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Mechawrecker


Writing is surprisingly satisfying.

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After the Gauntlet of Fire, Garble is banished from the Dragonlands for his unruly behavior. Now in exile, he prowls in the shadows, hoping for a chance to take revenge on those who wronged him. As he scrounges for food on the outskirts of civilization, a certain stony mare with an even stonier personality might be just what he needs.

But what does he need her for?


Cover art by PurfectPrincessGirl

Edited and proofread by EverfreePony

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 16 )

10488347
Thanks! I always loved minor characters.:twilightsmile:

NVC

This was fun. Any chance this may get a sequel?

10488526
I'm not sure. I intended for it to be a one shot, but I do have a few ideas rattling around.:pinkiegasp:

Well this was a pretty interesting story to see how maud been doing and what happened to garble not only he's injured but his pride even hurts as well so he tried to rob muads wagon of gems but she stop him but she Mercy him and try to get him in shelter from the rain but of course garble was not happy about it but what muad did is very nice even though he did not show any appreciation but after the rain stopped and she woke up he was gone but the Ruby she gave is gone with him nice job on the story by the way is there more to it or something if not that's okay

10489145
This was meant to be a one shot, but I might make a sequel if people like it enough.

Greetings from the Reviewer's Mansion, have a review!

Could have used a lot more dialogue but an interesting idea.

10572326
Thanks for the feedback! I tried to shy away from dialogue since it's Maud.:twilightsheepish:

10572485
You're welcome I just figured it would help stretch out their relationship.

I like it. An enjoyable read. :)

10833655
Thanks! I always thought Garble should get more wholesome stories.:twilightsmile:

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