For the next few days, following the events of Camp’s party, things grew hectic for Ace Ventura and the Equestrian Heroes. After Ace informed them about what he discovered in Snowflake’s tank, with a good idea about ‘where’ it came from, it was finally time to start looking into it further. Ace managed to compile a list of the members of the 1982 Miami Dolphins, with intent to check them all out one by one. It would only be a matter of time until they found the person they were looking for. Sounds easy?
Well… not really…
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One day, Ace and Rainbow Dash found themselves running a jogging track to catch up to one of the members who frequented the field for his cardio practice. Rainbow had no trouble keeping up with the big man, but Ace was wheezing and gasping for air trying to keep up. It was extremely difficult for them to even get a good look at the ring on the guy’s hand.
“Come on Ace, keep up!” Rainbow shouted at Ace.
“I-I-I’m trying!” Ace wheezed.
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The following day, Ace and Rarity found themselves sitting and waiting in a shoe store. The store manager, an ex-player for the ’82 team, set several shoe boxes down before them. Ace inspected the ring on his finger; again, no luck with the missing stone.
“Sorry, don’t see anything I like,” Ace told the guy, walking away.
“Pardon me darling, you wouldn’t happen to have any designer stilettos by chance would you?” Rarity asked seriously.
The man just rolled his eyes and shook his head while walking away.
“A simple ‘no’ would’ve sufficed, thank you!”
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The other day, a few kids received autographs from Dan Marino and other players at a local hotel. Ace dressed like a particularly bad version of a teenager, much to the horror of Fluttershy, who accompanied him on this venture. While the players signed, he checked all their rings yet once again was disappointed to find they all had the stones. Ace groaned as he turned around.
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Ace and Rainbow again tried catching the large man on the track. This time, just as Ace drew near, the man left him in the dust. Rainbow, not abut to be beaten in a race, rushed forward to keep up with him just as Ace finally collapsed from utter exhaustion.
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On Thursday, two big guys finished arm wrestling at a local bar as Ace stepped up to challenge with Applejack alongside him. He spent an undue amount of time preparing his grip, as he checked out the ring. Ace finally got set and gave the ‘Go Ahead’ nod… and was instantly thrown across the room. Applejack walked alongside him and shook her head.
“That there was pathetic,” She spoke disappointed.
“Oh, like you could do better?” Ace scoffed.
Taking him up on his challenge, A.J. approached the table and sat across the big guy.
“How ‘bout takin’ me on partner?” She offered.
“You serious?” The guy chuckled. “Alright doll, don’t worry I’ll take it easy on you.”
A.J. frowned with a death glare on her face as she got ready and locked hands with the guy. With the ‘Go Ahead’ sign, A.J. easily flipped the guy right over the side and through a table. Holding his arm, the guy looked up at her with complete shock as she wiped her hands casaully.
“Don’t ever call me… doll,” Applejack spoke, tipping her hat.
“… Yes ma’am…” The big man squeaked feebly.
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On Friday, Ace drove his car down the highway with Twilight Sparkle and Spike in the backseat when they came upon another former Dolphins member driving along. Ace tried to get a good look at his ring but was unable to.
“So what’s your idea this time, Ace?” Twilight asked.
“This…” Ace replied simply.
Ace suddenly swerved the car, trying to cut the other guy off. Thankfully the man swerved as well.
“Hey loser!” Ace called out. “Why don’t you learn how to drive pal?!”
Ace continued swerving and trying to piss the guy off. Meanwhile, Twilight and Spike held on for dear life in the backseat.
“This is his idea?” Spike asked fearfully. “How exactly is road rage going to get us anywhere?”
As Ace swerved, eventually the guy flipped him off from his car and Ace used his binoculars for a good look at the ring. Unfortunately, his ring, much like all the others, had all its stones intact.
“Damnit!” Ace groaned.
“Okay, his ring is completely intact it seems,” Twilight sighed in relief. “Now can we please get off the highway and… out of the car?”
“Fine!” Ace sighed.
With that, Ace pulled off the highway and began to contemplate his next form of action.
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In a random men’s room, one huge lineman was currently using the urinal. Spike, using the one next to him, nonchalantly tried catching a glimpse of the man’s hands. The Lineman had a very angry look on his face, but after a beat it changed to a ‘come on’ smile. Spike’s eyes widened with utter horror, slowly looking toward the screen.
“Mother…” Spike squeaked.
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Once again, Rainbow raced alongside the same big guy on the track field. Suddenly, Ace ran behind him, a desperate look on his face, pouring a bottle of chloroform into a cloth. He leapt onto the man’s back, smothering him with the cloth and holding on for dear life. The man slowly gave up the fight and collapsed. Ace casually checked the ring, only to walk away disappointed.
“Seriously Ace?” Rainbow asked in disbelief. “Surely there was a better way to do this than committing criminal acts.”
“We’re running out of time and options,” Ace replied, frustrated.
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As the week met it’s end, the entire group met up at Melissa’s house to discuss what had been found so far. Currently, they sat in the backyard in awkward silence (Spike rocking back and forth, muttering to himself) while Melissa looked across toward Ace, who hardly said anything since arriving. No doubt after a week of dead ends, it was pretty clear he was pissed off. Pinkie, being her usual self, was the first to try breaking the awkward silence.
“So… nice weather we’re having, huh?” She asked smiling.
This caused everyone to look toward her with serious, dead-eyed expressions.
“I mean… it’s so nice and warm in Florida,” Pinkie continued. “It gets nice and warm in Equestria too sometimes, but it also gets really cold too. Brr! Does it ever snow in Florida?”
When no response came, all eyes staring at her, Pinkie finally decided to just back down and sit back in her chair. Meanwhile, Melissa decided to talk to Ace.
“Ace, that stone could have come from anywhere,” She informed him. “An earring, a necklace, a pendant even—”
“It came from an ’82 AFC Championship ring,” Ace spoke grumpily.
