Tempest In A Teacup

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JackRipper #1 · Oct 17th, 2020 · 1 · ·

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Preemptively added this one to my private library before approving it.

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Gay For Gadot #2 · Oct 17th, 2020 · · ·

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Oh wow! Thanks! I hope you like it!

Hobbestc

Hobbestc #3 · Oct 17th, 2020 · 3 · ·

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Damn, when this popped up in my feed without a picture I was expecting to see Tempest. Ya know, Commander Tempest. In a teacup. I'm a bit let down.

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Gay For Gadot #4 · Oct 17th, 2020 · 2 · ·

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Does this work?

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Hobbestc #5 · Oct 17th, 2020 · 3 · ·

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YES! That works for me.

Shrinky Frod

Shrinky Frod #6 · Oct 17th, 2020 · 2 · ·

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“How do you like your eggs in the morning?”

<corny> "Fertilized."

"Okay, leaving aside the logistical issues, that is moving a teeeeeensy bit fast." </corny>

Woof. And I mean that in a good way!

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Gay For Gadot #7 · Oct 17th, 2020 · · ·

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Not gonna lie, I thought of a similar exchange to that when I finished this...

And glad you enjoyed it!

the flying spaghetti monster

the flying spaghetti monster #8 · Oct 18th, 2020 · 1 · ·

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Simply wonderful! I've always loved the chemistry between these two, but seeing it as a full-on romance - and beyond! - was a treat. Thanks for the story, I hope to see more.

Gay For Gadot

Gay For Gadot #9 · Oct 18th, 2020 · · ·

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Glad you liked it! I do have a few more StarTrix ideas (clop and not) in mind for the future, so I hope you like those when they're out!

The Eroticator

The Eroticator #10 · Oct 19th, 2020 · 3 · ·

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This doesn't hit beyond the basics for me, but I can still recognize a near-perfect piece of erotica when I read one. Your prose is uniquely evocative, you nailed both main characters, and the overall tone is a nice blend of sweet and sexy. There's an aura of authenticity here, probably because you're actually a girl, haha. I look forward to whatever you write next, clop or otherwise.

Gay For Gadot

Gay For Gadot #11 · Oct 20th, 2020 · 1 · ·

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Wow, that's high praise! Thank you so much! I hope you enjoy more of my work!

Sledge115

Sledge115 #12 · Oct 27th, 2020 · 1 · ·

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What’s the matter, Starlight? See something you like?”
Splayed across the cozy comforter atop her neatly made bed, a lone rose clenched between her teeth, lay Trixie. In the glow of the firefly lantern on her nightstand, her mane, coat, and tail sparkled with the sheen of a luxurious, expensive conditioner that had tamed them to perfection. Her hooves had been polished, keratin reflecting the soft yellow light. Eyelids lowered, she gave a playful wiggle of her eyebrows and winked at her visitor. Wearing her trademark magician’s hat and cape, she was ever the showmare.

Snrk, such a Trixie way to open things.

All in all, this was a lovely, romantic piece I love how intertwined the prose is to the emotions, it pulls you right in and makes ya feel fluffy and warm inside. These two are outright adorable with one another and it shows. Definitely a favourite (in the private stash, shhh ).

Gay For Gadot

Gay For Gadot #13 · Oct 27th, 2020 · · ·

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Glad that you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading and commenting. And for the secret fave...

thatboi

thatboi #14 · Nov 11th, 2020 · 3 · ·

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Not bad at all. Found the character interactions to be well-done with competent enough characterization and the orgasm paragraph in the last three quarters was interesting. Liked your use of imagery and dialogue to highlight the sexual tension, really sold me on the ship.

Elric of Melnipony

Elric of Melnipony #15 · Nov 27th, 2020 · 1 · ·

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This was very well written. I don't just mean the action -- the little moments, the buildup, the transitions, all of it worked very well together.

