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Kitsune_Kenshi


A Kitsune swordman wondering around Equestrian and beyond, having much tales to tell...

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My first story involving sexual stuff. Not really good at explaining, but please correct me from any mistakes.

awesome chapter my friend cant wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

“PLA”

“Special Operation Squad”

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You need to get a proof reader and spell checker and what is a P.M 2.5s
and some other errors "Luckily, I made it to the warhead with being shot." so he was lucky that he got shot going to the warhead it would be better this way "Luckily, I made it to the warhead without being shot."

10481942
Yeah, you seem like a good one, mind be my first proof reader and spell checker?

10481942
PM 2.5 are small metallic dust particles floating in the air.

Correct me if I'm wrong.

10481972
ok when you have pollutants in the air they sometimes refer to the amount as PPM, Parts Per Million, so they might say "they have 0.01 PPM"

NIce job, glad to see this updated!

awesome chapter lucky man him:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

Amazing indeed! Great job with your first time!

it remind me of my seaquestrian navy dairies awesome work :pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

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I think it’s a bit of a joke at the expense of the PLA.
Not that the PLA isn’t already a joke, as shown with everything the CCP touches the “People’s Liberation Army” doesn’t liberate anything, just oppresses them with such ruthlessness it makes the pentagon look like a hugbox by comparison. Those concentration camps in xinjiang are hardly liberated.

Hold up, I can feel pain? I'm... Alive? That is just simply not possible. Uh-uh, nope, nada. Impossible. No one can survive two shots from 7.62mm rounds in their gut. I doubt even the toughest man in the world can. But here I am, breathing, with absolutely no wound on my gut and legs.

You would probably be surprised at what humans survive it’s more common than you think that someone survives multiple shots to the gut and chest depending on what they hit

10604105
Welp, when he got here, it magically healed.

Is this story going to continue?? It's so good.

10604105
It's dependent upon shot placement and if they get care. Otherwise the risk of bleeding out is high.

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