“Lt. Einhorn thinks it was an animal rights group,” Melissa suggested. “Have you heard of F.A.N.?”
“’Free Animals Now’?” Ace responded sarcastically. “Started in 1982 by Chelsea Gamble, daughter of the famous industrialist, Fisher Gamble? Over half a million members from Florida to Finland? No. Who are they?”
“Okay Ace,” Twilight spoke up. “Let’s just keep our cool here for a minute. Maybe Melissa’s onto something.”
“Di you know that last year they sent letters to 127 college teams, demanding the release of their mascots?” Melissa continued. “At last count—”
“What do you feed your dog?” Ace asked.
Melissa noticed the dog laying at his feet; she groaned to herself as she rubbed her temples.
“Ah… dog food, why?”
“He’s miserable,” Ace answered.
“I don’t think so, Ace,” Fluttershy said. “He seems alright to me.”
“What are you talking about?” Melissa asked.
“He’s just very unhappy, I feel sorry for him,” Ace replied. “Bad diet, isolated environment. It’s amazing he’s still alive.”
“You’re just mad because your stupid pebble theory didn’t work out and you don’t know how to express your anger!” Melissa argued.
“Yeah?” Ace grinned. “And you’re ugly.”
“Ace!” Rarity gasped in horror.
Everyone could clearly see tensions were getting really high at the moment, and it was nly a matter of time before it boiled over completely.
“I’m not even gonna’ talk to you, please leave!” Melissa demanded.
“What, so you can beat him? Fatty!” Ace retorted
Before the arguing could go further, the sound of the ringing phone inside the house drew Melissa’s attention.
“You… are unbelievable!” She half-growled. “Hiring you was a huge mistake!”
She got up and walked back into the house, slamming the door in the process. This left Ace and the Equestrians all outside with the ponies and Spike looking at Ace quite angrily.
“That was nicely handled!” Twilight spoke sarcastically.
“You know Ace, she’s right about you,” Spike added. “You’re acting like a huge jerk just because you’re upset we haven’t found the supposed ring with the missing stone. You don’t have to take it out on people trying to help you; we’re ‘all’ busting our flanks trying to solve ‘your’ case!”
“You like her, huh?” Ace asked seriously.
“She might be a right stick in the mud sometimes,” Applejack responded. “But she’s at least tryin’ tah help us.”
“Yeah, she’s alright,” Ace nodded in agreement.
“And you certainly were acting like quite the ruffian,” Rarity spoke crossly. “Now you best walk right in that house and apologize to her immediately… or we’ll handle our missing friend case alone.”
“She’s right Ace,” Pinkie nodded. “No pony likes working with a grumpy pants.”
Feeling guilty, Ace nodded in agreement once more before hopping up and walked into the house. The rest of the crew followed closely behind.
“Look Melissa, I uh—”
Ace stopped when he saw Melissa. She sat, holding the phone in her lap. A completely stunned look was upon her face; something was very wrong.
“Miss Melissa, are you alright?” Fluttershy asked concerned. “What happened?”
Melissa whipped a tear running down her face before turning back to her friends.
“It’s… it’s Roger,” She choked out.
“What about him?” Twilight asked. “Did something happen?”
There was a long pause before Melissa finally told the bad news.
“… He’s dead.”
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Later that very same evening, the group found themselves outside a luxury condo complex in Miami. Dozens of police cars and officers ran all around the facility. There were also a variety of news vans, every reporter in the city out to cover the story.
“We’re here live at the Miami Luxury Complex where Roger Podacter, head of operations for the Miami Dolphins, has apparently committed suicide. Allegedly leaping to his death from his own fifteen story apartment.”
Ace, Melissa, and the Equestrians could see Roger Podacter’s body being taken away in the midst of all the chaos, away from the crowds of people and into an ambulance.
“You okay?” Ace asked Melissa.
Melissa nodded bravely as Emilo walked up to join them.
“What’d you find Emilio?” Twilight asked him.
“Podacter, Roger. Routine suicide,” Emilio responded. “He was alone. He’d been drinking. No sign of a struggle. Neighbor heard him scream on the way down. Just your classic fifteen story swan dive.”
Melissa and a few others shuddered as Ace gave Emilio the ‘Way to go!’ look.
“Sorry,” He apologized.
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The group soon entered the apartment complex, catching the elevator to take them up to Roger’s apartment. The whole way up, Melissa tried to make sense of the whole thing.
“It just seems so out of character,” She spoke. “He was going to retire in two years.”
“Did he leave a note or anything that would explain it?” Rainbow asked.
“No,” Emilio shook his head. “That’s nothing unusual. Some do, some don’t. He didn’t.”
When the group finally entered Roger’s apartment, they were immediately bombarded by a bunch of police officers.
“Miss Robinson, this is officer Carlson,” Emilio introduced Melissa.
“Evening, ma’am,” Carlson greeted. “I wonder if you could answer a few questions about the deceased?”
While this went on, Ace and the others slipped away listening in on another conversation. This was between another officer and Podacter’s next door neighbor.
“I told you,” The neighbor explained. “I was across the hall in my apartment, I heard a scream. The door was locked, so I called the manager…”
The manager reiterated her story to the cops, the manager herself appeared as though she were over a hundred years old.
“… The place was empty, except for the damn dog in the other room,” The manager added. “Then I opened the balcony door, looked over the railing, and… splat, bang, pancake time…”
“Well, isn’t that quite a way to word this whole terrible event?” Rarity replied.
Ace studied the scene around him, noticing a bunch of officers coming in and out of the sliding door to the balcony. Strangely enough, he heard no sound from the officers on the outside. Suddenly, he smelled a familiar stench in the air and followed it to a dog cowering in the corner.
“Hey, fella, have a bad night?” He asked the dog calmly.
Fluttershy approached his side and examined the poor animal.
“Oh, the poor dear,” She spoke. “He’s so frightened…”
All of a sudden, the dog started barking. Ace and Fluttershy looked up to two feet, belonging to Einhorn, who stood right in front of them.
