Twilight thought she was ready, with her friends, there is nothing that they couldn't do, or so she thought.
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Alternate universe where everyone didn't come in time to save our girls+Spike.(based on s9 ep25)
Don't worry I drew the cover.
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Oh man that so sad man I've had another story like this before and it was sad to knowing what if they didn't make it in time to save the Mane 6 and Spike but I always wonder what's going to happen next for her knowing that her friends are gone 😔
I’m not crying you’re crying
What happen to the Trio?
Needs a little bit more editing
An intriguing idea, but I'm afraid its execution let the story down. The text itself is the biggest flaw; the formatting is unrefined and, at times, downright sloppy. Commas are often missing or misplaced, run-on sentences abound, and the story as a whole has a disconcerting "ad hoc" feel to it.
The final paragraph is particularly egregious; after rereading it several times over, I still cannot tell what was supposed to be happening within it. Did Twilight vaporize the Trio? Did the Trio vaporize Twilight? What happened to Discord? So on and so forth.
The idea has promise, and I commend you for publishing your first story—the first step is always the hardest, as some say. However, for future reference, you might want to consider doing some more proofreading of your stories before you publish them.
Honestly not bad for a first try. Editing was needed and the last paragraph just kind of thrown in there. While just giving me more questions than answers. But keep at it you will get better.
When you think about it they basically surrendered for nothing. The whole reason they surrendered was because they threatened to hurt/kill spike, but they did that anyways. Also, I am confused on some things.
Rainbow dash: No matter what we face it together
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Ah~ Thank you all for being so kind, I always wanted to write a story about MLP but I never did have time nor skill but I hope I get better.
English wasn't my first language but I wan't to get better maybe one day i'll rewrite this.
:)
Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo.
At least Twilight has Starlight and Discord to be there for her.
Oh my god. And discord is there too, oh my goodness, Ya know, this is sort of what i was curious to see happen. I didnt expect them to die in the show, but i had assumed that they would get really hurt and be knocked out and Discord would realize he crapped up. Then they would wake up and yeah. we never even see much blame at discord for all that happened
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What happened to the trio?.
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When all else has fallen, Vengance remains.
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Twilight may have destroyed them.
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If Twilight have killed those three, then I will never forgive her!
Mangekyou Sharingan awakened
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Don't get mad at me, but I hope it's the latter.
Who cares, honestly? He can die and rot in hell for all I care.