Let Spike have a go at her

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He'll get his chance

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Better yet, have Sweetie have a go at her.

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You're getting ahead of me, boss. Patience.

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What's the website the pictures from

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That would be derpibooru. I thought that was generally understood, but I'll adjust the description accordingly

I cannot wait to see who gets a go at Rarity, next.

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Isn't choking implied by deepthroating?

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Depends on the girl.

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I suppose so.

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I specified choking as in "Twilight is moments away from strangling her past the point of being unconscious"

I recently got into hot water with a reader for not marking my Dazzlings story as incest despite me making it clear that this depiction of them has them as lifelong friends rather than family. I'm just trying to cover all bases here so no one gets mad at me

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Then shouldn't it be tagged strangling, not Choking? Those are two separate things.

I like

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Yes I looked it up on there and nothing popped up

Are you going to finish this story

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I know that feeling.

Rarity is a classy woman, the pinnacle of elegance, beauty, and grace. Demure, conservative, chaste, and prideful.

At least, that's who she pretended to be. After some self-reflection, it became clear to her that this persona was a facade. The real Rarity isn't a princess.

I hope it's okay that i take this out of context and go on a ramble. Have you ever noticed that, in every fight scene where she's actually present, Rarity goes straight for the hoof-to-hoof? Despite having, at minimum, telekinesis and a ****ton of sharp objects on her at all times? Combined with the bizarre accent that isn't shared by any member of her family or social circle, it makes you wonder...

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I wanted to make a joke about how she was actually a monk class or something DND related but I didn't have anything clever.

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I'm far behind in the actual show so I have no clue if we ever get any real backstory on Rarity, but I do recall a theory that ran the circuit a while back that still holds water, as far as I know.

The theory goes that Rarity and her family are whatever the pony equivalent of white trash is (or, at the very least, lower-middle class). She grew up poor-ish, and developed a sort of resentment for her family and the stigma associated with those sorts of ponies, so she threw herself into the more lavish, bougie, extravagant parts of life as soon as she could, and she developed a phony mid-Atlantic accent to make herself seem more sophisticated and important than her mouth-breathing, red neck parents.

In reality, I doubt that much thought was given to her actions. It was probably as simple as "Rarity is a proper lady, so wouldn't it be funny if she just punched that guy?" and that was it. It would explain a lot about her character, though. Why she's so obsessed with her image, why she's so uppity, why she cares so much about fashion and her business, and why her parents don't seem to be around very much and left Sweetie Belle in her care.

Again, don't know if there's in Season 9 or whatever that debunks that theory, and it ultimately doesn't matter. I just think it's neat to talk about.

Also, for the record, that's not where the idea for this story came from. I just wanted to beat on my second least favorite character, and I thought this would be a fun way to do it

oh hot love your work it's amazing and can't wait for more chapters

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Also, for the record, that's not where the idea for this story came from.

Oh, I know. I all but directly said that my comment is unrelated to the actual story.

How can you be demure and prideful?

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Demure in her behavior, prideful of her appearance

I love this idea so far, nice work!

Every time Rarity says "Goddess" I picture 2257256 (explicit) on Derpibooru and think she's referring to Twilight's cock, rather than Twilight herself.

amazing, please contiune to have fun writing this story!

My hands are up I swear. I'm not doing anything sus I swear.

i mean, atleast there was consent....
felt very uncomfortable reading this but i do appreciate the fact that the author emphasized that this story was consensual.

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I genuinely find it interesting that anyone besides me thinks that Rarity's consent makes a difference.

Also, sorry that you're uncomfortable. It only gets worse from here.

Instead, she made her way to one of the few places Rarity believed a mare like her belonged and began to cook breakfast

There are some things I understand about humans and some things I don’t and they connection between sexual submission and cooking is one I do not.

That being said I think there are few things so satisfying as preparing really tasty food. So chef me, mommy, I guess?

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It's pretty simple.

For much of human history, cooking was considered a woman's job, as the men where the ones responsible with getting the food in the first place. Women were also seen as sexually submissive because they are on the receiving end in bed, and they are typically less physically strong and imposing than men. Therefore, the thing that was considered to be exclusively a women's job would naturally come to be associated with the perception of a woman's role in bed

This is a massive generalization that I obviously don't agree with, just trying to explain the largely sexist history of humanity

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It is a gross oversimplification, yeah. Anyway, if Twilight wants to eat Rarity's cooking as part of erotic roleplay, then it's clear who the real masochist here is. If that's the sort of scenario she gets off on, she should have sexually enslaved AJ or Pinkie.

Twilight had something Rarity lacked, the thing that mattered, the reason Twilight had value while Rarity did not; Twilight yawned and stretched, her half-hard cock dangling proudly between her legs

I'm glad Rarity recognizes the divine right of trans girls to rule us all.

ANYWAY sorry about giving you a hard time. 'Unsafe, insane, and consensual' is a theme we need more of. It probably says terrible things about me that I find this kind'a tame so far. Like I wanted the knife to become involved in the nipple play.

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Fun fact, the bit about Twilight's dick being the reason she mattered is a remnant from when this story was originally going to take a more misogynist, FoE type of direction. I kinda pivoted away from that, though you can still see relics of those ideas in early chapters.

Rarity might be a dumb sack of holes, but even she acknowledges that trans rights are human rights.

It gets less tame with time, but I've yet to revisit the use of knives on the story. I'll keep that on mind going forward.