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I think you skipped posting a chapter. Good story though so far.
I dont know about the opoosite of 'hotdog down a hallway' but i have always said "she'd be split like lumber"
Also i like the phrase 'like a bb in a battleship'
Yeah apparently it didn't publish chapter three. It's up now dough.
While this is awarded but a interesting beginning I can't wait to see where this goes.
Ok this has me hooked to see where this goes.
This was a wild one even if I don't ship them and I mite be a little anti ship AJ and Rarity ,I'm willing to go a little more.
Ok that happened.
Ok, so, are they anthro or full pony? And this is an awesome story. And I do love how it brings to light something a lot of couple gave to go through. Sex therapy isnt something most people would talk about so I do like that you brought that to light with this story.
-girly gasp- -claps hooves together- Finally after all these months of scribbling. Somepony says something nice about my story! -manly throat clearing- But yes they are full pony. And putting my hoof in my mouth here, but the sex therapist angle is the thinnest veiled pretext to move the story of fitting a giant cock into a tiny hole along. Thank you for reading! More soon to cum.
Well, nice to know the resort staff are all having a nice week
Oooho boiyo just you wait till the last day of their stay.
I like stories that give a pronounced focus to a big dick. In fact, my first clop stories (aside from my very first) has a lingering focus on the size of the male endowments, a trend I continue to do until this very day in fact. My only suggestion is that, because people do judge by the cover, is to tidy up the chapter titles and the long description. I.E.
I'd also perhaps use tags to help let readers know what fetishes are within the story below a line break. For an example of what this looks like, check here. I'll keep reading this story regardless. Big fan of large endowments so you've basically already satisfied my niche.
Good Lord I've Mr Garrisoned myself. Well nothing I can do about it now. As for the long description, I unfortunately write as I speak, and that includes the "let's use the word". Thank you for the helpful critiques! Gibs! Gibs more of dat!
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Well, for one, you might want to actually reply to someone when you address what they say 😅
For other critiques, I'm actually rather baffled. Your grammar is pretty much impeccable. It's just so odd to me that the innards of your work are top-notch but the presentation of it on the outside could be improved. Using 'stream of consciousness' is good and fine for the actual content but I'd probably put a smidge of work into outlining the fetishes of the story via simple use of tags I.e. TAGS: Big Penis, anal, etcetera. Adding the story to groups will help its visibility if you want more people to know it exists. I'd also tidy up the chapter names. Some are capitalised, others aren't. Right now, you're like a master chef whose food tastes really good but people are reluctant to eat because it's not the best looking.
"OH HARDER DADDY!" But seriously, I'm TERRIBLE with names, and again putting my hoof in my mouth here buuuuut. I'm only writing this story because the story amuses me. I'm not writing a clopfic for the sake of clop. But it's a story that revolves around sex so there's no reason not to just write clop with it.
to answer the question you put forth in the snipit for the search panel thumnail
the oposite of a hotdog down a hallway is a midevile battering ram being shoved into a garden hose.
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One I heard is "Cadillac in a doghouse"
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that one has as much to do with the peddegree of the partisipants as the size
a cadalac was once the car of choice for the upper middle class of America.
the phrase in this case implies a tryst or afair, a well to do white colar male beding with...well...a bitch.
German accents are best for giving sex and relationship tips.
And also teaching puppets to read.
What's the opposite of throwing a hot dog down a hallway?
My guess would be trying to drive a grayhound bus through a garden hose😂😂
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Damn. . . That's the best I've heard so far
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OOOOH THAT'S how the reply function works. Thank you!
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It just refers to size on Urban Dictionary and when Jeff Foxworthy talks about Astroglide.
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I am confused. . . And aroused. . . And I'm not comfortable with this fact.
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I'm fashionably pregnant
Who's the daddy
Um me? It's a dragon thing
That's biologically impossible !
Dragon Lord Ember & Smolder said Dragons can get rocks pregnant, It's a dragon thing
I just told him to plow her field
My boutique is growing too as I'm having Hexitruplets , It's a dragon thing
eggs or foals... we wont know till later It's a dragon thing
How'd this happen?
IT'S HIS DRAGON THING!
What they said...
So much no...
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Aircraft carrier in a bathtub?
Has anyone ever shipped Big Mac with Cheese Sandwich?
Just a thought.
I hope Throb-chan reconciles with Rarity and goes on to find a true special some
ponycreature of her own.Maybe sequels with her teaming up with Cadance or being recruited to teach sex ed at the School of Friendship. This character has so much potential.
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I here and now give you full permission to steal and use this character for any fic you would like to write. I'm only writing the rest of the story for the sake of the Applejack scenes. They amuse me so.
Okaaaaaay..... now it got weird.
FROM
MUH STACKS OF PAPERS
SO MUCH NO... And I'm not paying for the door!
TO
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It's pony porn. It started weird.
I have to say, this story is far better then I was expecting ! Sure, the beginning has some issues, some weird pacing. But the development is great, the couple is lovely, and it´s good to see a clop story a little more realistic. Not every woman is a size queen...quite different...size sometimes leads to pain. It´s nice to see someone breaking the size cliche, for once.
Still reading but, so far, thank you. And have a follower.
Poor Throb. A nympho whose job is to enhance the sex life of others, and yet she sees herself as damned to never have someone consistently there to relieve her built up tension of the job at the end of the day. Sex therapy for her must be like a day's walk in the rainforest. When all is said and done, she's hot, muggy, and thirsty as shit.
Starlight Glimmer had to be banished with all the non-con shit the O.C. did, contractual consent is the worst consent. Most of the story was fine. I will leave the up vote but that seems like a hypothetical stance to take.
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I think I understand the gist of your comment but I'm not quite certain. Please elaborate.
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Consent requires understanding, at what point did they understand the contract? So the therapist has dubious consent at best and fucks her patients, this is juxtaposed with Starlight and Starlight is the unredeemable one. All of this when Starlight had no real significance to the plot, and was a throwaway gag.
..... Sadly I had a difficult time enjoying the story. It was written pretty good but..... I was too curious about what Starlight did.
oh fuck...why are the chaos lords here?
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Because Equestria is clearly a death world.
And where is Grandfather Nurgle in all this?
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Oh don'tchu worry boyo
The plague father will make his debut.
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What about Malice/Malal, Cegorach, Gork-n-Mork, Ynnead, the Star Child and the Omnisiah?
And 11 months later, their foal is born.
And rhus somewhere deep in the depths of the warp Rut, the pony chaos god of clop awakens, capable of committing such great acts of perversion to make Slaanesh blush and makes Commorragh look like a kindergarten playground.
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To quote the wisdom of Decius: "He doesn't exist! Shut up about it!"
Good story keep up the good work.
And I give this a 10 of 15