Gay For Gadot

Gay For Gadot #16 · Nov 27th, 2020 · 1 · ·

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Thanks! Glad you thought so.

Bicyclette

Bicyclette #17 · Dec 17th, 2020 · 1 · ·

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Reading this, I can see why you like my stuff. Our writing styles are very different but there are a lot of things we have in common!

On the shower shelf meant to hold a bar of soap—or some overpriced, spa-brand shampoo and conditioner—was an empty glass bottle. The cork stopper had been removed and set aside. Bit by bit, pink magic flowed in time with Starlight’s efforts, following its path into the bottle.

Recontextualizing plot devices from children’s TV shows into plot devices for sex things is tight!

Starlight’s swollen clitoris winked at her ministrations,

This is the exact kind of overwrought vocabulary I have to keep fighting myself not to use and occasionally failing!

A guttural moan emanated from Starlight’s throat. “Trix, aaah! Ah, f-fuck…”

Starlight says the fuckword? Scandalous!

Real magic was far from Trixie’s talent. However, she had learned a thing or two about soundproofing spells over the years. Living in a wagon lent her little privacy. On the nights when she had entertained an audience of one—or two, that one time—such a spell meant the difference between a hushed, methodical performance and an explosive one.

My Equestria also places a lot of importance on soundproofing technology! Though in mine the magic is commodified and available to all. Earth mares need privacy too!

A high-pitched squeal brought Trixie back to the situation at hoof. Er, under hoof.

Nice. What else you got?

Drama was her own middle name, after all, right between “Trixie” and “Lulamoon”.

Yes.

Giggling, Trixie booped Starlight’s nose. “Good.”

Awwwww

Splayed across the cozy comforter atop her neatly made bed, a lone rose clenched between her teeth, lay Trixie. In the glow of the firefly lantern on her nightstand, her mane, coat, and tail sparkled with the sheen of a luxurious, expensive conditioner that had tamed them to perfection. Her hooves had been polished, keratin reflecting the soft yellow light. Eyelids lowered, she gave a playful wiggle of her eyebrows and winked at her visitor. Wearing her trademark magician’s hat and cape, she was ever the showmare.

Figuring out how somepony would seduce another by display in a world where everyone is nude is non-trivial. It’s neat how you found a solution that’s different from what I came up with that, uh, *tugs collar* works.

“Trix,” Starlight said, once she could breathe again, “I never wanted you to find out about this. I know I shouldn’t hide my feelings, but…” She let the bottle hover in the air between them. “I didn’t want what’s in here to ruin our friendship.”

Oof, the genuineness.

The immediate response that snapped through Trixie’s synapses was to laugh and assure Starlight that she was being a very silly pony.

Another line I might have written. “Synapses”? Nerd.

The word that lingered between them was one that Trixie had not heard in many years. Longer, if she didn’t count her own mother saying it.

Feels!

Tonight’s plan had involved much of the same, showing off her prowess, having a good time, and, if things went well, cooking Starlight eggs in the morning.

I gotta say, the mental image of ponies cooking eggs for each other is really funny to me for some reason.

This, however... This level of intimacy, of looking into Starlight’s eyes and finding herself reflected in them… Of holding her close, of feeling her heart beating, her starry cape blanketing them both…

Ugh, intimacy is the best.

Like a three-part magic act, they were between the pledge and the prestige. They met at the turn: The part where the magician would take something ordinary, and then make it seem extraordinary. There was immense beauty in that. Beauty dwarfed only by Starlight’s own, her glistening smile and shimmering eyes and sparkling mane and luscious coat beating it by miles of wagon wheel.

Good work incorporating this! I, too, enjoyed The Prestige.

“Bondage equipment,” Trixie finished without a hint of embarrassment. “It requires the submissive to put it on him—or her—self, then choose a safeword. The limiter blocks any type of magic from being used by the wearer, but can be removed by either the submissive or the dominant using the safeword. Thinking of the safeword does the same thing, just in case the submissive’s mouth is—ah—otherwise occupied.”

