What do you do when you have nothing else to lose? When a tragedy occurs and you are blamed for it and thrown in prison for the rest of your life? The answer…nothing, for it was your intention all along.
Oh that's FUCKING BULSHIT! Sorry, but what he said makes me want to hit him.
“Justified? How in the name of my moon and stars was this justified?” Luna demands.
I agree.
“I said things to her that riled her up, and now I can barely move. A fair trade, if you ask me.”
No it's not. You sound like a idiot, and maybe suicidal, which is worse. 😨
“My word, these video games you speak of seem like a bad influence on humans.” Luna giggled.
Oh hell no it's not. It's just certain people take it too far when they lose. Like the Rage Quits, and destroying the game consoles. I may be upset if I lose. But I NEVER break my favourite stuff to pieces.
“Only to those who take them too damn seriously, that includes me.”
Agreed somewhat.
“But…you aren’t a criminal.”
“I killed Blueblood, so that justifies me being one.”
Dude, shut up before I punch you. 😡
“No.” Luna cut me off. “You didn’t kill him because you couldn’t even if you tried. You are as innocent as they come, I am the real criminal.”
“ I …killed Blueblood…”
Oh shit Luna! 😲 So he is taking the fall this whole time, and is Innocent 100%?! Damn! But, I still CAN'T accept him for having this mistreatment. I hope Luna finally tells the truth, and FRICKIN SLAP Celestia for being a Cruel Bitch to our Human Protagonist here. 😡
10458711 He probably will, unless he intends for a bad ending, I'm sure Blueblood's crimes (whatever they are) will be revealed and at the very least the treatment improves drastically.
Best ending: BB's crimes and plans are revealed, MC gets released and pardoned, Luna doesn't get punished.
Good ending: BB gets exposed, MC gets released and pardoned, Luna serves some kind of sentence.
Normal ending: BB gets exposed, MC doesn't get tortured anymore.
Bad ending: BB doesn't get exposed, MC keeps getting tortured.
Worst ending: BB doesn't get exposed, more than one death occurs.
10458659 How would you react if someone was gloating to you about killing one of your family members? Most people would want to burn alive said person.
Celestia's actions were indeed justified, claming is to be ¨FUCKING BULSHIT!¨ is the actual bullshit here.
Not to me it isn't. Plus, what if your family member was a evil douchebag, and was actually gonna kill a LOT of people. It's like defending a serial killer, or a terrorist. HOW can Celestia defend Blueblood being murdered was bad, IF she have learned the truth.
And how can it justified, if the guy DIDN'T do it anyway?! Since Luna shock us all, by being the one to do the killing. But, since Blueblood was trying to do something VERY EVIL, Luna was actually a hero in a sense.
10458825 You do the same error as you did on that other story.
You need to put yourself in the characters's perspectives.
Does Celestia knows any of that? No. For her, her innocent nephew was killed in cold blood, and the killer is gloating about it to her. Her actions are completely justified and any less from her would be immensely cold-hearted towards her family.
It wouldn't be "Justified" anyway if the Truth finally comes out in the open, now would it?! And she will be a sobbing mess by then, feeling guilty on hurting and torturing someone that DIDN'T do the deed in the first place.
And making the "Same Error" in another Story? What's that supposed to mean? Were you also in the other Stories Comment's, on where I put in my Opinions about it?
Where are we in terms of the show's timeline? Like, are we in season one or past season four? If we are in season one, I understand why Twilight wouldn't be suspicious about Celestia's letter because of her blind worship. Although, some of the main 6 (Probably Pinkie or Fluttershy) should have concerns. And probably Applejack too, but I'm on the fence because she would avoid the MC like the plague, depending on the timeline.
Actually you got all wrong. I do in fact read Human In Equestria Stories. And what you said about them, is EXACTLY WHY I hate on what's happening to our Human here.
Plus the fact he is innocent the whole time, and is just defending Luna by taking the blame.
10458984 So many stories begin from some random idea that sounds good, but is impractical, at the least, on paper.
Take for example, why Luna couldn't just burn the body to ash.
Since she's a big pony she should have enough magic for that, the average unicorn could reduce a wooden chair to ashes in seconds, if my memory serves me right.
Spend a few minutes burning it to. Ash then use a wind draft to scatter them.
The floor is marble, just wipe the burn stain and you'll be fine.
Even then, there is no reason for him to do nothing or do ANYTHING for someone he has no relation and no favor to.
