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I'm curious as to how your MC will conquer Equestria, as well as potentially corrupting the Elements of Harmony(if this is pre-Season 1 or in the middle of it) and their sisters to his side.
The council is going to watch your progress with interest. You have our attention.
Well this sounds like an interesting story, love ponies in suits, I can't wait to see how the Equestrian underworld looks like and how silly it might be, are they actually violent or just deal with contraband sweets? I wonder if we will see some of Daring Do's antagonists like Doctor Cabularon and his thugs I would guess they would fit right in. I wonder how will be taking charge as his legal guardian? Fluttershy could be an interesting choice, but the idea of AJ constantly cleaning his mouth with soap and and trying to keep him in the strait an narrow could be funny to see. Still I wonder how he became friends with the CMC. Was his personality the same when he was human was he a criminal even back then? I would have though that the name Cold Blood might be a better fitting name for him, ho well.
Also if you are looking to commission your very own cover art you can look me up, I love drawing ponies in outfits like that. here is my DA gallery if you want to take a look and and here is my YouTube Channel if you want to see my work process. I hope to hear from you soon and good luck on your story.
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Glad you like it so far. However, I have to tell you that the part with him meeting up with that gangster is actually close to the end of the story. I just didn't want to spoil the end, so I took a scene from about two or three chapters earlier.
Still, you can look forward to him making use of every absurdity I can find for him to make use of and, of course, the CMC will also play a role.
Finally, someone that wants to dominate Equestria like me.😎
It's probably just me, but that opening scene felt like something that would happen in Doctor Who.
I haven't watched Doctor Who for sometime so I may be wrong.
Nice, now I wonder if the rest of the Apples will want his to change his name further to Frosty Apply later down the line, I can wait to see the Apple force him to do work on the orchard for them. I wonder if we will see more of DT in this story.
Nice job! Keep it up!
Funny, the almost like my oc in ponytown (i mean the name)
Mine is freezing rose tho, stallion but have red rose mane and ice cyan coat
Ps: i demands more chapter right away
*holds up bowl* more please!
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You degenerate, thats not how u begging..
Let me show u how pro done it..
*Take a stance, running toward author in high speed, jump, and doing a triple backflip, and ended with doing japanese dogeza*
MORE PLEASE!!!
I think he could pass it off as taxidermy, a specialty in medicine, macabre humor or that he like the subject of Paliopony history, which ever way he can spine it, which could work for anyone who ask. that or a pirate, like some Filly we know. I wonder if he could beg Twilight to tutor him in magic, if he shows some form of passion for knowledge for it's own sake. I am guessing sense the CMC don't have their marks yet then it's likely that Twilight isn't an alicorn yet and hasn't yet offered the CMC Twilight Time just yet. Maybe the CMC could try to sense him to volunteer for different job in Ponyville in relation to his mark I am sure Doctor Stable could use some help or something or even Fluttershy with healing healing animals and Frosty could use it as an excuse to experiential his magic on them Shy isn't watching.
More please
Nice, but necromancing is hardly something useful. I prefer 'Shadow of War's' Domination power.
Diamond tiara is a unicorn now?
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Fuuuuck, I forgot that she's an earthpony. Gotta fix that fast
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Aaaand fixed :)
the fact that you wrote this on a train ride shows us your dedication.
We feel honored
Nice to see you around again, can't wait to see all the assumption they will come up with his cutie mark.
Well, its something. Just makes me ask; when are we getting to the good parts? Like power play, or building up from scratch?
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After I've established his basic abilities, so maybe... 2-3 more chapters? Likely the former, but I can't completely rule out that I might be forced into another mini-chapter...
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Ok, just curious.
when will the next chapter come out?
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ETA: 2-3hrs
Overtime work on a friday. Yay
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k
Don’t tell me he’s gonna walk up and kill the princesses for no apparent reason
Diamond tiara .exe has stopped working
Frosty was ejected zero imposter meaning
I usually don't want to saying this but:
"Harem members Obtained +3"
That was easy
Ps: edit? We don't that here, we need new chapter than edit...
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oh no, I have something far better planed for that.... ;3
Ursa Minors are blue Ursa majors are purple
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I'm colorblind, I don't care
XD
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You do care don't you dare lie to me again
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Also least you can see something I'm actually blind have my sister's typing things for me and reading things for me
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Dammit, he found out. I changed the passage already....
Edit: Or are you a she? Or an it? I don't know, I'm too tired to think rationally right now
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I am a biscuit trapped in the oven
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Male to
I'm guessing he is gonna use that 'touched their souls' ability to help conquer Equestria. He walks up to the princess looking innocent dose the touch then walks away to the other princess looking innocent dose the touch then walks away waiting for the time to use it to... persuade them to give him Equestria.
Use it on cadence before the wedding for the crystal empire. also, use it on the bug queen (Chrysalis) to get the changing hive.
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I think it be much more intimidating to the world if he makes them submit to him then simply killing them or even torturing them to death by making someone who is over 1000 old and powerful as they are submit to him we truly Show his power to the world
Well now, this is going nicely. Frozen scared off one of the most largest creature in the land. Question is: What next; and what was that power in the end?
Oh this looks very promising, nice to see that his magic also touches soul magic, I can't wait to see how he will try to experiment with it with the CMC or other Ponyville foals I am guessing that DT and SS would be his first target on that, and maybe Snips and Snails if he founds them annoying. Still I can easily see that power getting over his head and will start abuse it and get careless which will finally get him to 'Taste the Rainbow' with the Elements. Now I wonder what will be his learning experience for Frosty's journey in Equestria, will he have teachings but completely goes on the wrong conclution? I wonder if when he is uncovered he keep being treated normally, heck it could be that The Elements Bearers are immune to his magic and AJ would still force him to do chores at the orchard for wrongly using necromancy at the end of every day. I wonder if he could use his powers to solved mysteries or use it for more beneficial pursues for ponies?
The chapter ending be like:
Instant harem? Yey (ノ゚0゚)ノ~
Ps:
Horn? Isn't he is earth pony?
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nope, unicorn
edit: yeah, I know, the cover image shows him as an earth pony, but meh... minor details
The title got me interested
Take your time with the fic, no worries.
Thanks for the chapter
I am betting Zecora is going to either keep throwing salt at Frosty or exorcise him or delve deeper into necromancy magic
Why iam always think that frosty ia earth pony
Anyway, good chapter.
Now i wondering if some older mare fall in love too with frosty..?
Shotacon onee-san (. ❛ ᴗ ❛.)
Damn it, i blame manga hentai that i read yesterday..
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