Look, I get that it’s hard to come up with ideas for fics but it is really messed up that you invented a time-traveling mind-reading device to take this idea from my head, including literally all of the details of requiring safeword pre-clearance and allowing the mouth to be occupied, without my consent. I feel violated.

While Trixie had made the wagon rock many times—maybe too many—tonight was the first time that somepony’s words alone had left her breathless. Fire flowed from her erratic heart and proliferated through her veins, making every hair on her coat, mane, and tail stand on end.

Oof, Trixie has a virgin fetish? Or I guess more specifically a Starlight-Glimmer-Being-A-Virgin fetish?

But they weren’t lesser mares. They were Starlight Glimmer, the most powerful unicorn in Equestria, and Trixie Lulamoon—a close second.

Ah, the fictions we invent.

“Please.” The word was barely more than a moan. “I need this. I need you.” Breathing hard, Starlight shuddered in Trixie’s grasp. Her racing heartbeat was palpable through both of their coats. “I don’t want to wait or take it slow.” Her words dripped with urgency, with longing, with what Trixie recognized as Starlight's zeal and passion and aspiration for life… directed towards her. “I want you to do whatever you want to me tonight.”

Nice.

Starlight giggled into a forehoof. “Because it was so cute when you learned the transfiguration spell. ‘Teacup, teacup, teacup!’”

Cute!

“Good thing I have an extinguisher nearby. Or, if you prefer…” Trixie exhaled hotly over Starlight’s ear, earning her both a shiver and a moan. “I could use my tongue.”

Nice.

Using her magic, Trixie removed her magician’s hat. Once upside-down, four long strands of scarves in all colors of the rainbow shot free. Aimed precision guided each to its target: one of Starlight’s outstretched hooves. The hapless mare, already robbed of her magical prowess, startled at the speed and force of Trixie’s bonds. The scarves wrapped themselves around the bedposts, winding into tight knots to imprison their victim.

Okay, this is hilarious. Of course this is how Trixie does bondage!

Leaning down, Trixie pressed her lips to Starlight’s cheek. She moved from one cheek to the other, then her forehead again. “Not tonight, Starry,” she said between kisses. “Tonight’s all about you.”

Nice.

Through the growing heat, Trixie sniffed Starlight’s arousal ascending through the air. That sticky sweetness cloyed in her nostrils, spurring the aroma of her own to rise. Under other circumstances, she would already be sending her magic down between them, synchronizing a fitful orgasm below while their mouths were occupied above. Not tonight.

I always imagined this as being something fairly difficult to pull off especially without line of sight, and Trixie despite her self-conception isn’t especially talented with magic, but maybe she just has more practice with similar skills for her shows?

How painfully her heart hammered. How much she shivered at these most basic of affections.

How poetic.

It was like Starlight’s entire body was one erogenous zone.

Ugh, nerd!

Then, after preparing her with a long, slow lick, Trixie took Starlight’s throat in her jaws and bit. Some ponies found such actions to be nothing short of barbaric. Others enjoyed the roughness of it, the blending of pain with pleasure.
Whether due to nature or circumstance, Starlight was one of those who loved it.

This also sounds like something I might have written. The zooming out/contextualization thing feels like something I do a lot, though maybe not yet in this context.

Unicorn horns, like the wings on a pegasus—or an alicorn, Trixie supposed—were some of the most sensitive parts of a pony that weren’t covered by her tail. There was really no flavor, the horn being a thaumic bone with leylines instead of veins. Yet, there was a definite warmth to a unicorn’s horn when sexually stimulated. A unique, pleasant heat for both giver and receiver. However, with the limiter halting Starlight’s magic, Trixie expected there to be little sensation on her end.

Another thing that sounds exactly like something I would have written, ugh. Also the whole part about unicorn horns having a pleasant warm aura for both giver and receiver, yet another idea you stole nonconsensually from my future writing. Terrible.