“So it’s true,” Ace smiled. “Animals can sense evil.”
“Who let Dr. Dolittle in?” Einhorn asked angrily.
“Ah, Lieutenant,” Emilio stepped in. “He came with Miss Robinson—”
“This is official police business,” Einhorn scowled at Ace. “We’ll let you know if the coroner find any ticks.”
Then Einhorn looked over toward the Equestrians, who stood close by.
“As for the rest of you, I don’t recall calling you as witnesses. Leave now or you will be arrested!”
Many of the cops snickered, while Ace gave another sarcastic chuckle.
“I just thought since Melissa –” Emilio began.
“E, forget it. She’s right,” Ace relented. “Besides, I wouldn’t want someone tracing my steps and pointing out all the mistakes I made. Twilight, care to give me a hand?”
“Sure thing Ace,” Twilight nodded.
“I told you to leave!” Einhorn warned.
“Apologies Lieutenant,” Twilight replied. “But we came to find our missing friend and that’s ‘our’ business.”
The two made their way onto the balcony and began to investigate themselves. Ace observed the side of the balcony which looked down over a lengthy drop to the surface. While he did just that, Twilight took a look for anything else that might have been overlooked. As she studied the scene, something caught her eye.
Approaching a potted plant near the ledge, Twilight knelt down and reached inside. Pulling her hand out, she looked at the tiny, folded piece of paper between her fingers. She quickly hid it in her pocket, as Einhorn made her way out onto the balcony in hot pursuit.
“Oh, so, you don’t think this is an obvious suicide, Mr. Pet Detective?” She asked Ace.
“Well, I wouldn’t say that…” Ace responded. “Lord knows, there is plenty of evidence here to support your theory, except of course that spot of blood on the balcony.”
Einhorn approached the balcony; sure enough, there was a tiny spot of blood. Einhorn glared at a couple nearby cops who merely looked down.
“May I tell you what I think happened?” Ace asked, with a smirk. “Alrighty then!”
Ace moved back into the apartment as he spoke, with Einhorn and Twilight trailing behind him.
“Roger Podacter went out after work,” Ace explained. “He had a few drinks, and he came home. But he wasn’t alone. Someone was with him in this apartment. There was a struggle, and then Roger Podacter was thrown over that balcony. Roger Podacter didn’t commit suicide. He was murdered.”
“You know Ace… that actually sounds like a great theory!” Rarity spoke, impressed.
“Well, that’s a very entertaining theory, but real detectives have to worry about that little thing lawyers call ‘evidence’,” Einhorn countered.
“That’s… also a good point,” Spike pointed out.
“Who’s side are you on?” Rainbow asked.
“Ours, obviously… I’m just saying she has a point.”
“Well, at least one of you has some sense in their heads,” Einhorn smirked.
Ace picked up a lottery ticket on Podacter’s desk and became a condescending kid show host.
“Let’s take a trip to clue corner, shall we?” He announced. “Can anyone tell me why a man buys a lottery ticket on the day he is going to commit suicide? Or why the family pet, suffering from acute canine trauma, clawed at the bedroom door until his paws bled? How about the blood on the railing? I’ll bet if we put our thinking caps on we’ll see that it was the result of the struggle that took place inside this apartment while Mr. Podacter was still alive! NEXT TIME YOU DON’T HAVE A CLUE COME ON BACK TO CLUE CORNER! BOOP!”
Everyone looked toward Einhorn for her response.
“Not a bad try for a pet detective,” She replied. “But not near conclusive enough for us real investigators.
“First, people buy lottery tickets every day. It’s a habit. It doesn’t prove a thing. Second, the dog wasn’t suffering from canine trauma, he was suffering from bladder trauma. Sergeant Neilson found a piss stain as big as Lake Huron near the bed. And third, the blood on the railing. Simple. He doesn’t jump far enough and whacks his head. A fact confirmed by the paramedics who found cuts on his scalp, with traces of a white chalky substance. I.E. plaster from the balcony.”
Einhorn showed Ace the paramedic’s report and everyone, minus the Equestrian heroes, were impressed with Einhorn.
“So much for your murder, Ventura,” Einhorn smirked.
“Uh oh, I think I heard a toilet flush,” Aquado laughed. “Maybe someone lost their turtle?”
Everyone laughed while Ace looked utterly beaten.
“Well, maybe I’m just a little out of my league, here,” Ace admitted, holding out his hand. “Einhorn… good work.”
Einhorn shook Ace’s hand as the Equestrians looked on silently. Ace and Melissa made for the door but were stopped soon as the Equestrian heroes blocked the doorway.
“That’s it?” Spike spoke you. “You’re just giving up?”
“Not quite,” Ace grinned. “There is just ‘one’ more thing, Lieutenant. This man is Roger Podacter’s neighbor. He lives across the hall. He said he heard a scream, is that right, sir?”
“That’s right,” The neighbor nodded.
“And you said you had to open the balcony door when you keyed into the room?” Ace asked the manager.
“Yeah,” The manager agreed.
“You’re certain you had to open this door?” Ace reiterated, walking toward the balcony door.
“What’s the point, Ventura?” Einhorn asked irritated.
Ace stepped outside the balcony and turned back as he grabbed the sliding door.
“Only this… AAAAAWWWWWWWWWW…”
Ace sustained an incredible Pavorati note, while he repeatedly opened and closed the glass door between them. With the door closed, nothing could be heard until finally… he stopped.
“This is double paned, sound-proofed glass,” Ace pointed out, tapping the door. “There’s no way this neighbor could have heard Podacter scream on the way down with this door shut. The scream she heard came from inside this apartment, before Podacter was thrown over the railing! And the murderer closed the door before he left!”
Ace began to celebrate in the only way Ace Ventura could… ‘insanely’.
“Yes! Yesss! I have exorcised the demons! This house is clear. Looser!”
“GET HIM OUTTA HERE!” Einhorn yelled.