Until more information is presented that Enforces that he had 0% choice in the matter, he's just going to sound like an idiot with a martyr complex.
Good Points. And the fact I hate the Guy, because he is being a doormat and make stupid decisions to NOT tell the Ponies that Blueblood is a bad guy all along. And the fact he is a having a retarded martyr mindset like you said.
you know. If he have watch movies or shows where Killer Masterminds found ways to look innocent. Or played games like Hitman or Among Us. He will be a Perfect Assassin, Hitman, or Killer that DOESN'T get caught. And could have just make Blueblood's Murder an "Accident" or pin the blame on somepony else.
( For the Latter. That is if he is a little heartless, and have a Serial Killer or a Criminal Mastermind Mindset by blaming somepony else instead of him or Luna.).
well i was half right about Luna knowing. You know, if luna want to help . She can continue that investigation now Blueblood can't do nothing to stop her, with him dead she can secretly pile the evidence and anonymously spread it to news outlet.
Scrying spells. Mana signature tracing. Mind reading. Time travel. Magic in the MLP world is so broad, powerful, and unexplained that an author can basically make anything either possible or impossible by the world's logic. If Luna and Human didn't try to hide the body with an entire alicorn's magical strength on their side, then there's probably a good in-universe reason why they didn't that the author hasn't disclosed yet.
when you think about it? it makes sense as he is just a Human and Blueblood i-WAS a Unicorn with magic, there was no way he could have killed him without being VERY lucky. Does that Justifie the Trope-ish plot twist? No not really, but it could have been worse.
How so? He is protecting likely the ONLY real friend he has left AND the Co-Ruler of Equestria to boot. I would do the same, if even temporarily until I could get away.
“That’s kind of you to offer, Princess, but if you heal me they’ll question how I was able to recover so fast. Besides, they always send a doctor to check up on me whenever I get this roughed up. I’d also rather not risk involving you in any of this.”
I’d take that heal. You could just say that humans have a good healing factor.
“No.” Luna cut me off. “You didn’t kill him because you couldn’t even if you tried. You are as innocent as they come, I am the real criminal.”
Very interesting. Now his motivation for taking the beatings makes sense.
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Which I find highly stupid, and should have defend himself at least.
Oh that's FUCKING BULSHIT! Sorry, but what he said makes me want to hit him.
I agree.
No it's not. You sound like a idiot, and maybe suicidal, which is worse. 😨
Oh hell no it's not. It's just certain people take it too far when they lose.
Like the Rage Quits, and destroying the game consoles. I may be upset if I lose. But I NEVER break my favourite stuff to pieces.
Agreed somewhat.
Dude, shut up before I punch you. 😡
Oh shit Luna! 😲 So he is taking the fall this whole time, and is Innocent 100%?! Damn! But, I still CAN'T accept him for having this mistreatment. I hope Luna finally tells the truth, and FRICKIN SLAP Celestia for being a Cruel Bitch to our Human Protagonist here. 😡
Okay dude you seriously need to have something in the background like Twilight searching for the true answers this cannot go on
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He probably will, unless he intends for a bad ending, I'm sure Blueblood's crimes (whatever they are) will be revealed and at the very least the treatment improves drastically.
Best ending: BB's crimes and plans are revealed, MC gets released and pardoned, Luna doesn't get punished.
Good ending: BB gets exposed, MC gets released and pardoned, Luna serves some kind of sentence.
Normal ending: BB gets exposed, MC doesn't get tortured anymore.
Bad ending: BB doesn't get exposed, MC keeps getting tortured.
Worst ending: BB doesn't get exposed, more than one death occurs.
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How would you react if someone was gloating to you about killing one of your family members? Most people would want to burn alive said person.
Celestia's actions were indeed justified, claming is to be ¨FUCKING BULSHIT!¨ is the actual bullshit here.
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Not to me it isn't. Plus, what if your family member was a evil douchebag, and was actually gonna kill a LOT of people. It's like defending a serial killer, or a terrorist. HOW can Celestia defend Blueblood being murdered was bad, IF she have learned the truth.
And how can it justified, if the guy DIDN'T do it anyway?! Since Luna shock us all, by being the one to do the killing. But, since Blueblood was trying to do something VERY EVIL, Luna was actually a hero in a sense.
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You do the same error as you did on that other story.
You need to put yourself in the characters's perspectives.