Despite her bonds, Starlight was twisting and turning, doing everything in her power to push Trixie’s mouth further down. She was dripping like a faucet now, that enticing scent beckoning Trixie forth like the North Star upon the map of the night sky. The sounds echoing from her throat couldn’t properly be described as words anymore. Other than variations of her name and “Please,” everything was some animalistic supplication, some petitioning to gods of old and new for relief from the ache mounting in her core.

This is exactly the kind of overwrought prose that I want to write!

“Good.” With her forehooves on Starlight’s shoulders, Trixie gently rolled her onto her back. Then, she lay against her, holding her close as she let her lover ease into the afterglow.
They lay like that for some time. The peaceful, contented silence was interrupted only by the light kisses Trixie traced down Starlight’s coat, from forehead to jawline and back again. Rather than seeking to arouse, she wanted only to convey her adoration and devotion in turn.

Love this. Love afterglows.

When Trixie suddenly sucked, Starlight tried to buck her hips. With Trixie's forehooves holding her down, she succeeded only in wapping Trixie with her tail. “Your face would definitely be lower,” Starlight seethed, while her own burned.

Love mares playfully/ineffectually slapping with tails.

Streams of sweet, viscous honey flowed freely from the tap, soaking all the way down to Starlight’s dock

Oof. The whole paragraph is very well done.

Caught staring, Trixie met Starlight’s gaze. “You really are beautiful, Starry, you know that?”

Love mares telling each other that they are beautiful.

She started on the outside, licking and nibbling at Starlight’s cutiemarks—which, Trixie now realized, looked like the kites she so embarrassingly adored—bringing forth another series of shudders and moans.

Seriously? You also have cutiemark-play?

“Lucky for you—” Trixie kissed and nibbled at her dock— “all parts of you are my favorite parts of you.”

Hey, you’re good at this, too!

“But we’ll explore that part more another time. Not entirely sanitary for what I’m about to do.”

Thank you! I cringe when I see writing that completely disregards the sanitary implications. Not to mention any realistic depiction of the comfort/pleasure.

Without having so much as touched herself, Trixie felt herself coming undone too, so loud, loud, loud was Starlight, one of the loudest mares she’d ever heard curse and moan and cry and beg like this, and so sweet and tangy and musky and heady and good was her scent and taste in her mouth and nose and nostrils and tongue, all of it dripping down her muzzle and snout, filling her tastebuds, so abundant she had no choice, not that she didn’t want to, but to swallow it, and beyond the flavor was the engulfing, overwhelming, all-encompassing warmth, like she had stuck her face in a furnace, or a box of lit fireworks, or a campfire on the side of a lone mountain path, and it was roaring and building and raging, a tempest and a torrent, a sea of fire and rain coming down from the Heavens, and here she was, Trixie Lulamoon with Starlight Glimmer, and she was going to give it to her, give her everything, all she had, and while she had barely needed a few minutes of attention to explode before, she could feel the magic working now, concentrating everything, anything Starlight had ever felt and working it through her most intimate of parts, and when she finally came, when both of them finally came, it would be earned, Galaxia and Solaris in the fields of Elysium above, Starlight deserved this, and Trixie deserved it, too, and—

Really good use of a run-on sentence. Brava. Seriously! This is amazing. Also exactly the kind of thing I want to write.

When Trixie entwined tongues with Starlight now, her tail did the same down below, the silvery blue strands meeting and finding those of purple and turquoise. Their colors melded and mended as their tongues did the same. Trixie knew Starlight must be tasting herself now, and expected her to recoil, but no such thing happened. Instead, Starlight kissed back with equal, if not greater, passion, moaning and murmuring sweet nothings in their caress.

A great paragraph.

Starlight pressed her bound horn against Trixie’s. She rode out a few more moans before she took a deep breath and answered, “I feel so close to you.”