Aguado began to push Ace out of the room, while the madman continued to call out ‘Loohooser’. Melissa and the Equestrian heroes continued to follow them out of the apartment before Twilight stopped them dead in their tracks.
“Hold up a minute guys,” She whispered. “I found something back there.”
“What do ya mean Twi?” Applejack asked.
“When Ace and I went out onto the balcony, I saw a crumpled piece of paper in a plant,” Twilight explained. “My guess is that it was strategically placed there by someone else.”
“Who would do that?”
“Only one way to find out I guess,” Twilight responded. “We read it.”
Twilight unfolded the little piece of paper, and everyone looked down to see words written on it which read:
Up and down the fields of time,
Racing towards the finish line
P.D.
The Equestrians looked toward one another with surprise on their faces. The message had come from their missing friend. How was that even possible? That was the question. Nevertheless, regardless of the possibility, it gave them the one thing they’ve needed just to find him.
Hope…
Space Jam reference.
Reminds of space jam when bugs and one of the space aliens call Lola Doll
Oh I love new chapterw
So, Phantom has left a message for our friends. but what does it mean and where is he? Also, I believe Einhorn lost that round.
Wow, so they're on the right track.
And I seriously wanna slap those cops for laughing at him, and I'm not ashamed of it. Besides, nobody nowadays respect the law anyway. I mean, did they see the ongoing violence and corruption going on outside of their territories, even the law can be bought via corruption.
Awesome!
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Me: "Message... or trap?"
(I look at the readers)
Me: "You decide, guys..."
Found this funny
Looks like they've found something that could lead to Doc's location. Hurry, everypony.
They've had quite a series of dead-ends trying to find the suspect behind not only the missing mascot but a good friend of the Equestrians likely caught in the heart of it all. And how do they finally obtain a lead? Turns out a murder has taken place, which the police initially label as a suicide. But if Melissa was right in that it seemed out of character for a man only two years short of retirement, there's more to this ystery than they imagined. And that one vital piece of evidence means that they are at least a step closer to finding a missing friend.
Yeah I think it's more obvious herethat tracks here attempted to be covered in a hurry upon further analysis of that scene.
Investigation wasn't looking so well for the group, but it looks like they finally found a clue. Now they're getting somewhere.
Personnel credits for the song that features in the "Ring search" montage:
"Line Up"
Written by Steven Tyler/Joe Perry/Lenny Kravitz
Performed by Aerosmith
From the album Get a Grip, 1993
Produced by Bruce Fairbairn
Engineered by Mike Plotnikoff
Mixed by Brendan O'Brien
Mastered by Greg Fulginiti
Courtesy of Geffen Records/Universal Music Group
Steven Tyler-lead vocals, keyboards
Joe Perry-lead guitar/slide guitar, backing vocals
Brad Whitford-rhythm guitar
Tom Hamilton-bass
Joey Kramer-drums
Lenny Kravitz-backing vocals
John Webster-keyboards
Paul Baron-trumpet
Bruce Fairbairn-trumpet
Tom Keenlyside-saxophone
Ian Putz-baritone saxophone
Bob Rogers-trombone
Also I noticed, they skipped the shower scene.
lmao, oooohhh i love it, and the win goes to Ace, splendid chapter
Ewwww! In the original scene Ace was at least an adult, but Spike is only a young teenager who’s voice hasn’t even fully deepened, Or probably will never fully deepen for that matter.
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Me: *running next to Dash* Well, you snooze you loose!
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Me: *rolls my eyes* Store owners...
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Me: Another dead end...
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Me: *pours water from a water bottle into his mouth*
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Me: Oh just watch.
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Me: *laughs like Muttley*
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Me: *holding on* That's what I'd like to know!
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Me: Thank you!
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Me: Meep...
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Me: He's got a point.
Dash: *groans*
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Me: Yeah, who?
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Me: Have you no respect for women?!
Ace: Like you know better?
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Me: Ace, please!
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Me: Yeah, he does.
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Me: Dead?!...
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Me: Can't believe it... *begins to pray for his soul*
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Me: Tell me about it.
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Me: Oh that's rich...
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Me: And when a friend or ours is missing, you best not get in our way.
Einhorn: Is that a threat?!
Me: Not a threat, a warning.
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Me: Murdered, of course! *writes down the notes*
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Me: Watch it, lady...
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Me: Don't count him out just yet Lieutenant.
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Me: Hold on there!
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Me: Of course! *writes that down*
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Me: Yes Twilight, please share.
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Me: Interesting...
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Me: Go on then Twilight, don't keep us waiting.
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Me: Thanks Phantom, we'll find you very soon.
Phantom was there?! Wait, he didn't kill him, did he?
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No, but he left a clue, a riddle, look.
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I know he left a clue, I'm just saying, if Phantom was there, either he was a witness to the murder or he possibly contributed to the murder. Unless he randomly "magicked" the note into the plant for Twilight to find
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Good point, we'll have ask him about this when we get him back, right now, we need to figure out what this riddle means.
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It is very clear: the clue indicates that the culprit works with the Black Order and the Benefactor.
Discord's Theatre, Galaxy Branch
Ahsoka Tano: So now the search has begun.
Ben Solo: So what will they do?
Sunset Shimmer: It's like this, when someone with the said ring that they found has a missing gem, that one is the likely guilty party. However, the problem is, many of them have the same rings.
Postwar: And given how many of them in the entire team have that said ring, they will have to search every member until they find the said person with the missing ring.
Ben Solo: So kind of like "Where's Wally?"
Postwar: Exactly. (Looks at Sunset with a smirk) I see that you taught him some of your world's stories. (Sunset blushed by that statement)
C3PO: Miss Dash certainly knows how to stay in shape.
Sunset Shimmer: Well she has more stamina when it comes to training, hence why she's always at the top of her game.
Leia Organa: Wish I could say the same for Han.
Han Solo: Hey!! (Everyone laughed at him over that comment)
Galen Marek: He needs to learn how to be less suspicious.
