Inky Hearts thinks Spike is a slave, Spike thinks otherwise. They "debate" it, and by that I mean they argue.
This is just a dumb story I thought up of.
Inky Hearts thinks Spike is a slave, Spike thinks otherwise. They "debate" it, and by that I mean they argue.
This is just a dumb story I thought up of.
Me: Spike, after all of this. You should AGREE that Inky was right about you being a "Servant" .
And Twilight STOP being frickin OOC, and enough with the STUPID Death Threats! You DON'T have the Heart or even the Balls to Kill/Execute someone.
And IF you try to do that to me.
I WILL ONE SHOT YOU, AND BLOW UP EQUESTRIA, ALONG WITH THE MOON, SUN, AND THE ENTIRE SOLAR SYSTEM! USING 1% OF GOD OF DESTRUCTION'S HAKAI and GOD EMPEROR POWER .
So, DON'T try to act "Cold and tough" on me, Bitch!
what the fuck is this story.
And what the fuck is the comment below me.
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This Dumass Idea poped up in my head out of nowhere and I just rolled with it
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I'm just Pissed Off on Twilight's OOC ( Out Of Character) "Death Threats", and IF she try that to me. I just break her horn, and knock her head clean off.
And I don't like on how Spike always gets the short end of the stick in the Show/Fan Stories. And seeing Spike acting as a Slave/Servant to Twilight and the other Mane 5. I seen stories like that, and it both Pissed me off, and have the satisfaction for the OOC Mane 6 to get the Bashing/Punishment for Spike's Mistreatment.
You are a sad, strange little mare.
I had to think of this quote:
Nice story, but not easy to read.
It contains an unhealthy amount of typing errors, and many phrases which could have been done better.
Consider looking for an proofreader.
(That is also probably the main reason for most of the downvotes.)
For instance, there are even two in the chapter title alone:
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And the short description isn't much better:
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