Okay, I can see why you posted that one comment before. You really do sell this.

Without a word, Trixie’s magic searched through the small icebox tucked under the bed. Two bottles of water levitated up towards them. Starlight murmured a thanks before they both drained one in a single long gulp.

Hydration is important!

Together, they basked in the afterglow, taming the tangles from each others’ hair.

Ugh, so intimate. Is this… is this what long-hairs do?… Have I been missing out?

This is really good stuff overall. Extending the magical worldbuilding to incorporate sexual elements, kink with an emphasis on consent, the intimacy and character, actually considering sexual logistics, all are things I really feel there aren't enough of in the world, or enough so well-done. Thanks for writing.

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Gay For Gadot #19 · Dec 18th, 2020 · 1 · ·

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Holy shit, what a comment. And to think I'm thorough when it comes to analyzing stuff and pointing out different bits. You easily upstaged me here. Really appreciate the time you in not only reading this, but commenting on it.

Recontextualizing plot devices from children’s TV shows into plot devices for sex things is tight!

This story was inspired by the episode, not even gonna pretend otherwise, LOL.

Starlight says the fuckword? Scandalous!

Yeah, I'm all for ponies swearing as long as the context works.

My Equestria also places a lot of importance on soundproofing technology! Though in mine the magic is commodified and available to all. Earth mares need privacy too!

Neat! Don't forget pegasi! (Although, they probably have an easier time finding a private location because, y'know, wings. Then again, the walls of cloudhomes aren't exactly thick...)

Another line I might have written. “Synapses”? Nerd.

My nerdiness bleeds through my writing often, yes.

I gotta say, the mental image of ponies cooking eggs for each other is really funny to me for some reason.

I mean, they canonically eat eggs (Rarity makes some in Sisterhooves Social). This bit is also inspired by the related pickup line (which Trixie states verbatim at the very end of the story).

Good work incorporating this! I, too, enjoyed The Prestige.

Thanks! Such a great movie.

Look, I get that it’s hard to come up with ideas for fics but it is really messed up that you invented a time-traveling mind-reading device to take this idea from my head, including literally all of the details of requiring safeword pre-clearance and allowing the mouth to be occupied, without my consent. I feel violated.

Better I violate your consent than Trixie violates Starlight's. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

Okay, this is hilarious. Of course this is how Trixie does bondage!

Of course! Those magical scarves come in handy!

I always imagined this as being something fairly difficult to pull off especially without line of sight, and Trixie despite her self-conception isn’t especially talented with magic, but maybe she just has more practice with similar skills for her shows?

I headcanon most unicorns as having used their telekinesis this way (if only on particularly lonely nights). Given Trixie's sexual experience, I wouldn't imagine it being too difficult. She also doesn't seem to have any problems with telekinesis/levitation in general, just higher-order spells like teleportation.

Another thing that sounds exactly like something I would have written, ugh. Also the whole part about unicorn horns having a pleasant warm aura for both giver and receiver, yet another idea you stole nonconsensually from my future writing. Terrible.

Sorry, it was too hot not to use. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

This is exactly the kind of overwrought prose that I want to write!

Thanks! I do enjoy prose like this, both reading and writing it. It can be too much at times, but I think it often works well for sensual/erotic scenes.

Seriously? You also have cutiemark-play?

What can I say? It's hot to pay special attention to the magical destiny tattoos.

Thank you! I cringe when I see writing that completely disregards the sanitary implications. Not to mention any realistic depiction of the comfort/pleasure.

Same. Anal can be hot, but it has to be done right (even by magical gay horses) for me to be into it.

Really good use of a run-on sentence. Brava. Seriously! This is amazing. Also exactly the kind of thing I want to write.

Thanks! I was really proud of this one.

Okay, I can see why you posted that one comment before. You really do sell this.

I speak only from experience.

Ugh, so intimate. Is this… is this what long-hairs do?… Have I been missing out?

