What do you do when you have nothing else to lose? When a tragedy occurs and you are blamed for it and thrown in prison for the rest of your life? The answer…nothing, for it was your intention all along.
That's a bit out of character here for Celestia. If she knows there's more to the murder, then she has more patience. Also, never start with the head. The victim gets all woozy, and they won't feel the next blow.
10459420 A mental breakdown is the most likely possibility. Finding out her nephew was planning mass genocide, treason, usurpation, intended to turn his own family into sex slaves, and attempted murder on the only human (technically another genocide), that would be hard enough for anyone to hear or believe, especially if they raised the criminal. Now add in that the "murder" was unintentional and in defense of another while an innocent gets beaten and starved for a long time for a crime that never happened because there wasn't enough evidence to prove the other crime(s) happened. She's going to be giving a lot of apologies as well as losing a lot of guards.
The writing quality is high, but the premise of the story is a bit stupid.
There's no reason for any of this to happen. Luna is a supreme diarch. Her word is basically law. She doesn't need protection. All that he's protecting her from is popular opinion...and given that Blueblood doesn't seem particularly well liked here, probably not even very much of that. Meanwhile, Luna surely knows that Celestia has the means to extract the truth if she wants to use it...so she has to know that the secret will eventually come out. Mr. Human can't keep the secret he's suffering to protect, and all that's going to be accomplished by doing it this way is for Luna to look even worse once the truth come out, because she let an innocent be tortured and starved in order to maintain public appearances for just a little longer, despite the fact that apparently she didn't even commit the murder in question. Made worse by the fact that by lying, they're indirectly covering up for what is apparently a grand conspiracy to commit regicide. Blueblood had other ponies working with him, and they now have all the time in the world to cover their tracks while Mr. Human is falsely taking the blame for all this.
At the same time, it looks like the overall message here is, "look at the noble honorable human suffer for no reason, gee aren't the ponise awful, horrible creatures!"
Care has been taken to paint the ponies as bad. The guards are beating him. Celestia is beating and starving him...and for no reason, apparently, given that truth-telilng magic has already been brougth to bear. Shining Armor, described as the "most decent" stallion, knows full well his guards are beating him, but allows it to continue. Made all the worse by the fact that apparantly Shining suspects the guy isn't even guilty of the crime, but even still...he allows the beatings to continue. And Luna is worse than any of them. The random guards at least think he's guilty of senseless murder. What's Luna's excuse? She knows he's innocent, but is allowing all of this to happen to him just to avoid looking bad while the investigation happens.
All of the ponies in this story are awful. And the grand payoff for all this seems to be "look at how noble I am, suffering for no good reason, even though it won't actually protect the pony I'm allegedly protecting and it took all the way until chapter 3 for me to spill the beans so that you horrible, horrible ponies can know how horrible you are while I die the honored martyr."
That's not a compelling story premise, and it is only held together by the insistent idiocy of the main character and Luna refusing to talk, under the thin veneer of protecting someone who doesn't need protecting over a murder she didn't commit.
"this trope is a term for a Plot that hangs together only because the main characters behave like idiots. A single intelligent move or question by any of the characters, and all problems would be resolved. It's not so bad if the characters are supposed to be acting like idiots, but it's very bad if the Idiot Plot depends on a character picking up the Idiot Ball for the plot to work.
You cannot explain this level of idiocy with any other reasoning.
The other characters are 2 dimensional idiots with no sense, for all Shine knew, that was just a contrived story to gain sympathy, and even with that story it still has a shit ton of holes in it,
For example,
Why didn't he keep the fabric of the collars or the letter?
Why did Luna not vanish the body and mystic clean with one of those low magic spells Rarity, an average unicorn, uses?
Why is the human so antagonistic towards Celestia, despite the fact that until his imprisonment, no negative action was performed to him?
This is the story that is just Human Relations, but with less sense and more Martyr Complex.
This, this is trash plot.
The writing may be decent, good, even.
But if I use a single cell of my brain to decipher what the fuck is going on, I will have an anneurism because it'll be the equivalent of inhaling jenkum and enduring a sebsequent stroke from the newly forming plot holes in my cranium.
You made an excellent point. This makes me so mad, that I want to beat up Celestia, and the horrible guards to a bloody pulp for the Abuse, OOC, and Torture. Heck, I even punch the guy in the face as well. Because he is being a Doormat P****, and having a Retarded Martyr Mindset.