Does Celestia knows any of that? No. For her, her innocent nephew was killed in cold blood, and the killer is gloating about it to her. Her actions are completely justified and any less from her would be immensely cold-hearted towards her family.
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It wouldn't be "Justified" anyway if the Truth finally comes out in the open, now would it?! And she will be a sobbing mess by then, feeling guilty on hurting and torturing someone that DIDN'T do the deed in the first place.
And making the "Same Error" in another Story? What's that supposed to mean? Were you also in the other Stories Comment's, on where I put in my Opinions about it?
*checks account* 2 stories on hiatus and 2 on incomplete, none finished. really doubt this will ever be completed. plz surprise me
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Two words why that is: school and work. That’s life for you. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
Where are we in terms of the show's timeline? Like, are we in season one or past season four? If we are in season one, I understand why Twilight wouldn't be suspicious about Celestia's letter because of her blind worship. Although, some of the main 6 (Probably Pinkie or Fluttershy) should have concerns. And probably Applejack too, but I'm on the fence because she would avoid the MC like the plague, depending on the timeline.
You know. So much of these stories could be solved very, very easily if an iota of common sense was used.
Or if the main characters weren't such stupid, amoral martyrs that didn't have a single bad bone in their bodies.
Even in my country we know to hide a body if you kill someone, does the very notion not exist in this universe?
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Bruh. I take it you haven't read much HIE stories?
Almost every one has the human getting abused, boosting the ponies to deity status and the human asking for more suffering.
I hope this one won't end that way, but hope is at such a short length these days.
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Actually you got all wrong. I do in fact read Human In Equestria Stories. And what you said about them, is EXACTLY WHY I hate on what's happening to our Human here.
Plus the fact he is innocent the whole time, and is just defending Luna by taking the blame.
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So many stories begin from some random idea that sounds good, but is impractical, at the least, on paper.
Take for example, why Luna couldn't just burn the body to ash.
Since she's a big pony she should have enough magic for that, the average unicorn could reduce a wooden chair to ashes in seconds, if my memory serves me right.
Spend a few minutes burning it to. Ash then use a wind draft to scatter them.
The floor is marble, just wipe the burn stain and you'll be fine.
Even then, there is no reason for him to do nothing or do ANYTHING for someone he has no relation and no favor to.
Until more information is presented that Enforces that he had 0% choice in the matter, he's just going to sound like an idiot with a martyr complex.
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Good Points. And the fact I hate the Guy, because he is being a doormat and make stupid decisions to NOT tell the Ponies that Blueblood is a bad guy all along. And the fact he is a having a retarded martyr mindset like you said.
you know. If he have watch movies or shows where Killer Masterminds found ways to look innocent. Or played games like Hitman or Among Us. He will be a Perfect Assassin, Hitman, or Killer that DOESN'T get caught. And could have just make Blueblood's Murder an "Accident" or pin the blame on somepony else.
( For the Latter. That is if he is a little heartless, and have a Serial Killer or a Criminal Mastermind Mindset by blaming somepony else instead of him or Luna.).
I've read similar stories to this one, but this story takes the cake. Xd
well i was half right about Luna knowing. You know, if luna want to help . She can continue that investigation now Blueblood can't do nothing to stop her, with him dead she can secretly pile the evidence and anonymously spread it to news outlet.
I'm finding the commits entertaining.
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Same here
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Scrying spells. Mana signature tracing. Mind reading. Time travel. Magic in the MLP world is so broad, powerful, and unexplained that an author can basically make anything either possible or impossible by the world's logic. If Luna and Human didn't try to hide the body with an entire alicorn's magical strength on their side, then there's probably a good in-universe reason why they didn't that the author hasn't disclosed yet.
I honestly find the MC's reason for being a punching bag/doormat is utterly stupid.
Dammit.
I thought we had a good story here. And then we get this stupid plot twist.
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when you think about it? it makes sense as he is just a Human and Blueblood i-WAS a Unicorn with magic, there was no way he could have killed him without being VERY lucky. Does that Justifie the Trope-ish plot twist? No not really, but it could have been worse.
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How so? He is protecting likely the ONLY real friend he has left AND the Co-Ruler of Equestria to boot. I would do the same, if even temporarily until I could get away.
I’d take that heal. You could just say that humans have a good healing factor.
Damn, Luna got tired of Blueblood’s sh*t.
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How is it stupid?
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Just like cinemasins this person calls something stupid and refuses to elaborate on why.