Postwar: Says the guy who took down an entire Star Destroyer using nothing but the Force.
Everyone looked at Galen shocked, whilst he motioned a "Meh", from his hand
Ganodi: Well what did you expect, an Astro droid who was willing to grovel at your feet? (R2 beeped in offense of that)
Everyone looked in shock of Ace's disguise.
Postwar: Yeesh, and I thought Rarity looked worse that time she was stress sowing. (Sunset nodded her head in agreement)
Byph: The guy can catch animals, but he can't even keep up on a running track?
Lando: Not everyone's fit enough for a workout young man.
Han Solo: Heh, what a wimp. (Suddenly gets a nipple twist by Postwar, making him squeal like a little girl. Everyone stares and laughs at him)
Sunset Shimmer: (Gives him a deadpanned expression), Really?
Postwar: Don't judge me.
Postwar: Not everybody's a muscle bound country bumpkin AJ. (Sunset stares at him in shock by what he said. He looks at her) Need I remind you of how she automatically accused you of being Anon-A-Miss without thinking things through, or that time she tried to accuse Vignette when she didnt have any proof?
Sunset Shimmer: (blushed sheepishly whilst she remembered then blinks and looks at him) That was my Applejack.
Postwar: You can't silence the truth.
Sunset Shimmer: Oh boy, she just said her trigger word.
Petro: Trigger word?
Postwar: Just watch.
Padawans: Whoa.
Luke Skywalker: She is a formidable, I can tell you that much.
Postwar: Wise man one said, one with big fist has the smallest of brains.
Leia Organa: Ain't that the truth.
Mando: He is determined, I'll give him that. When you chase down a target, you have to be one hundred percent focused on the job.
Katochi: And leave a pile of dead bodies in your wake.
Zatt: That guy's nuts.
Postwar: That's nothing, you should've seen Anakin Skywalker. (Looks at Luke and Leia), Seriously, every time that guy flies, he crashes every single one of his fighters and transports, and when he and Obi-Wan was busy chasing after them, one of the aliens nearly rode in them and said, quote, "Jedi Poodoo", end quote.
Leia Organa: He really was that reckless?
Luke Skywalker: Glad I don't crash my ships. (R2 beepes in disapproval), it was one time.
Postwar: Oh boy.
Ganodi: What?
Everyone looks in shock by that face.
Ben Solo: Uh, what is he...?
Everyone: (Closing Ben's eyes), When you're older!!!!
Mando: I would've just shot him.
Lando: Yeah, you would.
Postwar: Though, I'm surprised that they didn't show the shower scene. (Gets odd looks) Oh, there was also a shower scene and he got a punch from the guy with the ring. Must've been from an alternate timeline.
Cal Kestis: If they did in this one?
Postwar: I'd probably joke that Galen was probably thinking about watching Sunset showering.
Sunset Shimmer: (Blushes bright red) What?!!
Galen Marek: I would never do that!!
Postwar: Then why was she watching you shower?
Sunset Shimmer: (Blushes in embarrassment), that's a lie!! I would never do that!! (Postwar laughs at both of their awkwardness)
Petro: I feel sorry for Spike though.
Postwar: He'll get over it.
Sunset Shimmer: Guys, come on, you can't blame her for trying.
Postwar: Even if she tends to be up in your face about it. (Gets a stern glare from Sunset) Well it's true.
Luke Skywalker: He certainly knows to stick to a mission until the end.
Postwar: Determination can do that.
Leia Organa: He certainly got grouchy.
Postwar: That's nothing, you should see Sunset. (Gets a glare from him), Well it's true. (Shows them a picture of Sunset, leaving them surprised)
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Petro: Wow, you really are grumpy. (Sunset blushes in embarrassment)
Byph: Why is he changing the subject.
Cal Kestis: He's merely upset. Everyone can get upset over the smallest things.
Postwar: You mean like that time how Greeze got mad at you that you wrecked his ship on that one mission? (Galen clears his throat, not going to comment on that)
Ahsoka Tano: They argue as if they were a couple.
Postwar: They act more like Han and Leia on a good day.
Han and Leia: Hey.
Postwar: (Whispering to Sunset) you know, there was rumors that other guardians tried to get Luke married to a girl named Mara Jade, but another got really upset over it.
Sunset Shimmer: (Whispering back) That bad?
Postwar: (Whispering) Put it this way, he ended up getting a three fractured verdibrae. (Gets a shocked looked from Sunset)
Leia Organa: That worked out unexpectedly.
Sunset Shimmer: They have a habit of working things out.
Postwar: Except that time Twilight tried to steal the magic pearl and used her friends to distract a queen like they were expendable deadweights. (Gets a surprised look from Sunset). What, it's true, she really messed up the whole trusting scenario.
Lando: Oh boy.
Luke Skywalker: It would appear that they have another mystery on their hands.
Zatt: (Sarcastically) Well that was a way to be careful about it.
Postwar: Humans don't know the meaning of the word. I should know, I've always been on the receiving end.
Sunset Shimmer: Speaking from experience?
Postwar: Unfortunately.
Mando: People don't die unless there's either a motive or reason.
Cal Kestis: Really?
Mando: When you've been out in the galaxy in my line of work for as long as I have, you pick up a few things along the way.
Postwar: Many animals are. Like children, they tend to feel safe in the embrace of their home, only for their world to come crashing down and everything you thought you knew, would be gone in an instant. The world becomes grey, you feel yourself weak in the eyes of others, and in the end, you're just another innocent victim waiting to be tossed in the meatgrinder.
Everyone looked at him surprised.
Huyang: Oh my, that is truly a frightening insight.
Luke Skywalker: But there is truth to it too.
Postwar: I've seen plenty of that kind of evil on my world before I left, and many more when i became part of the CA group. The world can be a dark place.