Sometimes. But you're saving on shampoo and conditioner (probably). There's a trade-off to everything!

This is really good stuff overall. Extending the magical worldbuilding to incorporate sexual elements, kink with an emphasis on consent, the intimacy and character, actually considering sexual logistics, all are things I really feel there aren't enough of in the world, or enough so well-done. Thanks for writing.

Again, thank you for reading and leaving such an in-depth comment! I'm glad you enjoyed it. And whenever you get around to the other StarTrix (no rush), I'm especially eager to see your thoughts on that, given that there is some slight crossover in themes between it and your story. It's more story-driven and dramatic than this, but I'm even more proud of it.

Bicyclette

Bicyclette #20 · Dec 18th, 2020 · 1 · ·

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Holy shit, what a comment. And to think I'm thorough when it comes to analyzing stuff and pointing out different bits. You easily upstaged me here.

*Maud Pie voice* Commenting isn’t a competition…

Really appreciate the time you in not only reading this, but commenting on it.

There are way too few people trying to do what you are doing, so I really appreciate the time you put into writing it! Judging from wordcount, if I wrote this it would have taken me 15-25ish hours?

I mean, they canonically eat eggs (Rarity makes some in Sisterhooves Social). This bit is also inspired by the related pickup line (which Trixie states verbatim at the very end of the story).

For some reason although I know it is canonical that ponies are lacto-ovo vegetarians and do eat eggs by themselves, the idea of them eating eggs by themselves rather than as ingredients in baked goods and such just feels weird? Like, somehow too close to being carnivorous? I don’t know, just this feeling I get.

Better I violate your consent than Trixie violates Starlight's. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

The more consent is baked into the mechanics of the world, the better!

I headcanon most unicorns as having used their telekinesis this way (if only on particularly lonely nights). Given Trixie's sexual experience, I wouldn't imagine it being too difficult. She also doesn't seem to have any problems with telekinesis/levitation in general, just higher-order spells like teleportation.

My objection is purely based on the worldbuilding consequences. If this is true, unicorns have access to a sex toy that can take literally any configuration, including those not materially possible, that they can make appear, function, and disappear magically with their minds. Why would they use anything else? Also, same with the soundproofing thing, I don’t like it when the imbalance in life quality between unicorns and everypony else gets so steep :( Poor non-unicorns!

Sorry, it was too hot not to use. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

Oh, it is super hot. Everypony should use it.

What can I say? It's hot to pay special attention to the magical destiny tattoos.

More like hottie marks, am I right?

Same. Anal can be hot, but it has to be done right (even by magical gay horses) for me to be into it.

Same.

Sometimes. But you're saving on shampoo and conditioner (probably). There's a trade-off to everything!

Oh you could tell me it’s the best experience anyone could have in bed and I still wouldn’t be able to bring myself to let my hair get past my neck. I think it’s a core part of whatever gender identity I have left these days.

Again, thank you for reading and leaving such an in-depth comment! I'm glad you enjoyed it. And whenever you get around to the other StarTrix (no rush), I'm especially eager to see your thoughts on that, given that there is some slight crossover in themes between it and your story. It's more story-driven and dramatic than this, but I'm even more proud of it.

I am really looking forward to that one! I actually started with this one because I wanted to make sure I was in the right space to really read with focus and attention before reading that one. I can already tell from the description and your other work that it is really going to be something special.

Gay For Gadot

Gay For Gadot #21 · Dec 18th, 2020 · 1 · ·

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*Maud Pie voice* Commenting isn’t a competition…

Fair enough, stoic rock pony.

There are way too few people trying to do what you are doing, so I really appreciate the time you put into writing it!

Thanks! Wish there was more stuff like this, but I've always been a, "Fine, I'll do it myself," type. Plus this was a blast to write (along with my other stories), so I don't mind paving my own way.