That's NOT how being a Martyr works, in a sense. It works in a War, or sacrifice yourself against a powerful Enemy or Villain. Not with this going on.
I hope Luna FINALLY does something and KNOCK some sense to Celestia. And even SLAP the Human Protagonist for being a idiot. And having a Suicidal Death Wish.
Hot damn! You also made Good Points. You know what, I'm starting to feel less on NOT defending the guy much. Like you said, his IQ is decreasing. And the fact his reasoning is trying to be a Martyr, which sounds HIGHLY Unnecessary and probably a excuse to be a punching bag for the Jerkass Ponies. And worse case, acting Suicidal because he is obsessed of being a "Martyr".
WAIT!!! what about the collars? They might be ripped up but they should still have traces of the magic that was in them, not to mention the words on them.
10459519 he doesn't 'allow' it to happen. Hes trying to prevent it. But he can't be there all the time, you try it. Try stopping people who has hate in their hearts from hurting the person they hate. It'll be hard even if you got authority
10459753 obviously the conspirators may have some corrupted guards in their payroll. They destroyed the evidence of anything Blueblood did. Celestia only sees her nephew dead and someone she thought she can trust with bloodstain hands to think straight to see the evidences . Even if she did again the corrupt guards/nobles can get rid of them.
I can't agree more. There's absolutely no reason for any of this and if the whole truth does gets out, it will make everyone involved lose face.
You know what would be hilarious Say the whole truth gets out and everypony learns about Blueblood plans and how Luna accidentally killed him trying to save Mr.Human life. No pony not even Celestia would of treated Luna badly at all for killing him, they would understand that it was an accident and wouldn't blame her for killing a traitor who was planning MASS GENOCIDE
Luna rep would never be tarnish, Celestia wouldn't hate her sister for killing Blueblood. (Because Celestia no doubt would of killed him herself) and everypony would still love Luna (Heck maybe even more) Just making this whole self sacrificing thing completely pointless.
So he's going through all this suffering just because he haves no faith that the ponies including Celestia would act opposite to what he believes how they would act if they knew the truth.
HAHAHAHAHAHA
This guy is a complete idiot; Blueblood was gonna commit mass genocide and although his death wasn't intentional he needed to be stop, besides he was on his way to the chopping block anyway once he was exposed.
Speaking of which when Celestia and her guards showed up....WHY DIDN'T YOU SHOW THEM THE LETTER OR THE COLLARS; so unless i'm missing something the letter wasn't destroyed and the collars could probably be restored with magic just proving even more how evil blueblood is.
What if the ponies don't act at all in the manner he believes???
Did he seriously believe that Celestia would not listen to them, did he have so little faith in her to not give her a chance, I mean for Pete's sake they could just use the TRUTH SPELL on both him and Luna, and presto problem solved.
I can't wait to see how this story ends and I'm voting for the whole truth to be revealed too everypony, it will be really interesting too see how everyone reacts.
Assuming the author doesn't change it in response to feedback, I would predict that he dies in such a way that he gets to deliver a The Reason You Suck Speech that reveals everything, but for some reason, despite everypony now knowing exactly what happened, it's "too late" and he dies anyway. Cue Celestia feeling super guilty and admitting that she's a monster, Shining feeling sadness but lots of respect for human-boy's awesomeness as if he were the big brother Shining aspired to be, Waifu Luna suddenly realizing how incredibly close and important he was to her, and everypony else in earshot wallowing in what awful ponies they are while loudly realizing how amazing, awesome, and cool the human was.
Luna and this human are dangerously stupid and disloyal. If Blueblood is gone who will inherit the operation? They keep playing this game they have while the forces in position could strike any moment.
They risk all that was described to save Luna's reputation and fifi's?
10459938 If so he's just as awful, he doesn't know how everyone will react if he told the truth and if they didn't react the way he thought, then what's the point?
Their awful for what they did to him, when he's the one who aloud it in the first place; if he tried to tell the truth and no one believes him fine, but he doesn't tell the truth at all and this whole situation is making everyone look like monsters for no real reason.
If Celestia does learn the truth, I do see her getting angry but not for the reasons mr.human thinks, but for not telling her the truth, and making her look like a monster for letting her hurt him, she would be angry at Luna for not saying anything and allowing this to go on, and she would be mad at both of them for not trusting her and have more faith in her and just tell the truth.
