I’m a brony with the body of a pony and the brains of a griffon who seems to enjoy watching random female characters starve.
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Duuude! I had to check your account to make sure it was actually you!
One thousand words exact. Not going to lie that's pretty impressive.
1,000 words is very impressive for a one shot.
I don't normally read this kind of stuff but I have to give you credit for the 1,000 words.
I personally think siblings having sex is wrong, but nice story overall anyway! And serious respect for only using 1,000 words. That's some serious dedication.
Is it just me, or does this site need more Silverstream clop?
Aside from a few minor spelling errors (one instance of it's should be its, for example), the only glaring error I caught was that both Silverstream and Terramar spoke in the same paragraph.
"What was that about?" He asked[...] "Well, you obviously needed it." Silverstream said, rolling her eyes.
You can break this paragraph when she speaks to fix it.