Well, well PonyJoel this is a hella good start of the sequel for the main 6 counterparts, and with Applebloom creepy habit to hack the camera system surveillance records of what happens to Sunset and the bitch princess Twilight using the guilt trip on sunset head to bring her back to Equestria. I'm intrigued. 🍺

I'll wait for the next chapter of this sequel spin-off series and also I'll wait for the next exciting chapter of Spike the Fairy.👆
until then Peace.👆

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Thanks. Remember, this story from this chapter has 5 remaining. Apple Bloom visits a dark website. She didn't hack.

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Oh, that's my bad. Anyway how did Applebloom able to got the idea to go the dark web to have access to the camera system in the first place just spy on her big sister Applejack. that's plain straight-up creepy, I've got chill down my spine and I like it. Oh of course she is lonely. The damn first chapter is a good start, can wait for chapter 2 on this early horror month to see what's unfolding suspense tale with a twist of horror. 🔪

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Thanks. I wonder if you can guess which movie I'm inspired by for Sunset's adventure.

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Ah men that's a tough one, well I'm getting a vibe from an old 90's suspense with a slice of Horror of the "NET" I did watch it on the plane flight back from a trip from Costa Rica. Or maybe some inspiration from the TV hit series The X-Files from the 90's to the early 2000s. Those are my guess as well I could be wrong.🍺🤔

What's the death tag for?

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you'll see.

Applejack sighs. "Don't worry; I will. Sorry that I chose to spend more of my time with my friends than you, Apple Bloom. I didn't know it would lead you into this nasty habit. So, is there a camera that we can look at?"

Yeah, no. I'm pretty sure Applebloom's actions are illegal and instead of feeling bad for committing a crime she's just all like "Spend more time with me and I won't have to do it" and Applejack is the one to feel guilt and apologize like she's the one in the wrong instead on scolding and punishing her. I also don't care if this whole fic is a reference to something I still stand by this.

"Be glad I only watched you whenever you are with your friends. Be glad I'm not using the site for other sick ideas," Apple Bloom retorts.

No, you little brat you are committing a crime and need to be punished for your lack of care for other's privacy.

"Thank Apple Bloom for her disturbing habit. Otherwise, we wouldn't know what went down. Girls, we need to include the Career Making Crusaders during our time to hang out. We can't leave them hanging after hearing what Princess Twilight and her friends did to their Spike."

Yeah be grateful she committed a crime because it helped you learned what happened to your friend. Seriously, you have done things that have annoyed me, but I think this is the worst one yet. I'm only sticking around to get some answers, since I still don't buy your reasoning for having Sunset stay and am hoping this fic has good answers for that.

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I have to agree with you right there. Hope PonyJoel look into that.

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I doubt he will. Every time I brought up some valid concerns he always brushes them off and continues to write how he writes things to be. Normally, despite my issues that is fine. He can write how he sees fit and all I can do is critique them how I see fit, but this example with Applebloom is more horrible than usual, since the whole point of the main fic is Twilight and the gang being punished for their crimes against Spike and yet Applebloom gets away for her crime and even has the gull to criticize Twilight for hers. I know Twilight's crimes are worse, but still. It's like Joel needed a reason for the human mane 6 to know what happened and instead of them being with Sunset at the time, which would have worked much better, he just had Applebloom commit a crime and downplay how horrible it is, by only calling it a nasty habbit and not punishing her for it, despite again the main point of the main fic being to punish Twilight and the girl's for their abuse of Spike.

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That's frickin hypocritical at worst!!! And a author should read, listen, and comment on the comment section.

Since this fic will be tackling the whole thing with human sunset and how equestria Sunset is actually affecting her life and all that Might as well lay out my issues with that idea and other things here in the hopes they get addressed in this fic

"It doesn't matter whose fault it was. What you did is vile, unforgivable. How dare you, the Princess of Friendship, put a baby dragon through all that trauma while preaching what friendship is supposed to be. How dare you!? " Sunset yells at Twilight. "How dare you watch idly while your baby dragon was nearly drowning in a freezing lake!? How dare you make him clean an entire castle all by himself without any help!? HOW DARE YOU REDUCE SPIKE'S LIFE INTO SLAVERY!? WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU, PRINCESS OF FRIENDSHIP?!"

I mean Starlight's actions with the whole time travel fiasco was actually much worse and she was forgiven easily and before you point out it was undone it doesn't change how harmful her actions were and could have been. Again beating a dead horse in having someone else scold Twilight when it has been done enough times and every other time was after her doing something new that's bad. Also replaying a scene from the main fic in detail instead of summarizing it, seems a little unnecessary and feels more like padding, but you do you.

"You decided to live someone else's life by coming here. Ruining that Sunset Shimmer on achieving her goals and dreams because someone here is exactly like her. The truth hurts, Sunset. It's time to come home."

Again how is she when they have never met and human Sunset most likely doesn't know about her and should have been living her normal life?

"That fucking bitch," Applejack and Apple Bloom said in unison. They couldn't believe that Princess Twilight Sparkle gave Sunset Shimmer a guilty conscience for her to go back to Equestria. They watch Sunset cry her eyes out.

Still don't understand this. If Sunset was actually doing harm to human Sunset than it's a good thing for Twilight to bring it up, so why is everyone acting like it's wrong for her to do it, when the main fic is acting like it's for the best she returns to Equestria. You can't have it both ways.

Canterlot High is back in session as summer break comes to an end. Sunset Shimmer comes out of the portal happier than ever. However, they have eyes on this Sunset and decides to initiate their plans.

They are the ultimate butt pull to justified Sunset returning to Equestria and why she is harming human Sunset. Seriously, though hoping you actually explain and give good answers for my questions about Sunset's situation. I think's that's everything relevant so far. I will bring up other issues when they come up in later chapters.