So if he does die (probably by execution by Celestia hands) and truth gets out after it's to late both Luna and mr. Human just made Celestia a murderer and take an innocent life. Luna may of killed Blueblood, but it was an accident plus he was pure evil; Celestia just killed an innocent man because he couldn't trust her with the truth and had no grounds to believe she would hurt Luna.
And what if the guards or Celestia never beat or starve him at all, just lock him up until his execution, Tia would still have innocent blood on her hands and would still haunt her every night and she would be justifiely angry at both him and Luna, and everpony else would be angry at Luna for not trusting them with the truth and allowing this to happen when their was never a reason for this farce at all.
LordBucket dropping the truth bombs on fan fics as usual. Great analysis on why this is a failure.
it is only held together by the insistent idiocy of the main character and Luna refusing to talk, under the thin veneer of protecting someone who doesn't need protecting over a murder she didn't commit.
Either that or dying while being so loving and forgiving that it makes one want to throw up. Cue the "this person really was too good for us" insipidity.
10459928 The reason he isn't showing anyone the collars or the letter is because the letter was burned and the collars destroyed. To what extent regarding the collars, I can't remember, but good luck using a letter that's been burnt to ash as evidence. The closest they have to evidence is IF an honest guard saw the other nobles (who the MC couldn't identity) with BB, a knife, and hearsay. None of that would prove the MC innocent unless there's more evidence in BB's room or office and if even one of the co-conspirators can be identified. There's a lot more evidence proving his guilt than his innocence.
Besides that, the longer he goes without talking, that actually gives everyone more time. With BB gone, his accomplices are likely in some kind of power struggle while covering their tracks and preparing to incriminate or out right kill each other to eliminate the competition.
10459519 After reading your comment in particular, I can't help but agree with you. At first, I thought the plot was intriguing but seeing how the MC acts in response to his surroundings, and negates using logic kinda bums me out. It is a intriguing story but it falls short without a sense of common sense and logic of the world.
Plot twist! The reason MC is so willing to take the fall for Blueblood's regicide is because he actually committed regicide on Earth and got away with it scott-free and feels guilty.
10460340 Ok I admit I Skim pass the part where Blueblood burnt the evidence...my bad
But that doesn't make the guy any more less an idiot thier are still a million other ways to exposed Blueblood crimes (cough, Truth Spell, cough) and who knows what else. Just tell Celestia the truth and both him and Luna would be heroes.
10460984 even if theres still evidence. Celestia is too shocked and angry to notice right away. And who can say the other conspirators or corrupt guards got rid of them while they're busy manhandling the human
10460984 Considering Shining NEEDED permission/ to be ordered by Celestia to use the truth spell, I would say either that at least borders on dark/ forbidden magic or spells that rewrite memories exist and basically make the truth spell as useful in court as a polygraph test. Then comes the problem of finding his accomplices who are probably still intending to carry out their (now delayed) plans anyway. If that's the case, I'm sure anyone else will say the same thing, someone who doesn't know they're being investigated is more likely to do something stupid and self incriminating than someone who does.
This keeps Luna's reputation from plummeting and gives more time to find the real criminals without alerting them. If this story goes the way I think/ hope it will, the truth will be revealed eventually and the MC will be living like a king or will be dead, but the real criminals face justice for their crimes.
Sorry, but your incorrect. He's a Male Human in this story like you and Me. Also the Human tag is up. 😕
Or I was misunderstand on what you saying, and you just thinking of a different Alterative Story. But with a Male Pony replacing the Human Protagonist instead?
If they have a truth spell that kinda makes everything pointless, the spell would make it clear that both the killing was an accident and that Blueblood was planning genocide/rape... at this point this is pure stupidity. Willingly being tortured to protect the memory of a homicide narcissist, can you even imagine being so stupid.
Celestia is acting just downright abusive here, one wonders what would happen should/when she ever finds out the whole truth.
That's a bit out of character here for Celestia. If she knows there's more to the murder, then she has more patience. Also, never start with the head. The victim gets all woozy, and they won't feel the next blow.
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A mental breakdown is the most likely possibility. Finding out her nephew was planning mass genocide, treason, usurpation, intended to turn his own family into sex slaves, and attempted murder on the only human (technically another genocide), that would be hard enough for anyone to hear or believe, especially if they raised the criminal. Now add in that the "murder" was unintentional and in defense of another while an innocent gets beaten and starved for a long time for a crime that never happened because there wasn't enough evidence to prove the other crime(s) happened. She's going to be giving a lot of apologies as well as losing a lot of guards.
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Don't give her any ideas!!!