Postwar: Oh great, it's the replacement for the wickets witch of the west. (Sunset laughed really hard at that)
Postwar: Whatever happened to the time when law enforcement actually were able to do their jobs and not make fun of others? I swear corruption knows no bounds.
Leia Organa: You're telling me.
Sunset Shimmer: Wow, you go Twilight.
Luke Skywalker: It would appear that she has found a clue.
Ahsoka Tano: Now all they need to do is to look it over before Einhorn arrives.
Petro: Huh, funny that they missed that.
Postwar: A wise Chinese man once said, even the tiniest grain of rice can tip the scale.
Sunset Shimmer: From the movie Mulan?
Postwar: The animation one, yeah.
Ganodi: It does actually.
Postwar: There's also something called "Tampering with the evidence because they were paid by corrupted officers", ya ding dong.
Mando: He's not wrong. We have plenty of that in the galaxy.
Postwar: Where's Sherlock Holmes when you need him.
Others: Who?
Sunset Shimmer: Famous detective in our world.
Sunset Shimmer: (Growls in anger) Ooh, if i get my hands on...
Postwar uses the Force to make Sunset and Galen kiss one another to calm her down, taking the both of them by surprise. They departed and slowly sat back down, with awkward and embarrassed looks on their faces.
Postwar: (Looks to the 4th wall) I know I shouldn't have. But do you have any ideas trying to calm down a chick with hormonal judgmental issues?
Leia Organa: O....K....
Ben Solo: Why is he doing that?
Postwar: Just watch.
Sunset Shimmer: Oh, that makes sense. I forgot most apartments have some windows like that.
Postwar: Okay, I'm just going to say it, Einhorn looks really ugly.
Sunset Shimmer: Hey!!
Postwar: Well it's true. I mean come on, out of one to ten of one's beauty scale, she'd be a zero. You on the other hand would be a ten out of ten.
Sunset immediately blushed at that, causing her to sit back down.
Postwar: (Smirking from within inner thoughts) sometimes you just gotta find the right words.
Postwar: Possibly a clue to Phantom's location.
Sunset Shimmer: They found an actual clue.
Postwar: Now all they need is to find more pieces to the seperated puzzles.
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Me:"O_O"(jaw dropped).
Sandbar: "It never is."
Sweetie Belle: "Oh, I get it now. The stone Ace found belongs on a ring so he's going to check team players both old and new to find the right one."
Spitfire: "Come on codet, you can move faster than that."
Fleetfoot: :You do realize she can't hear you right?"
Spitfire: "Sorry about that. Old dreal instructor habits and all."
If Applejack and Lola Bunny meet, the two of them will get along very well.
Ok, the hunt for the ring didn't go as expected. The operation has been unproductive (and traumatic for some). And if the case was already difficult, now it has become darker: Roger Podacter has died; and what's worse, he's been murdered, and the culprit knows how to make it look like suicide. Luckily, Ace is smarter than he lets on when he gets serious. But what does all this have to do with Snow Flake?
However, Twilight finds a puzzle at the crime scene that is related to Phantom Dragon, but why was it there? Did Roger know P.D.? This case is generating more questions than answers.
That chapter was awesome! I like this one! The last scene at Roger's apartment made me laugh.
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Oh absolutely, A.J. and Lola would make great locker buddies.
And yeah, the ring searching has hit a few snags. And to top it all off, a guy they barely even knew was just murdered in an event that only 'looks' like a suicide to the naked eye. But it seems they may be onto to something that comes close to where they need to be to find one of their friends. But where will this clue lead them? That's the big question.
Sweetie Belle: " Hmm! How rude!
Sandbar: " Darn no luck.
Big Mac and Apple Bloom cringed at that word like they knew something bad was about to happen.
Big Mac: " Ah oh he called her doll."
Apple Bloom: " He shouldn't have said that.
Both " Now they're in for it!
Scootaloo: "What just happened?"
Apple Bloom: " On one of our family reunions cousin Braburn brought a friend with him and he was a jerk.
Scaring the chickens, sneaking extra food and making bad jokes, then when big sis tried to deal with him he foolishly thought she hitting on him and called her doll."
Big Mac: " We all clinched our eyes on the next part but from the beating we heard her give him, he ended up in the hospital. And ever since then...."
Both: No pone has ever dared to call her doll!
Gilda: "Ok we really just aren't getting any where with this."
Garble: "Maybe we're missing something in the photo. A smudge or out of place shadow."
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Canterlot Mall Theater, Discord's Branch
Flash: And Just how exactly are they going to check every player from that season?
Sugarcoat: Knowing Ace, it will probably be convoluted but will work some how.
Rainbow: Come On! You shouldn't have skipped leg day! I've literally seen Twilight here make better progress then you right now.
No offence, Sci.
Sci-Twi: No, None at all. I know what i'm about. Besides, it's true.
Rarity: I agree, Other Me. It was a reasonable question!
Applejack: I've literally seen a teenage man and his dog pull off a better disguise then that.
Spike: True that.
Rainbow: Shouldn't have skipped Leg Day....
Indigo Zap: Mmmmh-Hemmmm.
Applejack: Oh boy. My counterpart's gonna give the old' what for!
Applejack and some of the other girls: DOLL?!
Flash: Oh jeepers, here we go....
Snips: He's in for it now....
Snails: I'll say!
Applejack: YEAH! THAT'S MYSELF! Lola would be proud!
Rainbow: Represent!
Sunny Flare: Nobody categorizes us like that!
Pinkie: I think i see where this is going.....
Juniper: Hopefully to the nearest DMV....
Flash: Well,.......i guess we know what way he bends,.......
Snails: Which way? Also is he a gymnast?
Snips: I'll explain it to you after the movie......
Sci-Twi: That could not have been legal!.....
Sour Sweet: (Sour) and so we add another misdemeanor to the list....
Sugarcoat: There hasn't been snowfall in Florida for many years.
Wallflower: That was just straight up uncalled for!
Pinkie: What? He was just showing her that he can express anger.
Lemon Zest: By calling her Ugly?
