ignoring things like the grammar, i'd say this pretty good.....

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Yeah I got a little busy with school, so I'm gonna go back and fix up things like grammar, and make the beginning make more sense, because it makes almost no sense at the moment, at least to me.

EDIT : Fixed most grammar and spelling mistakes, as I should have done on the first day.

Meh, if the grammar isn't too bad, I don't give a damn about it, I liked it and Id like even more.

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Thank you for commenting, as even criticism gives me confidence. I wasn't sure of this entire idea would work out.

Also, I had to scrap about 2 1/2 chapters due to corrupted hard drive (thank goodness I didn't like those particular chapters anyways), and I am progressing on the 5th chapter. I have it done, I just need to do grammar checks (since mostly the chapter is about 10 sentences that I brainstorm about for the chapter it and usually go on from there.

Sounds good! I can't wait till then! If I do notice any significant grammatical errors, i will let you know.