10459434
Dang it, you beat me to the punch about the Joker reference!
Is Celestia stupid? Yes, but for different reasons. If she was truly trying to get information out of him, she would just use the truth spell...
The writing quality is high, but the premise of the story is a bit stupid.
There's no reason for any of this to happen. Luna is a supreme diarch. Her word is basically law. She doesn't need protection. All that he's protecting her from is popular opinion...and given that Blueblood doesn't seem particularly well liked here, probably not even very much of that. Meanwhile, Luna surely knows that Celestia has the means to extract the truth if she wants to use it...so she has to know that the secret will eventually come out. Mr. Human can't keep the secret he's suffering to protect, and all that's going to be accomplished by doing it this way is for Luna to look even worse once the truth come out, because she let an innocent be tortured and starved in order to maintain public appearances for just a little longer, despite the fact that apparently she didn't even commit the murder in question. Made worse by the fact that by lying, they're indirectly covering up for what is apparently a grand conspiracy to commit regicide. Blueblood had other ponies working with him, and they now have all the time in the world to cover their tracks while Mr. Human is falsely taking the blame for all this.
At the same time, it looks like the overall message here is, "look at the noble honorable human suffer for no reason, gee aren't the ponise awful, horrible creatures!"
Care has been taken to paint the ponies as bad. The guards are beating him. Celestia is beating and starving him...and for no reason, apparently, given that truth-telilng magic has already been brougth to bear. Shining Armor, described as the "most decent" stallion, knows full well his guards are beating him, but allows it to continue. Made all the worse by the fact that apparantly Shining suspects the guy isn't even guilty of the crime, but even still...he allows the beatings to continue. And Luna is worse than any of them. The random guards at least think he's guilty of senseless murder. What's Luna's excuse? She knows he's innocent, but is allowing all of this to happen to him just to avoid looking bad while the investigation happens.
All of the ponies in this story are awful. And the grand payoff for all this seems to be "look at how noble I am, suffering for no good reason, even though it won't actually protect the pony I'm allegedly protecting and it took all the way until chapter 3 for me to spill the beans so that you horrible, horrible ponies can know how horrible you are while I die the honored martyr."
That's not a compelling story premise, and it is only held together by the insistent idiocy of the main character and Luna refusing to talk, under the thin veneer of protecting someone who doesn't need protecting over a murder she didn't commit.
https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/IdiotPlot
"this trope is a term for a Plot that hangs together only because the main characters behave like idiots. A single intelligent move or question by any of the characters, and all problems would be resolved. It's not so bad if the characters are supposed to be acting like idiots, but it's very bad if the Idiot Plot depends on a character picking up the Idiot Ball for the plot to work.
Idiot,
She can just use Truth spell herself...
Good premise bad story.
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He's a masochist.
The main character is a masochist.
You cannot explain this level of idiocy with any other reasoning.
The other characters are 2 dimensional idiots with no sense, for all Shine knew, that was just a contrived story to gain sympathy, and even with that story it still has a shit ton of holes in it,
For example,
Why didn't he keep the fabric of the collars or the letter?
Why did Luna not vanish the body and mystic clean with one of those low magic spells Rarity, an average unicorn, uses?
Why is the human so antagonistic towards Celestia, despite the fact that until his imprisonment, no negative action was performed to him?
This is the story that is just Human Relations, but with less sense and more Martyr Complex.
This, this is trash plot.
The writing may be decent, good, even.
But if I use a single cell of my brain to decipher what the fuck is going on, I will have an anneurism because it'll be the equivalent of inhaling jenkum and enduring a sebsequent stroke from the newly forming plot holes in my cranium.
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There are no good or bad ideas, only lackluster executions.
10459519
I love thee and aspire to reach thine level of critique, vocabulary and example use.
10459519
You made an excellent point. This makes me so mad, that I want to beat up Celestia, and the horrible guards to a bloody pulp for the Abuse, OOC, and Torture. Heck, I even punch the guy in the face as well. Because he is being a Doormat P****, and having a Retarded Martyr Mindset.
That's NOT how being a Martyr works, in a sense. It works in a War, or sacrifice yourself against a powerful Enemy or Villain. Not with this going on.
I hope Luna FINALLY does something and KNOCK some sense to Celestia. And even SLAP the Human Protagonist for being a idiot. And having a Suicidal Death Wish.