Pinkie: Exactly! If you asked me, she asked for it.
Sci-Twi: (Sarcastically) Agreed. You are truly the master of being a romantic...
Sunny Flare: Hey, some just can't take what others can dish out.
Rainbow: ...takes some to know some..
Sugarcoat: What?
Rainbow: Nothing!
Everyone: What?!
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Flash: Well, this case just took an alarming back alley turn.
Sci-Twi: Yeah. Even i admit that this is starting to become beyond just pet detective stuff now, there's a body involved here!
Applejack: This was Murder!
Sugarcoat: Yeah way to drop the hammer on this one!
Fluttershy: I just wished he shot a little more curvy.
Spike: My thinks that there is something rotten here in the state of Florida.
The other animals chitter in agreement.
Sci-Twi: I think you might be on to something there. We and our other selves in the movie need to investigate!
Sour Sweet: (Sweetly) That is indeed such a phrase.
(Sour) If you want to never make friends again!
Sci-Twi also took note of the glass door and pondered possibly the same thought Ace was having.
Even Spike and the other pets started to growl once more at the lieutenant like before.
Trixie: Well, Guess it's official. Trixie does not care for this Einhorn.
Fluttershy: I told you guys, animals have a deeper judgment for characters.
Sci-Twi: Indeed. But the real question is Why? What is Einhorn not telling us?
Pinkie: Welp,.....even I officially hate her and most of this police forces' guts. Twi, Permission for the rest of us to have my exact same feelings?
Sci-Twi: Permission Granted.
Everyone else: AYE!
Applejack: Exactly! You had your chance to be more reasonable with our other selves, but now it's our turn to take control of the investagation! So now, i suggest that you either back ourselves up,.....
Applebloom: or shut the fudge up!
She and the other CMC high-five and fist-bump each other.
Sweetie Belle: Dang it!
Scootaloo: Just when we just made some progress!
Rarity: (tsking)
Sci-Twi: Sloppy,....Sloppy work.
Rarity: Indeed!
Sci-Twi: Especially since i thought to myself; "Why would a man so close to retirement suddenly give up his own life and TWO Years before he is at peace with the profession?!"
Rainbow: Listen Jerkbag! Just because one of us thinks that the theory might not hold up, doesn't mean that we were on the same side.
Trixie: But The Great and Powerful Trixie does wonder what sort of evidence we have to keep our story true....
Scootaloo: Try to deny and shoot that one down, Eienhorn!
The CMC: Aaaaah,...
Applebloom: Worm apples!
Sweetie Belle: Bollocks!
Scootaloo: Peaches.
Fluttershy: Someone hold me down! No one uses the name of turtles, alligators and/or crocodiles like that with a toilet and gets away with it!
Flash and Sci-Twi hold her down in her seat.
Rainbow: That's It! I'm gonna beat that fat twerp into a pulp!
Applejack: Sustained!
Pinkie: I'm gonna bake that fat twerp into a pie!
Sunny Flare: Even I'm not going to just sit here and not let these poor man's excuses for a police station ridicule them like that!
Fluttershy: Why does he need to know if-?
Sci-Twi: Hold on, let's see where this is going...….
Pinkie: Bravissimo! Couldn't have done it better myself.
Sandalwood:.....What just happened?....
Micro-Chips: It appears that we just got our deus ex machina and payback to the stuff shirted boys in black and blue.
Rainbow: Dude,….that was legit cool.
I mean i think that i can speak for all of my friends here when i say that Pinkie Pie is one of, if not, The loudest people/ponies we've ever know and meet,...
Pinkie: Aaawww, Thanks Rainbow.
Rainbow: ....But seriously, how'd he do that?
Applejack: Yeah, ah mean, how in zap apples did you make Pinkie sound so quiet out thar?
Sci-Twi: Wait for iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit,......
Sci-Twi: BOOM!
Pinkie: Goes the dynamite and mic drop!
Rainbow: And this is the part where the freelance detectives and us say,......sing it with me now, girls!.....3..2..1..
The Rainbooms: Suck Iiiiiiiiit!
Flash: Suck on it, Miami Police Force!
Rainbow: Suck It long.....and suck it hard.
Sour: (Sweetly) that was beautiful.
(sour) Do you kiss you mother with that mouth....
Sci-Twi: PD left that note!
Applejack: That means he's alive and was here!
Flash: But now we got a bigger problem.....where the heck is he being held now?
Pinkie: I guess we will find out in the next scene!
Next>>>
As if we didn't have a lot on my plate, now my team has to solve a murder mystery, find Snowflake and Phantom Dragon, keep the theater under control, and try and stop-you-know who from climbing buildings with suction cups.
Garble: " Oh no he didn't. "
Gabby: "Oh yes he did. "
All: "WHAT!!"
Sweetie Belle: " Eww!"
Princess Luna: " How rude!
I looked at the screen laughing at investigation skills of Ace the I almost failed to see something. Something only Phantom would notice.
Myself:" What's that?"
Silverstream: " What's what?
I pulled out my wand and waved it around as I whispered an encantation. From this my wand lite up and a silver wolf appeared and touched the screen.
The screen revealed a strange box this is a message puzzle.
An ancient device that only magic and science can open.
Ocellus: "What was that? I never saw any student or teacher cast that spell in hogwarts."
I turned around and smiled clutching the box in my hand then I lowered myself to the young Changling.
Myself: " It is a powerful spell, one I am certain you six and maybe others ( I winked at the CMC ) will learn along with a special scare head hero in the future. Now I must get this to my colleagues, maybe we might find Phantom. "
As a turned and rush out the door all the audience were left shocked and amazed by my magic when Gallus broke the silence.
Gallus: " Does he mean Harry?"
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Mmmm-hmmm.
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Ponyville
This is the start of your commentary, right?
Remember to label your ranch at the top. And because it’s in another chapter, no <<Previous link at the top. Remember to put the Next>> link for the following commentary at the bottom.
