Cozy Glow one day decides to try and corrupt some blind pony from the neighboring village, but how is Cozy supposed to do this when Snowdrop keeps being so friendly, and lovable towards Cozy?
I'm really not sure how to feel about this story. The premise is very creative. I feel like it could become a gripping, thought-provoking tale about child-on-child sex abuse. But it runs the risk of becoming a very cringey, terrifying story that will make a lot of people feel repulsed. Foalcon is always a touchy subject, but especially when it involves Cozy.
Nah, this is a romance. I want there to be a bit more meaning in this story even though it's also gonna be cloppy, but cute at the same time. There's only one chapter at this point in time, and in it, the two of them haven't even met yet.
10501581 Yes, Cozy's behavior is supposed to be perceived as bratty. Also she doesn't have her cutie mark yet. Gives you a good idea of where the story is in the timeline.
doesn't an air conditioner make you colder
I will watch your story with great interest!
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I mean... heater.
Fixed, thanks!
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No, but if it's as cold as insinuated, it might make you warmer? Maybe? Author got everything else right.
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No problem.
I'm really not sure how to feel about this story. The premise is very creative. I feel like it could become a gripping, thought-provoking tale about child-on-child sex abuse. But it runs the risk of becoming a very cringey, terrifying story that will make a lot of people feel repulsed. Foalcon is always a touchy subject, but especially when it involves Cozy.
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Some air conditioning units work as reversible heat pumps, which provide heat in the winter.
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Never crossed my mind. Huh?
Image source?
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Derpi image 2472817.
"OMG! She raped Snowdrop!"
"YOU BASTARD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
That's right: this is me being utterly infuriated at such a concept being put into creation.
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No dark tag.
It's Cozy, sure, but rape...?
Nah, this is a romance. I want there to be a bit more meaning in this story even though it's also gonna be cloppy, but cute at the same time. There's only one chapter at this point in time, and in it, the two of them haven't even met yet.
Anyways, read what you like.
good start so far, but wow already 40% dislike WTF! . for what reason xD
cozy's bratty behavior is rather milder then i expeckted, can get only worse over time ^^
havent seen a story with snowdrop in a long time, looking forward to read more :)
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Yes, Cozy's behavior is supposed to be perceived as bratty. Also she doesn't have her cutie mark yet. Gives you a good idea of where the story is in the timeline.