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Hot damn! You also made Good Points. You know what, I'm starting to feel less on NOT defending the guy much. Like you said, his IQ is decreasing. And the fact his reasoning is trying to be a Martyr, which sounds HIGHLY Unnecessary and probably a excuse to be a punching bag for the Jerkass Ponies. And worse case, acting Suicidal because he is obsessed of being a "Martyr".
Oh man this is crazy! Theres no way Luna will let him take the fall, unless shining finds that evidence I dont see a good ending for everyone.
WAIT!!! what about the collars? They might be ripped up but they should still have traces of the magic that was in them, not to mention the words on them.
10459671
And yet this story got featured.
10459519
he doesn't 'allow' it to happen. Hes trying to prevent it. But he can't be there all the time, you try it. Try stopping people who has hate in their hearts from hurting the person they hate. It'll be hard even if you got authority
10459753
obviously the conspirators may have some corrupted guards in their payroll. They destroyed the evidence of anything Blueblood did. Celestia only sees her nephew dead and someone she thought she can trust with bloodstain hands to think straight to see the evidences . Even if she did again the corrupt guards/nobles can get rid of them.
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10459519
I can't agree more. There's absolutely no reason for any of this and if the whole truth does gets out, it will make everyone involved lose face.
You know what would be hilarious Say the whole truth gets out and everypony learns about Blueblood plans and how Luna accidentally killed him trying to save Mr.Human life. No pony not even Celestia would of treated Luna badly at all for killing him, they would understand that it was an accident and wouldn't blame her for killing a traitor who was planning MASS GENOCIDE
Luna rep would never be tarnish, Celestia wouldn't hate her sister for killing Blueblood. (Because Celestia no doubt would of killed him herself) and everypony would still love Luna (Heck maybe even more) Just making this whole self sacrificing thing completely pointless.
So he's going through all this suffering just because he haves no faith that the ponies including Celestia would act opposite to what he believes how they would act if they knew the truth.
HAHAHAHAHAHA
This guy is a complete idiot; Blueblood was gonna commit mass genocide and although his death wasn't intentional he needed to be stop, besides he was on his way to the chopping block anyway once he was exposed.
Speaking of which when Celestia and her guards showed up....WHY DIDN'T YOU SHOW THEM THE LETTER OR THE COLLARS; so unless i'm missing something the letter wasn't destroyed and the collars could probably be restored with magic just proving even more how evil blueblood is.
What if the ponies don't act at all in the manner he believes???
Did he seriously believe that Celestia would not listen to them, did he have so little faith in her to not give her a chance, I mean for Pete's sake they could just use the TRUTH SPELL on both him and Luna, and presto problem solved.
I can't wait to see how this story ends and I'm voting for the whole truth to be revealed too everypony, it will be really interesting too see how everyone reacts.
10459928
Assuming the author doesn't change it in response to feedback, I would predict that he dies in such a way that he gets to deliver a The Reason You Suck Speech that reveals everything, but for some reason, despite everypony now knowing exactly what happened, it's "too late" and he dies anyway. Cue Celestia feeling super guilty and admitting that she's a monster, Shining feeling sadness but lots of respect for human-boy's awesomeness as if he were the big brother Shining aspired to be,
WaifuLuna suddenly realizing how incredibly close and important he was to her, and everypony else in earshot wallowing in what awful ponies they are while loudly realizing how amazing, awesome, and cool the human was.Luna and this human are dangerously stupid and disloyal. If Blueblood is gone who will inherit the operation? They keep playing this game they have while the forces in position could strike any moment.
They risk all that was described to save Luna's reputation and fifi's?
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If so he's just as awful, he doesn't know how everyone will react if he told the truth and if they didn't react the way he thought, then what's the point?
Their awful for what they did to him, when he's the one who aloud it in the first place; if he tried to tell the truth and no one believes him fine, but he doesn't tell the truth at all and this whole situation is making everyone look like monsters for no real reason.
If Celestia does learn the truth, I do see her getting angry but not for the reasons mr.human thinks, but for not telling her the truth, and making her look like a monster for letting her hurt him, she would be angry at Luna for not saying anything and allowing this to go on, and she would be mad at both of them for not trusting her and have more faith in her and just tell the truth.
So if he does die (probably by execution by Celestia hands) and truth gets out after it's to late both Luna and mr. Human just made Celestia a murderer and take an innocent life. Luna may of killed Blueblood, but it was an accident plus he was pure evil; Celestia just killed an innocent man because he couldn't trust her with the truth and had no grounds to believe she would hurt Luna.