I can already see a certain bunny getting along with Applejack.
Good spacing. You’re getting the hang of it.
But again, try to keep the texts and dialogues clean, in short “boxes,” and some punctuations in the right places.
Like this:
But otherwise, I’d give you points on the exchanges, the humors, and the storytelling.
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The dialogues still need spacing. But otherwise, looking good.
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Future G5
Where is it?
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Izzy Moonbow: (To the narrators) “How come?”
Future G5
Zipp Storm: “Tsk, tsk, tsk. Shoulda hit the gym more often.”
Pipp Petals: “I agree. And what better place livestream my cardio workout for my PippSqueaks?” (Zipp rolled her eyes in response)
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Pipp Petals: “A simple ‘no’ would’ve sufficed, thank you!”
Future G5
Pipp Petals: “Hey! I like the way you think, Rarity!”
Future G5
Zipp Storm: (Sarcasm) “…Even a blind old pony can see through that paper thin disguise…”
Future G5
Sheriff Hitch: “Nobody says detective work is easy.”
Sunny Starscout: (To Hitch) “Speaking from experience?”
Future G5
Zipp Storm: “…That guy’s lighter than he looks!”
Sunny Starscout: (To Zipp) “As Twilight would say, never judge a book by its cover.”
Future G5
Audience: “Ooh!”
Izzy Moonbow: “He’s gonna feel that in the morning.”
Future G5
Alphabittle: “She’s not serious, is she?”
Pipp Petals: (To Alphabittle) “This from the unicorn who got beaten by an average-size pony at dance battle?”
Future G5
Sunny Starscout: “Oh no he didn’t!”
Future G5
Audience: 😱
*Kabuki Yooooooo SFX*
Future G5
[uSprout: “…Mother!”
Next>>
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Phyllis: “GOODNESS!”
Queen Haven: “Have you lost your mind?!”
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Sunny Starscout: “That’s not a good idea.”
Future G5
Sheriff Hitch: “Well, there’s jail time for a 180 days for aggressive driving and a fine for 100,000 bits.”
Future G5
Izzy Moonbow: “Remember boys and girls. Drive safely, not dangerous.”
Future G5
Sunny Starscout: “NOPE!” (Covers her eyes, with the rest of the girls joining)
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Anticipating a beat down, Hitch covers Sparky’s eyes.
Future G5
Zipp Storm: “More like wasting valuable times and efforts.”
Future G5
Zipp Storm: “No duh. Every single members on the Dolphin Team have their rings intact.”
Sunny Starscout: (To Kathmlp) “Again, how did they find Phantom-Dragon?”
Future G5
Izzy Moonbow: “Gee, no need for the cold shoulders…”
Future G5
Audience: “Fans?”
Future G5
Sheriff Hitch: “Wow, I’m one for working with critters, but that’s commitment!”
Future G5
Izzy Moonbow: “Them’s fightin’ words!”
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Zipp Storm: (To Ace) “And your suit sucks!”
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Izzy Moonbow: “And finding their friend, who was wrongfully pushed into the magic TV!”
Future G5
Izzy Moonbow: (To Sunny) “Mayday, mayday, that’s a code sign for a red alert! Which means trouble…”
Future G5
Audience: “WHAT?!”
Future G5
Izzy Moonbow: “FIFTEEN STORY?!”
Zipp Storm: “No earth ponies, unicorns, or any land based animals could survive a drop from that height!”
Future G5
Izzy Moonbow: (To Sunny) “What’s going to happen now, Sunny?”
Sunny Starscout: (To Izzy) “Let’s wait and see.”
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Sunny Starscout: “Still, he’s got to have a good reason to just do himself in. No pony, or any creatures in their right mind would just up and rub themselves out. Would they?”
Future G5
Zipp Storm: (Taking notes like a professional detective would) “So Roger was heard screaming behind the locked door. So the manager had to be called to open his door. And the balcony door was closed when they walked in.”
Future G5
Izzy Moonbow: “Huh, what do you know? Double panes glass soundproof door!”
Future G5
Pipp Petals: “Aw, the poor dear!”
Zipp Storm: “Well, Cloudpuff would feel the same if something happened to us and mom.” (Cloudpuff barked in agreement)
Future G5
Joining the dog in the movie, Cloudpuff was also barking angrily at Einhorn, with Sparky crying.
Sheriff Hitch: (Comforting Sparky) “Oh, it’s okay, Sparky. It’s alright. Daddy’s here!”
Zipp Storm: (To Cloudpuff) “Cloudpuff! Shhh!”
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Sheriff Hitch: “Preach it, Ventura.” (Seagulls and crab share their agreement)
Future G5
Zipp Storm: “Gee, no need to shout. Some of us can hear you from another world…”
Sunny Starscout: (To Zipp) “And in the future.”
Future G5
Izzy Moonbow: “Ooh! Loopholes.”
Future G5
Zipp Storm: “Huh, a note!”
Sunny Starscout: “But what does it say?”
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Zipp Storm: “Really? And how long have you came up with that theory?”
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Zipp Storm: “…I can’t believe I’m saying this, but she’s right…”
Future G5
Izzy Moonbow: (Dressed like Phoenix Wright) “TAKE THAT!”
Future G5
Izzy Moonbow: “WHAT?! Aw, darn it.”
Future G5
Zipp Storm: “That’s it? He’s giving up?”
Izzy Moonbow: “Wait for it…”
Future G5
Zipp Storm: “I’m afraid I’m not following.”
Future G5
Pipp Petals: “Wow, he’s got a nice set of pipes. But what’s he getting at?”
Everyone all pondered at the same question, until finally, they were struck with emphasis.
Future G5
Pegasus guard: “By Faust! I think he’s got it!”
Future G5
Izzy Moonbow: “OH! Burned! Hot…” (Touches herself on the flank) “…ssssss!”
Future G5
Izzy Moonbow: (At Einhorn) “Big bubbly baby!” (Mocks crying)