1193994 This person, I thought was a friend, is Myles. I can't believe this...how did he get here...? How did he get in? I wonder if my parents are okay... As much as I want to check, something else has a different plan for me. I feel a rippling sensation in my chest, and then a pull.
I'm really liking this so far. It's got great descriptive paragraphs, and you spin a very good 'Day In The Life' style yarn. For sure going to check out the rest when I get a chance.
Not bad so far but I do hope you'll eventually give some form of explanation of why his "friend" would sneak into his house and murder him. It feels like I missed a few paragraphs somewhere. Other than that I think it's a pretty good start.
hot pinkie is hot
10/10 would definite fuck? YES![:pinkiecrazy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiecrazy.png)
1193994![:rainbowwild:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowwild.png)
1193994 myles................. thats what you think for everything...............even you own mother!
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This person, I thought was a friend, is Myles. I can't believe this...how did he get here...? How did he get in? I wonder if my parents are okay... As much as I want to check, something else has a different plan for me. I feel a rippling sensation in my chest, and then a pull.
Great just great
*shakes head head and looks up from the picture* Did something happen?
Hey, dude.
I'm really liking this so far. It's got great descriptive paragraphs, and you spin a very good 'Day In The Life' style yarn. For sure going to check out the rest when I get a chance.
Keep it, up, dude!
murder i say this is ...UNACCEPTABLE
but seriously awesome dude
Dude I want to see someone break as many of your rules as possible in one story just to see how you would react to it![:rainbowlaugh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowlaugh.png)
Not bad so far but I do hope you'll eventually give some form of explanation of why his "friend" would sneak into his house and murder him. It feels like I missed a few paragraphs somewhere. Other than that I think it's a pretty good start.