And what if the guards or Celestia never beat or starve him at all, just lock him up until his execution, Tia would still have innocent blood on her hands and would still haunt her every night and she would be justifiely angry at both him and Luna, and everpony else would be angry at Luna for not trusting them with the truth and allowing this to happen when their was never a reason for this farce at all.
The truth shall set you free!
10459519
LordBucket dropping the truth bombs on fan fics as usual. Great analysis on why this is a failure.
Finely distilled truth at its best.
10459938
Either that or dying while being so loving and forgiving that it makes one want to throw up. Cue the "this person really was too good for us" insipidity.
10459792
Blah! Stupid corrupt ponies...
10459928
The reason he isn't showing anyone the collars or the letter is because the letter was burned and the collars destroyed. To what extent regarding the collars, I can't remember, but good luck using a letter that's been burnt to ash as evidence. The closest they have to evidence is IF an honest guard saw the other nobles (who the MC couldn't identity) with BB, a knife, and hearsay. None of that would prove the MC innocent unless there's more evidence in BB's room or office and if even one of the co-conspirators can be identified. There's a lot more evidence proving his guilt than his innocence.
Besides that, the longer he goes without talking, that actually gives everyone more time. With BB gone, his accomplices are likely in some kind of power struggle while covering their tracks and preparing to incriminate or out right kill each other to eliminate the competition.
10459623
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Ey.
Ey wait one minute.
EY.
Wait.
Why didn't she?
10460340
Twiggles has spell that magically turns burnt objects to their form prior to being burned.
We see this in the show.
I guess it not existing here.
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Featured is based on the opinion of another.
I don't expect much of it.
Especially not in a world where Cultivation Op Protag Harem Wuxia gets ranked higher than masterpieces like The Thickety or Mother Of Learning.
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Probably forgot or missed that episode.
10459519
After reading your comment in particular, I can't help but agree with you. At first, I thought the plot was intriguing but seeing how the MC acts in response to his surroundings, and negates using logic kinda bums me out. It is a intriguing story but it falls short without a sense of common sense and logic of the world.
10459673
There are always good ideas and bad ideas. You just have to think harder.
Plot twist! The reason MC is so willing to take the fall for Blueblood's regicide is because he actually committed regicide on Earth and got away with it scott-free and feels guilty.
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Say WWWWWWWHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!! That's a crazy theory, dude or Gal!
10460617
Das hot
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She's still blinded by her own rage and sadness.
I think it make sense too see this story used against but the main character is a male pony.
10460340
Ok I admit I Skim pass the part where Blueblood burnt the evidence...my bad
But that doesn't make the guy any more less an idiot thier are still a million other ways to exposed Blueblood crimes (cough, Truth Spell, cough) and who knows what else. Just tell Celestia the truth and both him and Luna would be heroes.
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even if theres still evidence. Celestia is too shocked and angry to notice right away. And who can say the other conspirators or corrupt guards got rid of them while they're busy manhandling the human
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Considering Shining NEEDED permission/ to be ordered by Celestia to use the truth spell, I would say either that at least borders on dark/ forbidden magic or spells that rewrite memories exist and basically make the truth spell as useful in court as a polygraph test. Then comes the problem of finding his accomplices who are probably still intending to carry out their (now delayed) plans anyway. If that's the case, I'm sure anyone else will say the same thing, someone who doesn't know they're being investigated is more likely to do something stupid and self incriminating than someone who does.
This keeps Luna's reputation from plummeting and gives more time to find the real criminals without alerting them. If this story goes the way I think/ hope it will, the truth will be revealed eventually and the MC will be living like a king or will be dead, but the real criminals face justice for their crimes.
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Sorry, but your incorrect. He's a Male Human in this story like you and Me. Also the Human tag is up. 😕
Or I was misunderstand on what you saying, and you just thinking of a different Alterative Story. But with a Male Pony replacing the Human Protagonist instead?
If they have a truth spell that kinda makes everything pointless, the spell would make it clear that both the killing was an accident and that Blueblood was planning genocide/rape... at this point this is pure stupidity. Willingly being tortured to protect the memory of a homicide narcissist, can you even imagine being so stupid.
I would have said something like “f*ck you”.
10459420
Yep. There is a difference between "I want you to answer a question." and "I'm not in a good mood, so I'm just take it out on you now."
10461432
No he protecting what little reputation that lina has plus celestial would be heartbroken to learn another family member wanted kill her.