For some reason although I know it is canonical that ponies are lacto-ovo vegetarians and do eat eggs by themselves, the idea of them eating eggs by themselves rather than as ingredients in baked goods and such just feels weird? Like, somehow too close to being carnivorous? I don’t know, just this feeling I get.

Oh! I can understand that. Fair enough.

My objection is purely based on the worldbuilding consequences. If this is true, unicorns have access to a sex toy that can take literally any configuration, including those not materially possible, that they can make appear, function, and disappear magically with their minds. Why would they use anything else? Also, same with the soundproofing thing, I don’t like it when the imbalance in life quality between unicorns and everypony else gets so steep :( Poor non-unicorns!

Hmm, I feel like I should clarify a bit. Rather than this passage implying something like what Starlight did to Trixie in your story (horn-magic tentacles for the win!), I meant it in a much simpler, more primitive way. What I intended was that unicorns could use their magic in the bedroom in a way that's not much different from, say, opening a door or picking up a cup. Just using it to surround their/their partner's genitals with their mana and stroking it/them. I also headcanon magic as feeling warm to the touch, so this makes it extra fun. Something like Starlight's spell or forming actual shapes/parts would probably be something that most unicorns, including Trixie, couldn't do without a lot of practice.

Unicorns canonically have some advantages that even the kindest of canon can't make up for, unfortunately. I don't see any reason why some of these advantages can't be passed on to the other races/species through technology etc. though.

More like hottie marks, am I right?

I'm stealing this.

I am really looking forward to that one! I actually started with this one because I wanted to make sure I was in the right space to really read with focus and attention before reading that one. I can already tell from the description and your other work that it is really going to be something special.

Glad to hear you are looking forward to it. I hope it meets your expectations.

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Bicyclette #22 · Dec 18th, 2020 · 1 · ·

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I also headcanon magic as feeling warm to the touch, so this makes it extra fun.

Me too! Warm and tingly which equals super fun, but that again brings up the question of why would a unicorn use anything else? The version available to the non-especially-talented unicorn being limited to touch plus these qualities as you suggest equals something that is still very capable.

(horn-magic tentacles for the win!)

Hah, that one was actually meant to be a throwaway to both make Ellie and Maud bond over not having magic and to be a joke with the whole Starlight liking kites thing. Though I may revisit the idea in much more detail in a future fic...

Unicorns canonically have some advantages that even the kindest of canon can't make up for, unfortunately. I don't see any reason why some of these advantages can't be passed on to the other races/species through technology etc. though.

There's some fun fanart with strap-on horns for the non-unicorn (hey that's a good in-universe slogan!) But as fun as the idea is I don't think it makes sense since it's like attaching a third arm and expecting somepony to be able to just use it without, you know, any neural remapping.

But yeah, sigh. Unicorns get so many advantages.

I'm stealing this.

Please do. It is a much more fitting name for such a hot concept.

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Gay For Gadot #23 · Dec 18th, 2020 · 1 · ·

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Me too! Warm and tingly which equals super fun, but that again brings up the question of why would a unicorn use anything else? The version available to the non-especially-talented unicorn being limited to touch plus these qualities as you suggest equals something that is still very capable.

Hmm, that's a fair point. Though, I would say that it's less personal than using hooves or tongues, so that's why the unicorn sex repertoire doesn't begin and end with magic fondling. At least, that's how my headcanon views it.

Hah, that one was actually meant to be a throwaway to both make Ellie and Maud bond over not having magic and to be a joke with the whole Starlight liking kites thing.

I'm mostly replying to this comment so I can point out one of the best tags on Derpibooru, as well as put some relevant images here. Because Starlight's kite obsession is too cute and requires cute images.

Still need to read your StarMaud:

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This is definitely showing up in a future fic of mine:

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And the extremely relevant reaction image:

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There's some fun fanart with strap-on horns for the non-unicorn (hey that's a good in-universe slogan!)

