Spike, an average teenage boy is accepted to Wonder Colts Academy, and finds out he's actually a Dragon Prince. The Draconian line specifically. And all while being like a game character.
As soon as Spike finished reading it, it started to glow brighter until it combusted in his hands, turning to ash, which left him freaking out for a minute.
How do these work? I mean, what if it combusted before it was opened? Couldn't that burn down a building? What if it combusted before its recipient was done reading it?
"Mom.... This is the best present you've ever gotten me. I'll look like royalty if I wear it to Colledge!", Spike exclaimed, and his mother giggled.
College
His mother sat their with her jaw dropped, having seen it was true, was still freaking out in her mind. Spike seeing this thought maybe it wasn't such a good idea to show his Mom, even though he knew having someone to confide about it would help massively, he didn't exactly have a 'Seonil' around all the time, the only one that fit the bill was called Discord, but he hasn't seen him in three years.
What's a Seonil?
Overall, the pacing seems a bit rushed (but learning how to get that right takes time), and there are a few mistakes and questions, but other than that, this chapter's good!
This was a awesomely fun and chill chapter I'm officially hooked/hyped to see where this will go.
How do these work? I mean, what if it combusted before it was opened? Couldn't that burn down a building? What if it combusted before its recipient was done reading it?
College
What's a Seonil?
Overall, the pacing seems a bit rushed (but learning how to get that right takes time), and there are a few mistakes and questions, but other than that, this chapter's good!
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Seonil is a character from the Actual Gamer book who was the main characters best friend. And yeah I misspelled things a lot