After the Formal, Sunset left Canterlot High, wanting to start a new life. She wanders into Hollywood, and find more than what she can anticipate.
Some plot points and/or dialogue are borrowed from CharaDemonChild's first chapter of A Sunset's Last Sunset and redandready45's Look In The Mirror To Find the Truth and Live By The Sword...
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Well with everything she did, it's no wonder she was so hated.
I like to see someone tell her, what did you expect, you really think you suddenly have everyone forgiving you just like that?"
Sighs i hate to say it but get why AppleJack didn't bother to help here that moment, there was too much rage and hate for her at the time.
Very good emotional beginning, I look forward to more of your story.
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diablo4000 Applejack still did not forgive her, but there is more than just rage that prevent her from helping Sunset. Sunset just assume that she did not come and help because she is angry, but that's not the full picture.
There's a reason why I chose to hide Applejack's facial expression, but you can only see in future chapters.
Oh and she knows why she is hated, that's the whole reason why she want to move on after all. She's afraid, she feels that people will not ever forgive her.
Curious if we see what's going on at CHS without Sunset now. good story though.
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Thanks 😊 tbh I don't really have a really concrete plan when it comes to writing this story. I only have the ending and concept in mind when it comes to writing it, which is why this sometimes may feel disjointed. This is more of a warming up for me, and help me to gather attention.
Eventually, Sunset will face back her past again, and we can see what has been going on in CHS. Idk when it will happen, but for now I'm just writing chapters of Sunset directly or indirectly making her colleagues lives better and grow closer to them. This act is her trying to redeem herself, be a good person and trying to erase her past.
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Okay. Sounds good.