Everypony likes a nice cold treat on a hot day. Even the ice cream mare.
One shot based on a horror story I read in a 1970s Omni magazine. It says something about it's effectiveness.
Reviewed by Seattle's Angels - right at the bottom.
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Boxe doth Write like a Boar doth Pisse, viz. in Jirkes.
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For the benefit of those without television, a live reading has been added by yours truly.
Neat story, I really enjoyed it.
Reviewed in Round 179
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Splendid! Unless you're a very rough-cut piece of wooden furniture, in which case splintered.
Chilling.
All puns aside, uses good suspense to build up to the actual horror. I do like how there's a lot of long and winding passages, thus making the narrator sound more excited as the events proceed.
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Well, of course he was excited at the time.
Since then... he's cooled off noticeably.
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Yeah, I'd love to read more of your stories.
A chilling tale, to be sure.