I misread this as "strap-on" by itself at first, and was confused as to why you thought they didn't make sense. Apparently I should go to bed soon.

But as fun as the idea is I don't think it makes sense since it's like attaching a third arm and expecting somepony to be able to just use it without, you know, any neural remapping.

Yeah, a strap-on horn is just... weird. I was thinking more like, I dunno, magical necklaces that a non-unicorn could wear that could allow them to use basic levitation. Or whatever you have in mind for soundproofing for non-unicorns. Sharing the magic, basically.

Bicyclette

Bicyclette #24 · Dec 19th, 2020 · 1 · ·

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Hmm, that's a fair point. Though, I would say that it's less personal than using hooves or tongues, so that's why the unicorn sex repertoire doesn't begin and end with magic fondling. At least, that's how my headcanon views it.

I figured! Gotta get that intimate touch feedback.

Because Starlight's kite obsession is too cute and requires cute images.

It really is cute! Was disappointed though that, in the French dub at least, they did not bother to translate Starlight’s kite enthusiast insider technobabble in that scene in Rock Solid Friendship.

Still need to read your StarMaud:
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That StarMaud kite scene at the end of Rock Solid Friendship is just perfection with how cute Maud’s improvised kite is. Also I can’t wait for you to read that one because I think it is one of the most important things I’ll write for this site, but just a warning, it is pretty heavy stuff, I’m told!

And the extremely relevant reaction image:
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Think Starly might be liking kites a little too much there…

I was thinking more like, I dunno, magical necklaces that a non-unicorn could wear that could allow them to use basic levitation.

I guess my issue is in canon we’ve only seen amulets either enhance existing unicorn abilities or essentially function as guns, only instead of bullets they shoot magical gay rainbow beams. More subtle abilities like telekinesis I feel would require reorganizing some brain matter. But I could be wrong about that. Amulets for everypony!

Or whatever you have in mind for soundproofing for non-unicorns.

I’m thinking of it being more like part of the manufacturing process like unicorns “enchanting” the building material at the factory. Or whatever process they use to magically preserve food that stops working in School Raze, which also kind of implies an industrial or at least consumer-level process.

Selene Bright

Selene Bright #25 · Feb 5th, 2021 · 2 · ·

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These two have great chemistry I would really like you to flush it out with a series sometime. Something slow and romantic and then give it a great sex scene at the end.

Gay For Gadot

Gay For Gadot #26 · Feb 6th, 2021 · · ·

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I do have some ideas for more StarTrix in the future (Mature and not), but no guarantees on a timeline as of yet.

Thanks again for all the comments, faves, and the watch!

Selene Bright

Selene Bright #27 · Feb 6th, 2021 · 2 · ·

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Not a problem! You're a great writer!

Gutovi

Gutovi #28 · Feb 25th, 2021 · 3 · ·

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Very great! Sweet romance, cute mares and kinky yet tender sex. Great mix!

BlueMoonHarlot

BlueMoonHarlot #29 · Jun 18th, 2021 · 2 · ·

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man
I really like girls

marbles

marbles #30 · Mar 17th, 2022 · 2 · ·

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i eagerly wait for your return to writing !!!
you are one of the best writers on the site; the fandom is lucky to have someone with your talent

now excuse me while i go look for the sapphic bliss like the ones from your stories

Voidwalker

Voidwalker #31 · Dec 20th, 2022 · 2 · ·

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The built-up was quick and precise without ever feeling rushed. I found myself aroused, sure, which is to be expected from well-written mature scenes, but more importantly to me, at least: I found myself smiling. Grinning. Laughing. Following along their little exchanges with a sense of warmth and joy.

Many people said many smart and true things about your work here before. And they did so in better ways than I could hope to accomplish. So I just upvoted several comments I wholly agreed with. That said, I can't not say at least something.
This story felt believable. And intimate. And I'm just in awe.

Thank you for writing!

Blueemoon