *Applause* ...It still has some grammatical errors, but I assure you that the story was very good.

10509251
Thank you. XD
Considering I only remembered it was Halloween yesterday, I figured there might be a few errors when editing it. Still it was a fun treat to write.

I love Luna and Mac stories! This was very well written, and very well executed. Fave and a like, well deserved. :eeyup:

10510210
Thank you. XD
I am a fan of the ship myself. I'm a little surprised that after all these years this was the first time I've actually written this ship. lol

10510214
Well, if you get the chance, then you can write more. :raritywink:

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I'm honestly considering how to add this ship into the longer project I've been working on. It's gonna be a minute before that happens though lol.

10510236
Well, you already have a nice baseline, Luna feeling lonely, Big Mac always working, but would love some adventure. What could be more adventurous than the path to love? :heart:

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